高考英语话题写作必备核心单词短语句式及范文 第1课时 [专项增分训练]

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请适当增加细节，以使下面的作文丰满起来

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[题目要求]

(2018·福州市质检)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(Confucius Institute)学习。你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

[考生作文]

Dear Lucy，

I'm pleased to learn you've just won the first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute.I'm writing to offer my congratulations to you.I know you love Chinese culture, and now you're studying in a local Confucius Institute.I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study.

Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.

Yours，

Li Hua [我来丰富]请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式

参考范文：

Dear Lucy，

I'm pleased to learn you've just won the first prize in the Chinese poetry competition held in your institute.I'm writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.It came as no surprise to me because I know you love Chinese culture, especially Chinese poetry, and you've been studying in a local Confucius Institute for years.I'm so proud to see all your efforts have paid off.I hope you can have a chance to come to China for further study in the near future and have a better understanding of my country.

Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese poetry.

Yours，

Li Hua

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[题目要求]

(2018·河北省“五个一名校联盟”质检)假如你是班长李华，明年即将毕业。最近发现班里的一些同学为了提高成绩经常熬夜，并且不注意饮食。针对这些现象，请你给某英语报社写信投稿说明以上情况，并谈谈自己的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Editor，

Yours，

Li Hua [考生作文]

Dear Editor，

I am a high school student who will graduate next year.Recently I have found that some students in our class study harder than before.They often stay up late studying, and pay no attention to their diet, which does harm to their health.

In my opinion, though we are under the heavy pressure of study, we should try to eat properly and get enough rest.Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.

Yours，

Li Hua [我来丰富]请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式

参考范文：

Dear Editor，

I am a high school student who will graduate next year.As a student in Senior Three, I have found that almost all of the students in our class study harder than before.Some even study late into the night, eating snacks and drinking Coca-Cola, which is bad for their health.In the morning, due to staying up late, some students have to go to school hurriedly

without breakfast, which surely does harm to their health.

In my opinion, though we are under the heavy pressure of study, we are supposed to eat properly and get as much rest as possible.Only in this way can we keep fit and study well.

Yours，

Li Hua