2020高考书面表达之感谢信

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习作修改
I was tired of a warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have a the
chance to go to college. Thanks for your encourage, I wish more and encouragement
more of your student could go to their ideal colleges. students
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
习作修改
1. exciting →excited因为主语是人，故用excited。 2. 去掉dreamed about后的it因为which在该定语从句中充当宾语，故about后 无须再接it。 3. which →when因为在该定语从句(you taught me English)中的成分已完整， 故只能用关系副词引导，故用when。 4. have →has主语是第三人称单数，故用has。 5. 在because后加of后面是名词短语，故要加of。 6. many →much因为homework是不可数名词，故要用much修饰。 7. makes →made根据前面的时间状语at one time(曾经一度)可知此处要用过 去时。 8. warning前的a → the此处是特指。 9. encourage →encouragement形容词性物主代词后接名词。 10. student →students根据前面的more and more和后面的their可知要用复数。
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14. 对某人有耐心
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15. 宽容的和大方的
t_o_l_e_r_a_n__t _a_n_d__g_e_n__e_r_o_u_s______
套用句式
非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物。 1. Thank you very much for the gift you sent me.
2. 我写这封信是为了表达我对你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。 2. I am writing to express my thanks for (your) helping me improve my spoken English.
8. 我谨代表我全家，我想……
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高考系列讲座之书面表达
高考书面表达之感谢信
文体概述
感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、 慰问、祝贺时，给对方道谢的信件。感谢信应写得真诚、具体、及时。
通常包括以下内容：感谢的原因→对方给予的帮助或礼物→对方的作用 和对自己的意义→给出细节→再次致谢。
常用表达
1. 非常感谢…… T_h_a_n__k_y__o_u__v_e_r_y__m__u_c_h for…
5. 我谨借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时支持和帮助。
5. I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.
习作修改
Dear Mr. Li,
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! Yours, Li Hua
课外作业
假定你是李华，去年是一名交换生(exchange student)去美国学习， 得到布朗一家的照顾，回国后写一封感谢信给布朗夫妇，要点如下： 1. 感谢生活上的关心，克服了思乡病。 2. 感谢学习上的帮助，口语进步很大。 3. 欢迎到中国做客。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
I’m very exciting to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a excited
freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreamed about it. Mr.
Li, I still remember the days which you taught me English. My English when
课外作业
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown, How are things going with you recently? Thank you so much for
giving me a chance to live in your family while I was an exchange student in America! That was such a hard time for me, but your kindness and warm heart did let me overcome my homesickness. Besides, you tutored me in my spoken English in daily life. With your help, I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the English Speaking Competition of the city. My achievement is owed to your help. If there is a chance, welcome to China, I am looking forward to your coming.
All the best. Yours, Li Hua
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3. 你太好了，假期照顾我弟弟。 3. It was really kind of you to take care of my brother in the holiday.
4. 请再次接受我诚挚的谢意。 4. Please accept my sincere appreciation again.
课堂练习
假定你是李华，现在是华南师范大学(South China Normal University)大一新生你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大， 为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下： 1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。 2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。 3. 对老师表示祝福。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
课堂练习
Dear Mr. Wang, Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my
English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement. Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
常用表达
11. 在某人的帮助下
w__it_h__o_n__e_’s__h_e_l_p__/_w__ith the help of sb.
12. 由于你的鼓励
t_h_a__n_k_s__t_o_/d__u_e__to__/b_e_cause of your encouragement
13. 无私的奉献
2. 写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意
I__a_m__w__r_i_t_in__g_t_o__e_x_p_r_ess my thanks for… 3. 请接受我诚挚的谢意…… _P_l_e_a_s_e_a__c_c_e_p_t_m__y__s_i_ncere appreciation for… 4. 我真的很感激你…… _I_a_m___t_r_u_l_y_g__r_a_t_e_fu__l_to you for… 5. 你真好…… _I_t_w__a_s_r_e_a_l_l_y_k__in__d__o_f_y_o_u__t_o_…_____ 6. 我真诚地感激…… I__s_in__c_e_r_e_ly__a_p__p_r_e_c_i_a_t_e… 7. 我想表达我对……的谢意 __I_w__is_h__t_o__e_x_p_r_e_s_s__m__y appreciation for…