写作课件

know what it is mainly about when he has read
the first few words.
把主要的意思放在次要意思之前，先说最重要的事情，因而读者 在看到最初几个词后就知道这句话的意思。
4. Periodic Sentence
more complex, emphatic, formal or literary (复杂、
3. The Content of the Text
She is studying. She is studying English now. She is studying English in the library. ② Compound Sentence： Be quick or you will be late. I’m a teacher and I teach English. Mary has a good job but she feels unhappy.
master some writing strategies
which are often used in writing.
3. The Content of the Text
1. Complete Sentences and Sentence Fragments
(完整句与不完整句)
A grammatically complete sentence is one that contains at least a subject and a predicate (or finite ) verb; if the verb is transitive, there must be an object; if the verb is a link-verb, there must be a predicative or complement.
6. Effective Sentences
在写作中，往往听到一些关于句子好 或坏的评论，那么好句子到底有什么标准
呢？下面就把一个好句子的几个基本原则
介绍一下，希望能够帮你在写作中写出优
美的句子来。
6. Effective Sentences
1.Unity：
统一性是好句子的第一要点。一个完整的句
2. W: Being an honest man, Mr. John worked very hard at all the courses he took in the college. ① Being an honest man, Mr. John never tells a lie to his classmates. ② Being a diligent student, Mr. John worked very hard at all the courses he took in the college.
Conciseness: A sentence should contain no unnecessary
words. If the idea is fully expressed, the
fewer words are used, the better.
6. Effective Sentences
3. The Content of the Text
A loose sentence puts the main idea before
all supplementary information; in other words,
it put the first thing first, and lets the reader
子表达单一的完整的意思。它不包含并不紧密相
关的意思，也不表达本身不完整的意思。也就是 说,正确有效的句子必须符合完整统一性原则，
6. Effective Sentences
即一个句子必须表达单一的完整的思想。 如果一个句子包含相互之间并无紧密联
系甚至毫无关系或相互矛盾的多个意思，
或一个句子表达的思想不完整，则违背
3. The Content of the Text
2. Types of Sentences: There are 4 kinds of sentences in learning English: ① Declarative Sentence 陈述句： I am a student of the 2nd Northwest University for Nationalities. ② Interrogative Sentence 疑问句： Do you study Japanese or English? Can you drive a car?
6. Effective Sentences: Unity
3. W: Some TV programs are harmful to children, so parents must be prohibited from watching them. ① Some TV programs are harmful to children, so parents must prohibit their children from watching them. ② Some TV programs are harmful, so children must be prohibited from watching them. ③ Children must be prohibited from watching TV programs which are harmful to both old and young.
1. Purposes
3. To present them some good writing strategies. 4. To encourage them to practice.
2. The Gist of the Chapter
This chapter is very important for the students to learn and
used in formal writing.
5. Balanced Sentence
这种句子的语气强劲有力。会给人留 下深刻的印象，因为它包含相反的意思， 而且声调和节奏优美。主要用于说明文、 辩论文及演说等正式文体中。
6. Effective Sentences
Unity: Unity is the first quality of an effective
3. The Content of the Text
③ Imperative Sentence 祈使句： Do come and help me, please! Stand up, please! ④ Exclamatory Sentence 感叹句： What a fine day it is! How beautiful the flower is!
3. The Content of the Text
3.There are also 4 kinds of sentences in learning English, such as: ① Simple Sentence： Tom is red. Tom is in red. Tom is in the red.
并且直到最后一个词时句子的结构才完整。读者只有看完整句话才
知道它的意思。)
试比较:
4. Periodic Sentence
★ She decided to study English though she was interested in music. ★ Although she was interested in music, she finally decided to study English
着重、正式和文雅).
A periodic sentence puts the main
idea at or near the end of the sentence. The
reader does not know what it is mainly about
until he finishes reading it. (把最重要的意思放到最后面，
3. The Content of the Text
④ Compound-Complex S： I once asked a very able high school senior,
a straight A student in English, if she ever
kept her old English papers. 注意： 写文章时一般都要使句子的结构多样化
5. Balanced Sentence
Mainly used in formal writing, (主要用于正式
文体)
A balanced sentence is impressive
because of the contrast, and pleasing to
hear because of the rhythm. It is mainly
the governments must take strict and effective measures. ② To solve the problem of energy crisis, scientists are seeking new sources of energy.
6. Effective Sentences: Unity
3. The Content of the Text
③ Complex Sentence： I was born in a small town,
where there was only one school.
They could not work in the fields
yesterday because it was raining hard.
3. The Content of the Text
4. There are also 3 kinds of sentences in learning English, such as: Loose Sentence（松散句）：easier, simpler, more natural and direct. (明白、简单、自然和直接)。
A Handbook of Writing
Unit 3 The Sentence
1. Purposes
1. To make the students know
some important writing ways.
2. To help them get full under-
standing of text as a whole.
Emphasis: When there is an important idea, it should be expressed with emphasis. Variety: When writing a paragraph, all kinds of sentences and writing skills should be used.
sentence. A unified sentence expresses
a single complete thought. Coherence: Coherence means clear and reasonable connection between parts.
6. Effective Sentences
完整统一性原则。例如:
6. Effective Sentences -Unity
w: To control the birth rate in the world, the scientists are seeking new sources of energy.
Байду номын сангаас
① To control the birth rate in the world, all