【新高考英语新题型】读后续写试题与范文
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jenny and Lisa are close friends. Theyre studying in high school now One day about half a year ago, Jenny went to Lisa's house after she finished her homework.
After entering Lisas home, Jenny found that Lisa was chatting on her cellphone. Jenny was surprised as she didnt know Lisa had gone downtown to buy a cellphone.
After Lisa finished talking over the cellphone Jenny asked her, "When did you get your cellphone?
"I bought it yesterday. Look! How lovely it looks! " said Lisa Jenny looked at the cellphone. It was pink and looked really lovely. Jenny wished she also could have such a cellphone That day, after Jenny came back home. she saw her father sitting on the sofa reading a newspaper Jenny approached him and said, "Dad, could I have a cellphone? Many of my classmates have their own cellphones now. “Of course, you can have one,” said Jenny's father.
Hearing that, Jenny became very happy “ Thank you,Dad,” Jenny said happily. Then she asked, When shall we go downtown to buy one? The father looked up hearing that. Then he said, Oh, no, dear! I'm not going to buy you a cell phone. If you really want one, you should make money to buy one yourself. Jenny immediately became upset. But she knew her father was serious. She walked away and went to her own room The following day, Jenny went to school as usual. When Lisa saw her at school. she looked a
bit upset. Lisa came to her and asked why she was wearing a long face that day. Jenny said," asked my dad to buy a cellphone for me, but he said I should work for one myself.
But Lisa didn’t seem to be surprised at all, and she said,"Don't get surprised, because that’s how I bought my own cellphone Hearing that, Jenny remembered Lisa once told her she was helping look after the Smiths one-year-old son in the past summer. Now she knew why she worked part-time that summer Lisa wanted a new cellphone and she worked to make money for it Paragraph 1
That day after Jenny came back home from school, she went to her father.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Jenny started to work part-time._______________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Paragraph 1:
That day after Jenny came back home from school, she went to her father. She was no longer upset. She told her father that she had decided to find a job to make money.
Good, " said her father. Jenny started to look for part-time work on the Internet. Lucky for her, some families in the neighborhood were looking for part-time workers. One old couple needed someone to cut the grass. A young couple needed someone to look after their baby.
Jenny called the families and she was offered the jobs
Paragraph 2
Jenny started to work part-time. First she cut the grass for the old couple. And then she looked after the baby for the young couple .She kept doing other part-time jobs. Three months later, Jenny had enough money for a cellphone. She went downtown. But she
didn't buy a cellphone. Instead, she bought a birthday gift for her father because it was
her father's birthday the following day.She thought the gift was very meaningful and her
father might be happy because she bought it with her own money.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The other day I was travelling to San Antonio by train to visit my sister. The train was a little crowded and there was a young man sitting next to the window. Since it was a hot day, I wanted that window seat more than anything else at that time As a young lady, I thought the young man would give me the seat if I asked him. So I smiled at him and asked whether he could give up his seat and take another one. To my surprise, he said that he needed that seat and refused my request. I had no choice but to take the seat next to him.
The train was crossing station after station .The weather was so hot that the scenery(风景) outside the window could not attract my interest I had nothing to do, so I started to focus my attention on the young man and stare at him up and down. He wore a blue shirt and there was a shawl(披巾) on his legs. He did not even rise from his seat once, which made me feel a little bit strange. Moreover, only a madman would use a shawl in such hot weather, I thought.
After the five-hour long journey, the train arrived at the final stop. I picked up my bag and stood up, waiting for the door to open. I gave a neglectful (不经意的) look at the young man and asked, “The train has arrived at the final station. Are you not getting off?" Hearing my words, he began to smile at me and said in a calm voice, "Someone has to come for me and take me off the train because I can’t do it by myself. "I gave my full attention to his legs, only to find the
there was nothing under that shawl!
Paragraph 1:
The man was a disabled person.___________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________
paragraph 2
After hearing his story ,I could not meet his eyes anymore._______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________
参考答案：Paragraph1:
The man was a disabled person. Both of his legs were gone. I couldn't believe what I saw and didn't know how to ease my embarrassment. Seeing the surprised expression on my face, the young man explained, “I lost both of my legs in a car accident three years ago. I' m a medical student and went to pay a visit to my parents and now I am returning to school. One of my classmates will come to pick me up.
