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paid 110,000 yuan for the dogs, saving all the dogs eventually.(继续细节阐述,紧扣提示内容, 如谈判,11万人民币,此处花钱的英语句式一 定要表达准确,务必区别用好spend,take, cost,pay等这些动词的用法。)
第四句:The news soon got around
online/on the Internet, resulting a heated
debate/discussion on whether it is right
/advocated to stop the truck to rescue the dogs , on which people’views varied from person to person.(进一步阐述细节, 紧扣提示内容,如网上消息传播,引起争 议,是否提倡这种行为)
• 基础写作
• Everyone,attention,please! I,m so sorry to tell you that a terrible fire broke out in a mountain in our city yesterday.
• Lukily,the firefighters hurried there at once and fought against it bravely,but the fire was so big that it lasted five hours.To our sorrows ,half of the forest was destroyed by the fire.What,s worse,two person was badly injured.At last,according to the police,s research,the terrible fire was caused by a live cigarette end which was thrown carelessly by a passer-by.
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Overview of English Composition for the College Entrance ExaminationWriting Techniques for English Composition in the College Entrance ExaminationCommon Topics in English Composition for the College Entrance Examination
Conclusion
Writing Techniques for English Composition in the College Entrance Examination
Developing Sentences
Provide detailed examples, explanations, and evidence to support your main idea.
要点一
要点二
Ethics and moral values
Another common topic is the importance of ethics and moral values in guiding personal and societal decisions, as well as the challenges society faces in upholding these values.Transitions
Use smooth transitions to link sentences and paragraphs together.
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因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练,所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里,还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节:
语言表达:
连词成句:
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多,影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息,写的内容与要求无关
要点完整;语言准确且多样;结构清晰; 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准:
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文(申请信)
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达:中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事(具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势)
《高考英语作文总结》ppt课件
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⑨Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do, for example, try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. ⑩Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energy-saving society.
假设他是李华。近日,他的英语笔友 Jack听说他们学校正在开展“建立节 约型社会(Construction of an energy-saving society)〞主题活动, 发来邮件请他引见一下他对活动的看法 和建议。请他结合以下要点,用英语给 Jack回复邮件。
1.不浪费粮食和纸张;2.尽量不运 用方便筷、塑料袋;
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关于环境
近期,雾霾Dust-haze天气频频发生,PM2.5(可入 肺颗粒物)与PM10(可吸入颗粒物)这两个此前不被人 熟知的词最近不断被许多人提及,环境维护越来越 遭到人们的关注。作为一名青少年,我们如何尽本 人的微薄之力来维护环境,请以学生会的名义发出 一个倡议。
3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同窗循环 运用;4.其他建议。
Dear Jack,
①Glad to receive your .
②As you know, there has been an activity of “Construction of an energysaving society〞 in our school recently. ③ I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy. ④Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.
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1. Knowing that you have a severe lung cnacer which cuases the sharp pain and drops you to a dillema.... 2. I would spare no effort to assist you.
2. I was deeply concerned...I believe you are .... I would be delighted... I will let my classmates... 句法单一
英语是一门高度被动的语言--多多使用被动语态。
满分作文:漂亮的句型+关键词
好句分享:
The ACS says the more letters you receive, the more money they will give to your for your treatment. Consequently, I will appeal to more people to write letters to you, raising more money.
套用句式:“听闻……,我很伤心/震惊。”
