三一口语6级自选话题稿---宠物小鸡
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三一口语6级自选话题稿——宠物小鸡
My Little Chicks
云舟学员:郭思远报考级别:三一六级云舟指导老师:李蓓蓓云舟李老师点评:郭思远是云舟的老学员了,五级的时候也是跟着我学的,当时自选话题就用的这个话题,并且取得了五级优秀的好成绩。准备六级话题时,我和孩子商量,决定还是就他熟悉并且有信心的以前用过的话题,修改内容和讲述点,增加6级的语法点,所以继续使用这个话题。
Question 1:What do my chicks look like?
Last Qingming Festival, my mother gave my sister and me two newborn chicks. She hoped us to learn how to take care of the small animals. When we saw the chicks, we were so excited. Because the chicks were so lovely and small. They had yellow fluff, a pair of small and round eyes, as well as a sharp and small mouth. They looked like two yellow balls. I put them on my hands, touched their fluff. Their fluff was very smooth and very soft. As they grow up, their yellow fluff drop, and their clows are stronger than before.
云舟李老师点评:很多人都有养宠物的经历,但是小作者的妈妈是想让孩子从中学会如何照顾小动物,有爱心。
Question 2: How do I look after the chicks?
First,We prepared them a big cardboard box, covered with thick paper inside,as their home. we prepared their food everyday. We put millets with water into a small bowl. They were very fond of the food .That period of time, every day when I came back from school , I immediately went to see my chicks. Sometimes they stepped into the bowl, making the millets everywhere in their home. We had to clean for them. After one week, they could drink water, I must make sure that they have enough fresh water to drink. And it was my job everyday! Besides ,grandma and I also gave the chicks another food that made by corn flour mixed vegetable with water.They were very fond of these food that we prepared for them. But they were very naughty, they often sprinkled the water. If no one is at home, they have to be thirsty all day! What's more, I also took them out of their home to let them have a sunbath on the balcony for a few hours at noon.
云舟李老师点评:从中,你是否看出来小作者对小鸡的照顾,真是细致呢。
Question 3: What was the most amusing thing that has happened?
When the chicks grew bigger and stronger, they were more and more curious about the outside world. They stretched their necks trying many times to jump out of their nest. All of us thought they were too little to jump out of the box.However, one unexpecting thing happened. One day, when I came home from school , I found that the chicks were not in the nest. They were playing happily in our living room. Unexpectedly, the two naughty 'guys' made the living room a mess! They ate up my mother's favorite flowers,only several pieces of leaves were left! What's worse, there were a few piles of smelly shit on the clean floor .It was too terrible! My mother was very angry, and ordered us to put the chicks back in the nest. But the chicks preferred the outside world, they still jumped out of their nest often, and they had done a lot of bad things. My mother had to look for a higher and larger box as a new nest for the chicks.
云舟李老师点评:小家伙也很淘气,每次小作者都声情并茂的讲述这段,非常有趣。
Question 4: Where do we bring the chicks to go to play?