Paragraph 2
After hearing his story, I could not meet his eyes anymore! I wished I could disappear
in front of him at that moment. I didn't get off the train until his classmate walked to his
seat and picked him up. How could I have such a strange idea about a person without
knowing him? I realized it's always necessary to understand the truth behind someone’s
words or actions. I have given up my wrong opinions about others without thinking since
then.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Alexis and Zoe were sitting at the kitchen table doing their homework. They had a hard time focusing on their homework because the radio station was playing music from their favourite band, the Shape Shifters .
“I can’t believe the Shifters are going to be playing here and we cant go! "Alexis said .
“I know, Zoe replied. "Tickets are sold out in five minutes and even if we can get some, they are so expensive!”
“It’s totally unfair,” said Alexis.
“ They should give the tickets to their biggest fans first! “ You mean us, right?” Zoe said . "Obviously, "said Alexis. Everyone knows we’ re their number one fans .”
Zoe turned the radio up a bit louder. Their favourite song was on, and the girls had an impromptu(即兴的) dance party right there in the kitchen. As it ended, they sat on their chairs again. The radio host started talking about the concert .
I have exciting news to share with all of you We will give away two tickets to Saturday's sold-out show and will look for the third caller who can correctly answer this question: who is the oldest member of the Shape Shifters? the host said Alexis and Zoe looked at each other. They couldn’t believe how easy the question was. "It's Georgie! "said Alexis "No, it's Na tasha, "answered Zoe “ Everyone knows Georgie is29.He’ s much older than the rest of the band, said Alexis .
"I know he's the oldest person, but the question is who's the oldest member of the band. "Natasha started the band when she was just 15. The others joined the group after her, "Zoe explained.
Alexis thought for a while and later agreed with Zoe. And they decided to call the radio station to answer that question. They stood together and held their breath Hello, girls, you are lucky caller Number 3 The girls screamed excitedly."Nobody seems to know the answer to our question. Do you? " the host continued.
Zoe said,“ We know the answer!”“I hope so. If you get it right, you'll have a chance to Saturdays sold-out show! "
Paragraph ph 1:
“Okay, I am ready to answer that question,” Zoe said breat hlessly .
_______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________
Paragraph 2 “Congratulations, girls! You've won two tickets to this concert!" the host shouted.
__________________________________________________________________
参考答案
Paragraph I
“Okay. I am ready to answer that question, ”Toe said breathlessly. “We think people don't understand the question. Georgie is the oldest person in the band, but your question Is which member is the oldest and that means who has been in the band the longest. So we think the answer is Natasha! " The girls waited and the kitchen clock ticked on, making each second slower. Were they wrong? Were they going to miss out on their only chance to see their favorite band? Paragraph 2
Congratulations, girls! You’ve won two tickets to this concert! "the host shouted. The girls screamed, dropping the telephone in their excitement. They picked it up quickly and could hear the host laughing on the other end.“ You must be big fans of the band.”“The biggest!"answered the girls, hugging each other happily. They thanked the radio station for providing them with these two tickets And the host said that they deserved them because they grasped the chance to pursue what they really cared for at the right time.
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Rain is pouring down today, which brings back sweet memories of our dog, Bambi. She joined our family at the age of four months. Like all puppies, she was full of energy and wonder. Our boys described excitedly that she looked just like the young deer, Bambi, in the movie they had watched recently. The name fitted her personality perfectly.
Bambi also had all the fine physical characteristics of the German Shepherd. She was strong, yet gentle and shy. We were a young family with two growing, energetic boys, so she fitted right in with our lifestyle. Bambi loved the boys. She would play with them until they were completely tired .
When Bambi was almost two years old, a full-grown dog, she became quite protective of us. She never failed to watch the boys. If any stranger entered our yard, she d watch him or her with sharp eyes and let out a low bark. Even though Bambi had this protective instinct(本能), she never hurt anyone. Nevertheless, she did manage to frighten(惊吓) away many welcome and unwelcome guests.
