高考英语记叙文写作 PPT

be frightened /run away
The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.
The driver was so frightened that he ran away.
see the accident /remember the
number /call the police /be caught
Correct any mistakes
Then I rruann out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I mmisissesd it. I was very unhappy because I kknnoeww my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. So I ran three miles to the school. But when I arrived there in the end, I fofuinndd that it was Sunday
A woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.
3. Writing a passage
Passage 1
Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the accident. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.
Park.；At an ice-cream stand 年轻妇女的包被抢 snatch her handbag away 人们追赶抢包者 run after the snatcher 在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人 There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby
Sample 1
根据下 列图画中 Tom 骑自 行车的经 历，用英 语写一篇 故事。
短文要写 得连贯、 完整。
1. Go over the requirement
1. topic : A story （a traffic accident) 2. Tense( generally): past tense 3. Person: Tom , he
包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒 4．事件的结果 两名警察逮捕抢劫者： 5．扣题 妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智
审题
1.体裁： 记叙文体 2.时态：一般过去时 3.人称： 第三人称 4.主题： 描述过去个人经历
提纲
星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊 One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan
2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
Tom /ride a bike
Along the street/road
A few days ago/ the other day/ one day
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writing a picture story
假定你是TOM,请根据下面的图画内 容写一篇日记.
1. Go over the requirement
1. Style : A diary 2. Tense( generally): past tense 3. Person: I
Correct any mistakes
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
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2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
A car / run fast to/run into him
Tom/ fall off his bike
Suddenly
2. Go over the pictures
3. sb. did … and …
4.see /hear sb. Doing 5. with the helng, many people went to Zhongshan Park.
As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away.
The police
The driver/ catch
Key words
ride a bike /run fast to
sentences
When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.
hit him /fall off his bike
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
The driver/ frightened/ run away
2. Go over the pictures
（who, what, where, when, why, how)
A woman/ remember the number of the car
Passage 2
The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.
从老人身旁跑过
Run past the old man 拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；
pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher;
摔一大跟斗
fall down on the ground heavily
Summary : How to write a picture story?
Go over the requirement （person, tense, style）
•Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)
•Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific
passage 2
The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.
②短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单 词不计入总词数）；
③参考词汇：货摊stand (n.) ; 抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)
1．点题（时间、地点） 星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁 2．事件的起因 年轻妇女的包被抢 3．事件的发展/过程 人们追赶抢包者 ；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢
information. )
基本篇章结构
① 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） ② 事件的起因 ③ 事件的发展/过程 ④ 事件的结果 ⑤ 扣题
2004年辽宁
下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公 园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信 息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。