1. I am exceedingly sorry/ sorrowful/ grieved/ saddened/shocked to learn of the news that+从 句
2. I just can't tell you how sorry/shocked I was to learn of your accident.
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What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
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They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
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要点二
Writing
Keeping a diary in English, writing English compositions, etc. to improve writing ability
要点三
Speaking
Practicing English conversation with teachers or classes, joining English corners, etc. to improve English listening and speaking ability
On site response and time management strategies
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Time management
Mastering the time management skills of the exam, dividing the time for each question, and not spending too much time on one question
The content criteria include the relevance and depth of the content, as well as the logicality and coherence of the ideas expressed
The structure criteria include the organization and development of the ideas, as well as the clarity and coherence of the overall structure
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Overview of English Composition
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高考英语作文游记课件(中英文版)Title: Writing a Travel Essay in College English ExaminationSlide 1: Introduction- Greeting and topic introduction- Briefly explain the purpose of the presentationSlide 2: Understanding the Essay Question- Provide a sample college English essay question related to travel - Analyze the key components of the question- Highlight important aspects such as topic, perspective, and structureSlide 3: Choosing a Destination- Discuss the importance of choosing a destination that is meaningful and interesting- Provide tips for selecting a destination that will make for a compelling essay- Encourage students to think outside the box and choose less common destinationsSlide 4: Brainstorming and Outlining- Explain the process of brainstorming and outlining the essay- Provide a sample outline template for the travel essay- Discuss the importance of including an introduction, bodyparagraphs, and a conclusionSlide 5: Writing the Introduction- Provide a sample introduction for a travel essay- Discuss the importance of grabbing the reader"s attention and briefly introducing the destinationSlide 6: Descriptive Language and Imagery- Explain the importance of using descriptive language and imagery to create a vivid picture of the destination- Provide examples of effective descriptive language and imagery - Encourage students to use senses, emotions, and details to bring their writing to lifeSlide 7: Writing the Body Paragraphs- Provide a sample body paragraph for a travel essay- Discuss the importance of including a topic sentence, supporting details, and a concluding sentence- Encourage students to include a variety of details and perspectives in their body paragraphsSlide 8: Writing the Conclusion- Provide a sample conclusion for a travel essay- Discuss the importance of wrapping up the essay and leaving a lasting impression- Encourage students to summarize their main points and reflect ontheir experienceSlide 9: Editing and Revising- Explain the importance of editing and revising their essay for clarity, coherence, and grammar- Provide tips for self-editing and suggestions for seeking feedback from peers or instructorsSlide 10: Conclusion- Recap the main points of the presentation- Encourage students to practice writing travel essays and explore new destinations- Thank the students for their attention and provide contact information for further questions or assistanceSlide 11: References- List any resources or references used in the presentation。
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高考英语真题作文PPT1. Well, let me tell you about my experience in the English exam. It was quite challenging, to be honest. I had to answer multiple choice questions, write essays, and even do some listening and speaking tasks. It was a real test of my English skills.2. One thing that really stood out to me was the time pressure. I had to think quickly and make decisions on the spot. It was a bit stressful, but I tried to stay calm and focused. Time management was key in making sure I could finish all the tasks on time.3. The reading comprehension section was particularly tough for me. I had to read long passages and answer questions about them. Sometimes, I had to infer the meaning of words or phrases based on context. It required a lot of concentration and attention to detail.4. Writing the essays was another challenge. I had tocome up with ideas, organize my thoughts, and express myself clearly. It was a test of my writing skills and creativity. I tried to use a variety of vocabulary and sentence structures to make my essays more interesting and engaging.5. Overall, the English exam was a test of my language proficiency and critical thinking skills. It pushed me to think outside the box and communicate effectively. It was a valuable experience that helped me improve my English abilities and prepare for future challenges.。
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Rule No. 1 and 2.
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Five Steps:
Analyze the writing task. Organize it. Draft. Revise. Edit.
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8. 使用倒装句、感叹句
1. How I wish
I would
read and reply your email as soon
as I received it. (我多么希望)
2. not only… but also…引起的倒装
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不仅能独立赚钱)
The Beauty of Writing
学习交流课件
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Why is writing so tough?
Input
Output
学习交流课件
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高考作文高分卷的特点
外在美:第一印象很重要!书写清 楚,字母匀称,词、行间距适当, 卷面整洁。
结构美:有合理的段落层次,多为 3段式,条理清晰;每段有每段的 主题。
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8. 进行举例说明
例如,比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not,
to tell you the truth, for this reason
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which_m__a_k__e_us annoyed. They always worry about everything and evmearykbeosdy, such as our study, entertainment and friends.