On one occasion, I had called a repairman to come to our home to fix the refrigerator. I was at work, and the boys were home with the babysitter I told the repairman by phone that we had a dog, but it would be safe to enter the house because the babysitter would be there to meet him. However when the repairman arrived, the babysitter and boys went outside. As he went close to our front door, Bambi was outside and she barked at him while she guarded the door. As long as the man attempted to move, Bambi would jump up and bark more fiercely(凶猛地)。This man had never seen such a fierce dog before and was frightened too much. He had no idea whether to go away or scream for help.
Paragraph 1: Luckily, the babysitter and boys returned from their walk at that time.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________
Paragraph 2 Though Bambi was so brae, there was a side to her personality that didn’t match her.____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________
参考答案
Paragraph 1 :Luckily, the babysitter and boys returned from their walk at that time. They rescued the poor frightened repairman from our guard dog. They told Bambi that it was okay to allow the man to enter our home But Bambi seemed still couldn't trust this stranger. While the repairman was busy in the kitchen, she kept a watchful eye on him, which made the man very nervous. When he finished his work, he was very glad to go back. This story is always mentioned whenever we talk about Bambi.
Paragraph 2:
Though Bambi was so brave, there was a side to her personality that didn't match her. She was terrified of thunder and lightning On any summer day when the sun disappeared behind the clouds. Bambi would race to the door and demand to stay inside. She seemed to have the ability to feel the e coming rain. Usually, she was correct because rain thunder and lightning would soon follow Though Bam
高中英语作文专题：读后续写亮点积累实用
续写亮点突破系列 一、主句，+ 简短状语（介词短语，分词，状语从句的省略，形容词，副词） 1.At last he came, with his hands in his pockets 2.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes. 3.With apparently unwilling affection, he nodded. 4.With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile. 5.When coming back, he still folded his arms with a little anger on his face. 6.With an impatient look, he listened to me reluctantly. 7.He was numb with shock, staring at me. 8.Then the next second his eyes were shining like diamonds, with a bright smile on his face. 9.Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon. 10.With tears in her eyes, he decided to help Desiree. 11.Touched deeply, he decided to tell a white lie. 12.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it … 13.Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile. 14.Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits. 15.He attempted to find the owner, but all in vain. 16.Her eyes began to water, with her stomach uncomfortably twisting. 17.Looking at each other, we smiled, hiding ourselves in the car and expecting his reaction to the gift. 18.Obviously confused at the sudden disorder around, Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. 19. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face. 20.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me surprised. 21.Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover. 22.He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling. 23.To our delight and relief, Tom recovered quickly. 二、形容词、副词的恰当使用 1.Cherish every single moment when you can stay with her. 2.I turned to him and said gently. 3.He looked at me with a broad smile. 4.I praised him sincerely. 5.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines 6. A thunderous applause burst out. 7.I’m firmly convinced that … 8.with a burning desire to win, he … 9.So excited was he that he held it tightly, rushing into the house. 10. 11. 12.
【专项练习】高中英语读后续写专项练习
【专项练习】高中英语读后续写专项练习 -CAL-FENGHAI.-(YICAI)-Company One1
高中英语读后续写专项练习 1.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I still remember it，like it was yesterday when my parents told me the news. It was the week before Christmas on Thursday morning when my parents said, “Stacy, start packing your things so we can go to Florida for the holidays.” “Okay, ”I responded.We do this every year for Christmas and New Year. It’s kind of a family tradition we have.We go every year because we like to visit some family members living in Florida.There has never been a year when we’ve missed a trip to Florida for the holidays. I was so excited to go on this trip because Christmas is my favorite holiday, but to top it off I was going to get to celebrate it with my family. The next morning，my mother entered my room.“Stacy, wake up！We need to go to the airport so that we can get our plane tickets to Florida before they sell out.” I jumped out of bed and got ready as fast as I could.When we were on our way to the airport，I couldn’t stop talking and smiling because I was too excited about getting our tickets. “Aren’t you just excited to go to Florida” I asked. “Yes, I am.We can finally catch up with the family and drink hot cocoa，”responded my moth er. The airport was so crowded. Some people were leaving to other countries and others were just visiting for the holiday. There was such a huge line in the airport because so many different people were buying plane tickets.
