外研版五年高考分类题库(书面表达题汇总

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考点4 书面表达
一、提纲作文
（2012·安徽卷）
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择. 请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由.
注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.词数120左右;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息.
参考词汇:文科arts; 理科science
Good afternoon, everyone,
Welcome to our school!
Thanks!
【思路点拨】
1.本文写作体裁是发言稿,由于开头和结尾已经给出,不必再考虑发言稿的格式.
2.发言稿的交际对象是来校访问的外国学生,表示欢迎之后可以按照交际背景把欲说明的情况作一简短介绍.
3.发言稿的主体内容是高中生对文、理科的选择,由于没有给出具体的选择理由,所以需要自己拟定合适的内容作为中心要点.
4.内容要点:自己选择理科,理由如下:
①理科毕业生需求量大②可以实现儿时做科学家的梦想
③父母认为学习理科前途光明④物理老师是学习榜样.
5.需要的词汇和短语:
①面对:be faced with ②做选择:make a choice ③需求量大:in great demand
④实现……的理想:achieve the dream of... ⑤前途光明:have a
bright future
⑥某人的学习榜样:one’s role model
【参考范文】
Good afternoon, everyone,
Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follows:
First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.
Thanks!
（2012·湖南卷）
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
生活中,你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历,其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文.
主要内容包括:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感想.
注意:1.词数不少于120个;
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.
【思路点拨】
(1)由题目要求可知本文主要内容是对物品失而复得经过的回忆,故本部分应用一般过去时,而就本经历的感想部分应该使用一般现在时. (2)本文的内容主要包括三个部分:
1)丢失的物品; 2)物品失而复得的经过; 3)你的感想.
在写作时,应注意这三部分内容的关系,主要集中在物品失而复得的经过及感想部分.
(3)内容要点: 1.丢失/不见:be lost/ missing
2.张贴通知:put up notices
3.奖励、奖赏:reward
4.做好事:do good deeds
【参考范文】
I have a precious pen, which was given to me as a birthday present by one of my best friends. I like it very much, however, this pen once has an unusual experience.
When I was a student of Grade Two, I lost my precious pen because of carelessness when our school was holding a sports meeting. I almost felt crazy when I realized that it was missing. I searched the playground carefully and even the road leading to my home. I put up several notices with its title—My Precious Pen Lost, in which I promised to pay the one
who gives the pen back to me 100 yuan. Several days later, I heard my name called by someone. It was a girl with a pen in her hand. I felt excited to see my precious pen back. I thanked this kind girl again and again, who didn’t accept the money I gave her as a reward.
From the unusual experience of my precious pen, I learn that we should be thankful to those who always do good deeds and also be ready to do what we can to help others.
（2012·江西卷）
某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿. 请根据以下要点写一篇短文:
1.你为什么喜欢读书;
2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、科学、文学等)?请给出至少两个理由.
注意:词数120左右.
【参考范文】
I Like Reading
Reading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading.
There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me
most is literary books, especially those by famous writers. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?
（2012·辽宁卷）
假定你是某中学的学生李华. 请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法,内容主要包括:
优点:1.话题广泛;
2.图片丰富;
3.有助于提高学习兴趣.
建议:适当降低词汇难度.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数.
One Possible Version
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used
to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions w hich are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.
Best regards,
Li Hua 【思路点拨】
(1)本文是一篇提纲式作文,该书面表达为应用文中的书信写作,属传统的指导性写作. 写好此文,需注意以下几点:
一是时态把握要准确. 文章基本时态为一般现在时,同时兼顾其他的时态.
二是要点要齐全,且详略得当. 题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求,要点作出了明确的规定,这些要点不能有遗漏. 写作重点可放在对于教材优点的介绍上面.
三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,使行文连贯流畅.
(2)通过审题,归纳出本文内容要点如下:①肯定现行教材;②赞赏教材的三点优点;③一点建议. 这三点为基本点,缺一不可.
(3)内容要点:
话题广泛(a variety of topics)
受欢迎(be popular with)
过去常常(used to do)
建议做某事(suggest doing sth. )
（2012•全国卷I）
假定你是李华,从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加. 请写一封电子邮件申请参加.
内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Regards,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m L i Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students
from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learn ing English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
(1)本题是一封电子邮件,要用第一人称写. 由于文章内容是申请参加一个夏令营,需进行自我介绍,说明参加意图,因此,本文应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主.
(2)本文要包含以下要点:①自我介绍②参加意图
③希望获准. 最后,写上期待对方答复.
(3)内容要点:
参加(take part in/participate in)
讲流利的英语(speak fluent English/speak English fluently)
被接受为(be accepted as)
期待答复(looking forward to your reply)
（2012•全国卷Ⅱ）
假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会. 请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:
1.时间:周五晚8点至9点
2.地点:学生俱乐部
3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4.要求:备小礼物
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上.
Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.
【思路点拨】写信是近几年最常见的写作文体,它可以有效地考查考生用英语表达自己的能力,增强考试的信度和区分度;提纲式作文让考生有话可说.
