高中英语 读后续写真题解读+自主练习
2017年11月浙江卷读后续写真题分析
Passage 12
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my
was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day
our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived,
drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathroom if Mom was
stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chance.
vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks
续写要求：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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【思路点拨】
1.文本细解读，确定续写结局
本文是记叙文，讲述了作者一家人（我，David, 和父母）的一次有趣的家庭旅行故事。父母决定开车带“我”和弟弟David回家探望各自的父母，同时欣赏沿途美景。因为母亲做事总是漫不经心，又爱忘事，沿途出现许多有趣的故事，比如落下钱包必须得重返家中，或是担心母亲把他们弟兄俩落在加油站的洗手间等等。
续写部分是文章的结尾，其中一段应该延续文章之前的风格，记叙旅行途中的趣事，而另外一段应为对整个旅途的总结。
2.段首句解读，确定续写方向
续写第一段首句写道“第二天我们记起我们带着的崭新帐篷”，第二段首句写道“我们开车穿越了好几个州，沿途饱览了各种各样的美丽景色”，由此可知第一段内容应着重描写与帐篷相关的旅途故事，可设想：一家人决定在野外露营，然而却发现健忘的妈妈又出现了状况，然后一家人又多了个笑料故事。续写第二段内容可以设计为对这次旅行的总结和感悟。
3.划线词解读，规划续写细节
1)分类划线词
人物——Dad，Mom，David
事物——tent，trip，camping，trouble
情感——absent-minded，forgetful，nice
2)构思具体情节
第一段情节：决定去野外露营→找到合适的露营（camping）地点，爸爸（Dad）停车，妈妈（Mom）被美丽的景色惊呆→搭起帐篷（tent）后发现健忘的（forgetful）妈妈忘记带枕头了；第二段情节：看过的美景令我们着迷→领这趟旅行（trip）真正难忘的是那些意外的小麻烦（trouble）→旅行真正的意义在于适应和包容。
【范文欣赏】
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. So we planned to
sunset reflected in the shining water, her eyes sparkling with visible admiration. Having put up the
clothes, we made small packages that served as pillows. So the next morning, we all acted like robots when we tried to turn our neck, which led to bursts of laughter all the way.
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The splendid sunrise and sunset, twinkling stars, winding rivers, vast plains and deep valleys were really
which means, whatever you come across, don’t forget to laugh and then solve it.
亮点积累
1.词汇
crystal adj. 水晶般的；reflect v. 反射，反映；appealing adj.吸引人的
2.短语
to one’s delight 让某人高兴的是；gaze at 盯着，瞪着；fade away 褪色
3.提分句式
Mom gazed at the beautiful sunset reflected in the crystal water, her eyes sparkling with visible admiration.
[分析] 该句包含一个修饰sunset的过去分词短语“reflected in...”，该句还含一个独立主格结构，“her eyes sparking with visible admiration”。
[译文] 妈妈瞪着倒映在清澈的湖水中的美丽落日，眼里闪烁着赞赏的光芒。
读后续写自主练习
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
In old times, fable (预言) retells the story of the young athletic boy who is hungry for success, for whom winning was everything and success was measured by such a result.
One day, the boy was preparing himself for a running competition in his small native village, himself and two other young boys to compete. A large crowd had gathered to witness the competition and a wise old man, upon hearing of the little boy, had travelled far to bear witness also.
The race started, looking like a level heat at the finishing line, but sure enough the boy dug deep and called on his determination, strength and power. He took the winning line and was first. The crowd was crazy and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man remained still and calm, expressing no comment. The little boy, however, felt proud and important.
A second race was called, and two new young challengers came forward, to run with the little boy. The race was started and sure enough the little boy came through and finished first once again. The crowd was crazy again and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man remained still and calm, again expressing nothing. The little boy, however, felt proud and important.
“Another race, another race!” begged the little boy. The wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers, an elderly weak lady and a blind man. “What is this?” quizzed the little boy. “This is no race,” he exclaimed. “Race!” said the wise man. The race was started and the boy was the only finisher, the other two challengers left standing at the starting line. The little boy was ecstatic (狂喜的), he raised his arms in delight. The crowd, however, was silent showing no sentiment toward the little boy.
续写要求：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2. 至少使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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“What has happened? Why don’t the people join in my success?” he asked the wise old man.
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“Old man, I can’t understand who are the crowd cheering for? Which one of us three?”, asked the little boy.
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“What has happened? Why don’t the people join in my success?” he asked the wise old man.
“Race again”, replied the wise man, “This time, finish together, all three of you, together”, continued the wise man. The little boy thought a little, stood in the middle of the blind and the weak, and then took the two challengers. The little boy walked slowly to the finishing line and crossed it. The crowd were crazy and cheered and waved at the boy. The wise man smiled, nodding his head. The little boy felt proud and important.
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“Old man, I can’t understand who ar e the crowd cheering for? Which one of us three?”, asked the little boy. The wise old man looked into the little boy’s eyes, placing his hands on the boy’s shoulders, and replied softly, “Little boy, for this race you have won much more than in any race you have ever ran before, and for this race the crowd cheer not for any winner! It is not a race of speed, but a race of kindness.”