2017浙江英语高考新题型-读后续写6篇
一、读后续写（25分） A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village. On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer. 注意： 1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1: The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was lucky. A few days later,
高中英语作文：读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折,语言,词库
高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折,语言,词库 目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。这不，各种证据证明，未来作文会变成文章续写，即：给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。限制是:需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了，后面的高考就要采用这种形式。（孙三五） 这种改革给考生一种恐慌，为什么呢？因为从未写过这样的文章，而且续写听起来好高大上。但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。我给出的技巧是：内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。 一、何为内容上的两个转折 写记叙文，英汉是同理的。故事要有曲折即：twist。而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。曲折分：情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。 英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。 二、语言的运用 记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。常用的是：非谓语动词和倒装句。为什么呢？因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。 三、关于九个小词库 我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。仅挑选一小部分，省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词库，进行粗线条的概括。虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。我将它们分为九大类： 一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中： 二、如何表达同情和关心 三、如何表达轻松 四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情 五、如何表达胆小、害怕 六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬 七、如何表达悲伤
浙江英语高考读后续写
高考读后续写训练1. Name________________ It had been some time since Jack had seen the old man. College, career, and life itself got in the way. In fact, Jack moved clear across the country in pursuit (追寻) of the dreams. There, in the rush of his busy life, Jack had little time to think about the past and often no time to spend with his wife and son. He was working on his future, and nothing could stop him. Over the phone, his mother told him, “Mr. Belser died last night. The funeral（葬礼）is Wednesday.” Memories flashed（闪现）through his mind like an old newsreel (新闻短片) as he sat quietly remembering his childhood days. “Jack, did you hear me?” “Oh, sorry, Mom. Yes, I heard you. It’s been so long since I thought of him. I’m sorry, but I honestly thought he died years ago,” Jack said. “Well, he didn’t forget you. Every time I saw him he’d ask how you were doing. He’d reminisce (回忆) about the many days you spent over ‘his side of the fence’ as he put it, ” Mom told him. “I loved that old house he lived in,” Jack said. “You know, Jack, after your father died, Mr. Belser stepped in to make sure you had a man’s influence (影响) in your life,” she said. “He’s the one who taught me carpentry. I wouldn’t be in this business if it weren’t for him. He spent a lot of time teaching me things that he thought were important. Mom, I’ll be there for the funeral.” Jack said. Busy as he was, he kept his word. Jack caught the next flight to his hometown. Mr. Belser’s funeral was small and uneventful. He had no children of his own, and most of his relatives had passed away. The night before he had to return home, Jack and his Mom stopped by to see the old house next door one more time, which was exactly as he remembered. Every step held memories. Every picture, every piece of furniture … Jack stopped suddenly. “What’s wrong, Jack?” his Mom asked. “The box is gone,” he said. “What box?” Mom ask ed. “There was a small gold box that he kept locked on top of his desk. I must have asked him a thousand times what was inside. All he’d ever tell me was ‘the thing I value most’,” Jack said. It was gone. Everything about the house was exactly how Jack remembered it, except for the box. He figured someone from the Belser family had taken it. “Now I’ll never know what was so valuable to him,” Jack said sadly. 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高中英语作文积累-读后续写好词好句
读后续写好句积累（1） 1. She tried to hide her anger. 她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。 (hide your disappointment/anger...掩饰...) 2. She laughed to hide her nervousness. 她笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。 3. The treatment offers a ray of hope for cancer sufferers 这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。 (a ray of hope/light 一线希望/光明) 4. Rays of light filtered through the trees. 一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。(透过?f?lt?) 5. His statement was greeted with cries of astonishment and anger. 他的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。（be greeted with /by sth被报以...) 6. Complete silence greeted us as we entered the room. 走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。 7. I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived. 她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。(a rush of anger / excitement / gratitude...一阵...) 8. A rush of jealousy swept through(over) her.
她心中突然涌起一阵嫉妒。(妒忌?d?el?si) 9. The smoke hung in the air. 烟在空中缭绕。(mist/smoke/smell hangs in the air在空中缭绕) 10. A thick mist hung over the town. 小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。 读后续写好句积累（2） 11. Joe's been ill for weeks now - it's really dragging him down. 乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。(drag sb down 使人感到不愉快) 12. Forester stared at his car, trembling with rage. 福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。(trembling / shaking with rage 气得浑身发抖) 13. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital. 卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。 14. His face was red with rage. 他气得满脸通红。 15. The child was quivering(trembling) in her arms. 那孩子在她怀里发抖。 (抖动?kw?v?) 16. Her mouth quivered slightly as she turned away. 她嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。 17. I lay there quivering with fear.