As is often the case, they sometimes _lo_o__k_our diary without our _p_e_r_m__i_t.__“I_t_’s good for you.” explainrethaedy every time we ask thempewrmhyis. sion
பைடு நூலகம்
Children as we are, there are some basic personal rights,
which should be protected. How to get on well with our
parents? It’s a problem.
However, there is no reason for us to be against t\o our
Step 4&5: connect the sentences and make some appolishment.
Step 6: Copy it out carefully and clearly.
Proof reading (find out 5 errors)
Our parents concern about everything that we have done,
Some copies from our homework:
Copy 1: It seems that our parents care too much about us.
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表时间的过渡语有at first,then,later, firstly, secondly, meanwhile,in the end, finally,after that等。
[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching TV.
[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching TV.
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有可能的话,使用一些地道的,充满洋腔洋调,有“洋味”的单词。
高中英语教学课件
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语言 2
新旧评分标准的不同:
内容方面
旧标准只对要点作出要求,而新标准除要求内容要点外,还涉及到对次重点和无关内容的评定。考生要 获得高分,除要覆盖所有要点外,还要尽量覆盖次重点,并且要少写或不写无关内容。
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语言方面
语言方面
旧标准只用语言中错误的多少来衡量语
言的好坏;
旧新标标准准只对用语语言言的中要错求误则的较多为少具来体衡:量
语应言用的语好法坏结;构应多样,力避单调。
应用的词汇应丰富,忌重复用词。
语言错误方面,对“尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的“些许错误”可以原谅。
新标准这发对语比挥言旧自的评己要分的求标潜则准能较对。语为具言体错:误的一棒子打死更能鼓励考生发挥自己的水平,更能鼓励考生 应用语法结构应多样,力避单调。
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书面表达五步法
• Step1:审题 • Step2.抓要点 • step3.写草稿 • Step4.修改、整合 • Step5.抄写
• 第二节 写作(满分25分) • 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国 朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假 里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: • 1.未及时回信的原因; • 2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志 愿者等)。 • 注意:1. 词数120-150;2. 可适当增加 细节,以使行文连贯。
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时,你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西,而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍,就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西,从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动,是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋,天才在于积累 --华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样,多用则灵,不用则废 -茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗?但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 --屠格涅夫 13、成功=艰苦劳动+正确方法+少说空话 --爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨,怎能见彩虹 -《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶,才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人,永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码,能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18.暗自伤心,不如立即行动. 19.挫折时,要像大树一样,被砍了,还能再长;也要像杂草一样,虽让人践踏,但还能勇敢地活下去. 20.随随便便浪费的时间,再也不能赢回来. 21.成功是优点的发挥,失败,是缺点的积累.
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高考英语作文范文课件I. IntroductionThe college entrance examination, widely known as the "gaokao," is an important milestone in a student's life in China. With its reputation as a highly competitive and rigorous exam, many students and their families invest significant time and effort in preparing for this crucial event. In this essay, we will explore the impacts of the gaokao on students' lives and society, while also discussing its pros and cons.II. Academic PressureOne of the most apparent effects of the gaokao is the immense academic pressure it places on students. Starting from an early age, students face an overwhelming amount of homework, extracurricular activities, and test preparation. The intense competition and emphasis on test scores lead to a constantly stressed and mentally fatigued student population. The need to excel in every subject to secure admission to prestigious universities often leaves little time for self-discovery and pursuing other interests.III. Standardized EducationThe gaokao heavily relies on a narrow scope of knowledge and emphasizes rote memorization rather than critical thinking. This approach to education discourages creativity and independent thinking. Both students and teachers are compelled to focus solely on topics that are likely to appear in the exam, leading to a lack ofa holistic educational experience. Moreover, schools become more result-oriented, neglecting the personal growth and development of students.IV. Socioeconomic InequalitiesAlthough the gaokao is intended to provide equal opportunities for all students, it inadvertently perpetuates socioeconomic inequalities. Wealthier families can afford expensive tutoring and resources to ensure their children's success. On the other hand, those from disadvantaged backgrounds may struggle to access similar support, leaving them at a disadvantage. As a result, the gaokao further widens the gap between privileged and underprivileged students.V. University Admission CriteriaWhile the gaokao is influential, it is not a perfect indicator of a student's abilities or potential. It primarily assesses a student's performance on a single day, which may not accurately represent their overall capabilities. Furthermore, limited university slots and an imbalanced distribution of resources lead to fierce competition among students, sometimes resulting in unfair outcomes. Many students who excel in non-academic areas may miss out on higher education opportunities due to the exam format.VI. ConclusionIn conclusion, the gaokao, although serving as an evaluation tool, has significant drawbacks. The heavy burden it places on students,a standardized approach to education, socioeconomic inequalities, and limited university admission criteria are all areas of concern. While reforming the exam system is a complex task, there is a need for a more comprehensive and flexible evaluation process that considers a student's multiple talents and abilities. Education should focus on nurturing well-rounded individuals who can contribute positively to society rather than focusing solely on test scores.。
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常用句子
• It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cannot overcome. • These volunteer’s activities can help us to gain some social experience and make good sense of our
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• I think • I firmly believe that … • In my opinion, • Personally speaking,… • As far as I am concerned, … • From my point of view, ….
