届高考读后续写练习5篇
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读后续写
一、考纲解读
提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
二、原题分析
①原文材料350词以内,所续写文章150词左右。
②原文多是情节丰富的记叙文,偶有少量的议论文。
③原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语,所续写短文应使用5个以上。
④续写部分分为两段
..,每段开头语已经给出。
⑤续写部分分为两大类别:
1)半开放性质。必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。
2)完全开放性质。可以依据文章的思路,自己发挥。
三、注意事项
①词数要求。②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。
④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。⑤上下文的连贯性。
四、评分原则
①本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
②评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
③词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。
④评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;
(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
⑥如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。
续写导练(一)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
When I was eleven years old, I had a big accident. I get scared even now when I think about that time. I went skating near my house. There were many people, and I saw some of them falling on the ice.
It was my first time to go ice skating, so I was nervous. I was wondering how to skate.
I went with a friend who was very skillful. He spent some time teaching me how to skate,but
the other people because they could skate well.
I was bored because I kept falling so I took off my skates and just walked around on the
ice in my shoes. It was cold and my hands were frozen.
Suddenly, I stepped on something that was not hard. What was it It was a weak place in the
ice. When I stepped there, I sank under the ice. I thought that I was going to die, but I did
my best to grab something to get out from under the ice. I tried to grab the edge of the ice,
but it was very difficult for an eleven-year-old.
It seemed like a very long time, like a year. Then, fortunately, someone helped me. He grabbed
my arms and pulled me up. So, I lived and I’m still alive today.
I thanked him. At that time, my friend came back. I was annoyed at him because he was supposed
to take care of me, but he didn’t. He wa s embarrassed. When I took a taxi home, the taxi driver
was surprised and asked what had happened. I didn’t want to say anything because I was tired
and scared. Even now, whenever I think about that time, I feel uncomfortable. I don’t want to
go skating again even now.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
It was long before I went skating once again, ______________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
However, ever since then I haven’t found any time to go skating,
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