高一英语读后续写
新题型写作 读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,”Arthur said. “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.” “Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.” “No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.” The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery! Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?”But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 ：
2017-2018浙江高考英语读后续写真题范文赏析
2016.9 浙江高考： One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away. With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom! "she cried. "Help!" No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语： 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
2021高中英语写作之读后续写习题1
一 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。续写的字数应为150字左右。 It was the lovely month of February, when everyone was sick of the snow, and spring still felt light years away. The cold air on windows during February, however, always did make for good pictures in the stream of my breath. Every year, we invite the children to our club to make cookies or chocolate at holiday times. The children are always excited to come back and have memorized the rules by now. We explain how to spoon the different-colored chocolates into the heart-shaped molds, and the kids jump right into the project, even the youngest ones, who are too short to reach the counter. On this day, there was a boy I was drawn to. He was ten, but his attitude told the story of a boy who had been hardened (使刚毅) by the world and all the trouble that he suffered from. His face looked much older than his age. I especially noticed the lollipop(棒棒糖)he was making. Most of the children had finished with their projects. There wasn’t m uch chocolate left. He took the remaining spoonfuls of all the different colors, which were so jumbled(混乱的)that a person could not see where one color started and the next ended. It seemed to him that all that mattered was that he was able to finish his chocolate. Two hours had passed and it was time for everyone to go. Each of the children was given a bag, and they all split the candy amongst themselves to take with them. The ten-year-old boy came back over to me after he had gotten his share of candy. He noticed my hands were empty. Why didn't you take any? "he asked “I wanted to make sure there was enough for everyone else, ”I said “Oh,” he replied, but I could see he didn’t really accept my answer. As everyone got ready to leave, I was occupied with my work and didn’t see the boy staring at me. I got a hug from each of the smiling children as they slipped out of the door. My ten-year-old friend was the last to go. By now, I had noticed the little tough guy looking at me. He came up to me again, this time slowly, looking around to make sure no one was watching. Paragraph 1 This is for you, " he said, as he handed me a piece of candy. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 I have been keeping that lollipop ever since _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
2021高考英语“读后续写”最新解读
2021高考英语“读后续写”最新解读 读后续写题型产生的背景 中央考试中心为进一步深化高考考试改革，拟定一两年内在全国高考英语试题卷取消“短文改错”题，故引进“读后续写” 这一测试题型。并于2016年率先在上海和浙江两地进行试点。 深化高考考试改革● 个性化同伴教学● ●全方位课程体系 ●互动性趣味课堂
目的：深化高考考试改革，逐渐摒弃语言测试中过多的人为设置语言障碍——“非正常语言测试模式”，将语言测试回归本源，达到真正能体现语言能力的测试目的与宗旨。 题型介绍 1.任务要求 提供一段350 词以内的语言材料，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写，将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150 词左右）。 2.考查目标
读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的综合性语言测试。教育部考试中心刘庆思、陈康老师于 2016 年指出，读后续写主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力： ①把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。 ②语言运用的准确性和丰富性。学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构，还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。 ③对语篇结构的把控能力。学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系，所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性，所续写的短文内语句要连贯、有序。 ④创造性思维能力。学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容，包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。
