英语写作五步作文法

English writing ----A Letter of acknowledgement

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Teaching Aims

1.To learn how to write Thank-you letters.

2.To master the skills of practical writing.

3.To have the awareness of giving thanks in the future life.

Teaching Important Point

Help the students to write a passage of giving thanks.

Teaching Difficult Point

How to enable the students to write the passage well by instruction?

Teaching Procedure

Step1 Revision and leading in

Introduction and discussion

感谢信开头段常用句式和套话

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for...

I am writing to express my thanks for...

I am writing to show my sincere appreciation for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...

I feel deeply indebted to you and I really don't know how to thank you enough for your help.

感谢信结尾段常用句式和套话

I must thank you again for your generous help.

I am most grateful for your selfless donation.

My true gratitude is beyond the word's description.

I feel most obliged to thank you once more.

Please accept my gratitude, now and always.

Step2 Pre-writing

【题目要求】

假如你是李华，上周在英国参加了你校组织的“中学生文化交流周”活动，并住在Kelly家里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友Kelly写封感谢信，内容包括：

1.感谢Kelly的帮助，你在交流活动中的收获很大；

2.难忘在Kelly家的美好日子；

3.感谢她送你的英文词典。

注意:

1.适当增加细节使行文连贯。

2.全文100词左右。

第一步：细审题、三确定

1.确定体裁：本文为文。

2.确定人称: 本文的主要人称应为第人称为主，第人称为辅。

3.确定时态：本文主要时态应以时态为主，时态为辅。第二步：拟要点，列提纲

开头：写信的目的

主体：美好回忆、交流收获、表示感谢

结尾：表示欢迎

第三步：依提纲、准翻译

开头：写信目的

要点一：感谢你在我待在英国期间对我的巨大的帮助。

During my stay in England.

主体：美好回忆，交流收获、表示感谢

要点二：上周，我参加了文化交流周，在你们国家，我玩得很开心。

Last week, I the Cultural Exchange Week .I in your country.

要点三：因为我参观了城市博物馆和一些名胜，所以我对英国的社会、文化和历史有了更好的了解。

the English society, culture and history because we visited the city museum and some places of interest.

要点四：能住在你家我很幸运。

I was so lucky that I

要点五：在这里我尤其要感谢你作为礼物送给我的词典

Here I especially thank you for

要点六：学好英语对我很有帮助

To learn English well

结尾：表示欢迎

要点七：有空欢迎你来中国！

when you are free.

第四步：句升级，求靓丽

句式升级一：用定语从句改写要点三的句子

句式升级二：用enough改写要点四的句子

句式升级三：用it作形式主语改写要点六的句子

句式升级四：用convenient改写要点七的句子

Stept 3 Writing

第五步：巧连接，顺成文

Dear Kelly,

I have been back home (safe) from England. I am writing to thank you for (you) great help my stay in England.

Last week, I (participate) in the Cultural Exchange Week and I enjoyed myself In your country. We visited the city museum and some (place) of interest , made me have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made many new friends. What’s more, I was (luck) enough to stay at your home. And I will never forget the days we spent together.

Here I (especial) thank you for the dictionary you offered me a gift. It’s a great help for me (learn) English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.

I (sincere) invite you to come to china if it is convenient for you! I am looking forward to seeing you again.

Best wishes

Yours

Li Hua