【名师指津】2012高考英语_写作基础技能步步高12_句子润色：用高级结构让句子靓起来课件

A group of students from Guangzhou plan to hold the first National Middle School Students’ Spring Festival Show. With its theme “It’s Our Turn”, the three-hour show will be held on Jan. 15th.
2. We can live a happy life only by this means.(倒装 倒装) 倒装 2. Only by this means can we live a happy life.
3. He fell asleep. The lights were still on. (with结构 结构) 结构 3. He fell asleep with the lights on.
1. 介绍概括：同位语短语、非谓语动词 介绍概括：同位语短语、 结构，使文章简洁、 结构，使文章简洁、明了 (1) Yao Ming, a world-famous basketball player, is now owning a huge corporation. (2) Born in Maryland, USA in 1985, Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.
The performances, all organized, directed and performed by the students themselves, will combine traditional styles with more modern ones that students today are greatly interested in, such as street dancing and B-Box.
6. 使用with的复合结构。如： 的复合结构。 With the noise going on, I couldn’t go on studying. 由于那噪音的持续 我无法继续学 由于那噪音的持续,
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7. 使用逗号隔开的定语从句来指代前一 句的内容或者使用 … , 名/代/数 + of + 代数 which/whom 这种形式的定语从句 。 The students had no time to take exercise, which affected our physical health.
8. He worked very hard. He made great progress in his study.(改为 改为 复合句) 复合句 8. He worked so hard that he made great progress in his study.
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9. He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again. (what引导的主语从句 引导的主语从句) 引导的主语从句 9. What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again.
5. 使用倒装句。 Only + 状语 放句首 后部分倒装 Only in this way can we learn English well. 只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。 只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。
Not only…, but also … 的倒装 Not until… 放句首，后面部分倒装 放句首，
Through the activity, a good chance will be given for middle school students to show their talent to the world. Moreover, it will also be a great chance for the audiences to learn more about Ling Nan culture.
6. They were faced with many problems. They didn’t lose heart.(非谓语动词 非谓语动词) 非谓语动词 6. Faced with many problems, they didn’t lose heart． ． 7. It was getting dark. And it began to rain.(过渡语 过渡语) 过渡语 7. It was getting dark. What was worse, it began to rain.
10. 五句话中间使用一两个过渡语。如 五句话中间使用一两个过渡语。 表示递进的furthermore, besides, worse 表示递进的 still, what’s more, most importantly… 表归纳的to 表归纳的 sum up, in short… 转折. 转折 However, on the other hand,…
4. 使用强调句。 使用强调句。 用do, does, did强调一般时态的谓语动 强调一般时态的谓语动 词; 用it is ...that ...强调谓语之外的各 强调谓语之外的各 种句子成分。 种句子成分。
It was in this meaningful activities that we benefit a lot.
Last week, we recruited plenty of new members, 30% of whom were high school students.
8. “数词 名词”改用“as many as+数词 数词+名词 数词 名词”改用“ 数词 +名词”。 名词” 名词
A great number of buildings were destroyed, leaving as many as 10, 000, 000 people homeless. 请多房屋被摧毁 请多房屋被摧毁,
使多达千万的人失去家园。 使多达千万的人失去家园。
9. 使用what引导的主语从句。
What surprised me greatly was to find she was such a fine swimmer.
使我大为吃惊的是, 使我大为吃惊的是 我发现她竟是一 位优秀的游泳选手。 位优秀的游泳选手。
11. 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their idols.(强调数字 强调数字) 强调数字 11. As many as 50% of the students surveyed choose super stars as their idols.
2. 使用非谓语动词作状语的结构。 如 Done/Doing/To do…, 主 + 谓 + 宾 主, doing/done/to do… , + 谓 + 宾 3. 恰当使用被动句。 Above all, something must be done to stop polluting. 最重要的是 必须釆取某些 最重要的是, 措施来阻止污染。
即时练习 使用上述润色技巧, 合并或改写下列句子。 使用上述润色技巧 合并或改写下列句子。 1. I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(强调 强调 句) 1. It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English.
4. When I heard that, I was much moved.(非谓语动词 非谓语动词) 非谓语动词 4. Hearing that, I was much moved. 5. They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态 被动语态) 被动语态 5. A survey was carried out among 260 students.