表达个人观点的用语
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How to summarize an argumentation
Skill: 议论三步法 论点—观点 主题句 论据— (事例)
结论
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典型模板
评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式
1. 提出要评论的事物或观点. 2. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 3. 归纳得出作者的结论. 4. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) 5. b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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Therefore, I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.
第二节 开放作文 (15分) 请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
As is shown in the picture, a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label of “full” on its body, feeling proud and confident.
The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon. We might often meet some people who look confident, trying to impress others with their “rich” knowledge. However, just like the bottle in the picture, what they really know is just a little. What they actually have in their head is far from enough. As an old saying goes, empty bottles make the loudest noise.
The picture reminds me of the environmental problems. If we pay no attention to the environment just in order to earn more money now, how can we live a happy life in the dirty surroundings? So try to think about our future when doing things.
Therefore, remember, proper methods and constant efforts are the key to success.
第一节 情景作文 (20分) 最近,你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查, 结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文, 介绍调查结果, 并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法。 注意:1. 短文的开头已为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。
Recently, a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.
The results are as follows: more than half of the students, about 54%, usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important. Meanwhile, English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants, and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students.
A. I’m not that tired. B. What’s more, I didn’t sleep well last night. C. I could just sit here like this for ever and
never get up.
D. All that silly talk, and the drink and the cigarette smoke.
2. 词数不少于60 3. 参考词汇:sports facilities 体育设施
In the picture, we can see a man picking apples. But in order to pick the apples, he cuts down the tree.
The picture wants to tell us that whatever we do, we shouldn’t only focus on what we are doing at present. If we neglect our future, we’ll end up in failure. Just like the man in the picture, although he can get apples this time, he will never get fruits from the tree again.
We can see from the pie chart that about 4.41%
of the students believe that those who have good
relationship with others are likely to become a monitor.More students (around 6%), however,
Therefore, it’s wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full.
The primary school students have different
opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor .
In my opinion, everyone should learn to help and encourage others on their way to success.
第一节 情景作文(20分) 假设你是李华,光明中学的学生。寒假期间 你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。请 你按照图片顺序,以“Community Service”为 题,向学校英文校刊投稿,介绍这次活动情况 。作文的开头已为你写好。 注意:1. 文章开头已为你写好。
What the picture tries to tell us is the importance of encouragement. Since life is full of challenges and difficulties, people need to be encouraged when facing difficulty. There is no denying that almost everyone is likely to do better if others see more of their advantages rather than their weak points. It is other people’s support that gives us the wings to fly. Encouragement from parents, teachers and friends can promote one’s ability and enhance one’s confidence.
There is a profound difference between math and Chinese. Without doubt, some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging, and it seems easier for us to have a sense of achievement in it. However, each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value.
-- I don’t think I’ve ever felt so tired in my life.
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-- And the heat. ___B3E___
go to bed
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