题型分析 1.题型设计方面 读后续写：一个围绕某一具体的主题语境，基于书面语篇记叙文连续性文本的文体形式，在根据语境线索理解语篇内容、分析语篇结构，并续写语篇内容的过程中，运用语言技能获取、梳理、整合语言知识，同时运用所学语言知识创造性地表达意义，并通过运用各种学习策略，提高理解和表达效果的题型。 2.阅卷要求方面 需考虑所续写的内容： （1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度； （2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况； （3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性； （4）上下文的连贯性。
2020高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写细节描写第一讲：描写forest, woods
2020高中英语新高考 读后续写细节描写第一讲：描写forest, woods 英语文学的描写在于细节，如此可以细分为物和人两大类别。就物而言，又分山川和建筑。 山川又可以细分为：forest, mountains, caves, islands and volcanoes, paths, rivers, sea。第一个章节我说forest，这也是鉴于浙江这几年的读后续写都是关于森林有关的多。 但高中的词汇量也就是3500，而文学中的景色描写很容易超过这个数字。我为了减轻高中生的记忆压力，力图从200多本经典英文原著中挑选最常见的表达（我发现很多表达反复出现在很多人作品中，因此以下呈现都可以供高中学生大胆选用），个别超纲词汇也无碍。 如何练习： 当写到树林的时候，查看本节，根据文章需要挑选句子。 我的学生跟我说，记不住。其实，没有谁能一下子记住，多练习几篇就会记住的。 考生需要记住，景色描写，一定要脑子里存在几幅图，例如下面的，这样你才能更好去应用。实际上，读后续写的图像定格是非常重要和实用的技能，我后面会说到。 Chapter 1 Forest 这一节说树林，无非围绕：草、花、树（包括树干、树茎、树叶、藤蔓）、颜色。其中读者最好多记忆一些文学作品中常见的花名，好比汉语小说中常用牵牛花、红豆等。（虽然有点累，但是你会发现很值得） 以高考真题作文为例：妻子和丈夫分手后迷路了，两段的开头：
高频短语–名词和形容词 * Magnificent forest of tall trees高大的森林 * Like a crowd of vivid green umbrellas像一群鲜艳的绿色雨伞* Emerald /?em(?)r?ld/ green leaves翠绿的叶子 * Vivid green stems鲜艳的绿色茎 * Like fluttering, emerald ribbons像飘动的翡翠丝带 * Blazing carpet of bluebells耀眼的风信子 * Red and orange berries红色和橙色浆果
高中英语高考写作之读后续写习题 四
四 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续 写的词数应为150左右。 Mom was a good cook. No, I take that back. She was a great cook. She could take a little hamburger a few potatoes and some tomatoes to make a feast that would make everyone drool(流口水) .And the dishes she could do with chicken well, it makes my mouth water to think about her delicious fried chicken. Her homemade chili sauce was second to none. Her bottled peaches were better than candies. When I was a little girl I once offered to make my sister Kathy’s bed for a week if she would give me the last slice of toast made with Moms homemade bread and pineapple jam. Kathy w ouldn’t go for it. She prefe rred to eat the toast. There is no doubt that Mom was a great cook most of the time. But if you put a steak in her pan, she would turn it into a texture(口感) of shoe leather. Of course, she didn’t do that on purpose She really did try her best. The night before I was married, she thought she was giving me a special treat by preparing a thick steak. It tasted as terrible as usual. Several months later, my elder brother Bud took me out for lunch and ordered steaks. I wasn’t excited, but since he was paying I figured I could try a few bites. When the waitress served our steaks, I was surprised at how good they smelled .Mom's steaks never smelled like that. Suddenly, I understood why others spoke of steak fondly. I finished my steak greedily, and even stole a bite of Bud’s."“ You k now," I said to Bud, patting my stomach with real satisfaction, "I used to think Mom was a great cook. But it's hard to believe her steaks come from the same animal as these steaks. Of course she is, Bud said. "But think about it. She grew up during a time when her family was very poor. That’s when she learned to cook. How often do you think they had steak? Probably not very often, I guessed Paragraph 1 “Probably never,”Bud said . _____________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: But then it occurred to me that "great” do esn' t mean" perfect” _____________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1: “ Probably never," Bud said.“ And when I was a little boy and Dad was in the army, don't remember ever having steak. It's only after our youngest sister was born that Mom and Dad could afford steak. So it isn’t that Mom isn't a good cook. It's just that she didn’t have a lot of experience of cooking steak. That’s the reason for my mother’s having a weakness in the kitchen. It was difficult for me to understand this at first, especially after we enjoyed Moms incredible fried chicken the day before. Paragraph 2 But then it occurred to me that“ great” doesn' t mean" perfe ct”. It just means" great” It's great of Mom to have cooked delicious food for us for years and make everyone feel happy. But what did I do for her? I determined to give Mom a surprise. After learning from a friend, I prepared a big dinner for Mom .When she saw the nice steak and had her first bite of it, a happy smile appeared on her face. 1