高考英语作文高分策略

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Chapter 2 Golden Pinciples of NMET Writing
高考英语书面表达高分六大黄金原则
• • • • • • 高级词汇原则（Diction） 精彩语法原则(Grammar) 力求多变原则(Variety) 段落结构原则(Structure) 卷面清爽原则(Neatness) 连词润滑原则(Conjunction)
高级词汇原则（Diction）
所谓高级词汇，并不是说长的，电子词典 中查出来的不知道用法的单词，而是指能
够恰当表达思想，高中阶段学到的重点词 汇。因为这些词汇可以反映出你对高考所
要求的词汇的掌握情况。
精彩语法原则(Grammar)
高中阶段，我们基本上将所有的语法都学 习完毕了。而对这些语法的灵活运用，可 以为你的书面表达增色不少。非谓语动词， 从句，虚拟，省略，倒装，强调都是我们 应该重点掌握的语法。
卷面清爽原则(Neatness)
清爽整洁的卷面会让人脸前一亮，无形中增 加你的分数。所以下笔前要有提纲！写作 过程中如果偶有拼写错误，只能用笔在上 面轻轻的划道斜线 但是要注意不要影响到 卷面的清洁度
连词润滑原则(Conjunctions)
TV and website TV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money from ads. Websites also have different sections. You may choose the one you are most interested in. They are different in many ways. Moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation. It makes you feel that you are just on the spot. The programs change every day. Professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Some information on websites change all the time. Not all of it is so updated. Everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporter. Every medium has its own features. It is hard to say which is better.
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it. Thank you!
假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你 针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象， 写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。 演讲稿的主要内容应包括： 1.认为同学们不必为此苦恼； 2.希望能够体谅父母的苦衷； 3.建议与父母进行交流和沟通。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Good morning, ladies and gentleman. Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries.
反对漫无目的的盲目写作，注意在平时学习中总结 常用的地道的表达方法，多做翻译练习和句型转换 练习。范文是我们写作制胜的法宝，对于范文的学 习我们可以采取以下方法
范文学习的六个步骤
读透 造句 朗读 背熟 回译 运用
假设你是李华，针对最近出现的多次校车事故，你学校开展创 建“平安校园”活动，团委将组织主题演讲比赛，你打算参加， 请你写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想 法。 短文内容应包括以下要点： ▲增强安全意识的重要性 ▲在不同场合均要注意安全（如在交通中、在运动中、在同学 间发生矛盾时等） ▲将活动转化成全体师生的实际行动。 注意： 1. 词数120左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数 My dear classmates, Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on________________
Chapter 1 An Overview to NMET Writing
第五档次（很好）：（21-25分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 -覆盖所有内容要点。 -应用较多的语法结构和词汇。 -语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇 所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 -有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使 全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
试翻译：
只有这样下岗工人才能彻底摆脱贫困并且 重新获得他们生命中的尊严。
Only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.
总而言之，只有长期学习才有助于你掌握 大的词汇量。
In conclusion, it is persistent work that is beneficial to your grasping a large/considerable vocabulary.
考虑到上述所有论证，政府早就该实行改革 把传统教育模式转变为素质教育。
Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced reforms to convert traditional education strategy into education for allround development/quality-oriented education. Once in front of me lay a real chance. Yet, I did not value it. Not until the moment I lost it did I realize how regretful I was. If God gave me another opportunity, I would never stop making progress.
力求多变原则(Variety)
无论是词汇还是语法，都不能一个动词用到底，而要多变。 变化才是硬道理。 1） I hold the opinion that, As far as I am concerned, cling to the idea, in my opinion/view, point out, maintain, hold, claim, emphasize, insist, suppose, assume 2） proper attention has to be paid to, Importance should be attached to, be of great importance/significance vital, essential, crucial, significant 3）people in growing/expanding/increasing numbers 4）for the purpose of, aim to/at
TV and website
Both TV and website are popular media. They have something in common. Both of them make money from ads. Similar to TV, websites also have different sections, so that you may choose the one you are most interested in. However, they are different in many ways. Above all, moving pictures are shown on TV with sound and interpretation, which makes you feel as if you are just on the spot. Then, the programs change every day and professional TV reporters do the report for TV. Unlike TV, some information on websites change all the time, but not all of it is so updated. In addition, everybody can write articles for websites rather than professional reporter. In a word, every medium has its own features, so it is hard to say which is better.
段落结构原则(Structure)
• • • • • • • • • • • • • 高考英语书面表达中，从篇章结构到段落结构，要始终牢记“总分总”的原 则。一般采用“三段论”的方式。 第一段（head）： 引入话题，现象，问题等 第一句: 主题句，提出问题并通过问题点 明全文主体； 第二句: 扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。 注：也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。 第二段（body）： 分析原因，影响等 第一句: 主题句，提出本段的主题要点，应与第一段的主体相一致。 第二句至第六句:扩展句用以阐述内容，说明和支持本段的主体。句与 句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅 第三段（foot）： 总结，提出解决方法，提出自己的看法 (两三句) 本段首句最好用英语成语或谚语，与所写作文主题相吻合，此乃画 龙点睛之笔，也是对全文文意的总结或概括，最后附之自己的观点。 三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。