【注意事项】
1.书信的格式;
2.表述的逻辑性和连贯性;
3.内容的全面性;
4.使用地道的英语.
【参考范文】
Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.We’d like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
（2012•山东卷）
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖. 校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验. 请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:
1.参加英语角的益处;
2.坚持写英语日记的作用;
3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助.
注意:1.词数:120-150;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
【思路点拨】
1.本文要求以李华的名义写一篇文章来介绍一下课外学习英语的经
验,所以文章的题材应属于介绍经验类文章. 时态应以一般现在时为主.
2.写作时应列举出参加的三个主要活动及益处,保证要点全面,并尽量使用所积累的高级词汇,如participate in, take part in, manage to do, in addition, what’s more等.
3.注意文章结构的合理及层次的清晰,不是简单罗列汉语部分的信息,而应做到层次清晰并有一定的逻辑性,并可适当扩充,使文章内容更丰富.
4.要应用常用句型,如定语从句及强调句等.
【参考范文】
My name is Li Hua. I feel honoured to have the chance to share my out-of-class English learning experience with you.
First of all, I often participate in English Corner, where I can talk and communicate with students and foreign teachers. Not only can I improve my oral English but also I learn some customs in western countries.
Secondly, I insist on keeping a diary, which can improve my ability of expressing myself in English and help me to put what I’ve learnt to use.
In addition, I often surf the Internet and browse Enjoy Reading, which enlarges my vocabulary and helps to improve my reading speed
and my reading comprehension ability. Furthermore, it opens a window for me to see the world.
It’s because of this and my effort in class that I managed to get the first place in the English Contest held recently in our school. I hope my experience will be of some help to you and I also wish for your advice.
（2012·四川卷）
假如你是大学一年级新生李华. 开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议. 请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信.
1.对英语学习的认识;
2.自己目前的英语水平;
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题;
4.对英语教学的两点建议.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已给出.
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
Thank you!
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
1.审题:
文体:应用文——书信
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称
2.要点:
(1)对英语学习的认识
(2)自己目前的英语水平
(3)自己英语学习中存在的主要问题
(4)对英语教学的两点建议
3.参考词汇和句式:
(1) play an important role/part in
(2) It’s necessary for...to do
(3) It’s difficult/hard for...to
(4) make great progress
【参考范文】
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teache r.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are
that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua (2012·天津卷)
假设你是李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校. 他热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化. 8月5日下午2:00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》. 请你根据以下提示,用英语给Chris 写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出.
☆提出邀请并简述原因;
☆提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等);
☆请求对方回复.
注意:
1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
参考词汇:
越剧Shaoxing Opera
《梁山伯与祝英台》Butterfly Lovers
天津大剧院Tianjin Grand Theater
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
Yours,
Li Jin 【思路点拨】
(1)本题是一封电子邮件,所以用第一人称. 由于是计划去看越剧,观剧后还有一些活动,因此以一般将来时为主,同时结合一般现在时. (2)要包含提示要点①介绍越剧上演的时间和地点②提出邀请,简述原因③观剧后的活动建议④请求对方回复.
(3)内容要点: 邀请你去(invite you to...)
上演(put on)
喜欢(be fond of/have an appetite for)
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. I’d like to invite you to see Butterfly Lovers, a famous Chinese Shaoxing Opera, which is to be put on at the newly built Tianjin Grand Theater at 2:00 p.m. on August 5th. As you know, as your close friend, I know you are fond of Chinese culture,
especially opera culture.
Of course, besides going to the theater, we can do some other meaningful things, such as visiting the museum or the art gallery nearby, which both contain a lot of items of great value. I’m sure that we will have a good time.
I’m looking forward to receiving your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Jin 二、图画作文/漫画作文
（2012·北京卷）
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动. 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿.
注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好.
2.词数不少于60.
Saturday, June 2 Fine
This morning,
【思路点拨】
(1)本题通过四幅图介绍了李华在路上做的好事. 文章要求用日记的形式叙述,因此应写成以过去时态为主的记叙文.
(2)四幅图主要是讲述了李华偶遇路人并向路人提供帮助的事情,是生活中熟悉的话题. 写作时,应把时间、地点、人物、事件及过程写得具体而详实,最后应对此事谈一下自己的感受.
(3)内容要点
发现路人(see two travelers)
询问情况(ask what happened)
告诉路线(tell how)
挥手告别(wave goodbye to )
【参考范文】
One possible version:
Saturday, June 2 Fine
This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost.
I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and
advised them to take Bus No.20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.
（2012·福建卷）
假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿.
内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.发表个人感想.
注意:
1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数；
2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯；
3.词数120左右；
4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息.
参考词汇:告示牌sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake
Park.
【思路点拨】
1.首先对漫画进行语言描述. 一男一女在湖中划船,岸上木牌明确写道:湖中勿丢垃圾!但两人一边感叹“啊,多美的景色!”一边随意乱丢垃圾. 因此可用第一人称的视角,用记叙文的形式来写.
2.第二段可对这种行为发表个人看法. 环境需要大家共同维护,只有人人把保护环境作为己任,我们才能有更美好的生活.
【参考范文】
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and
soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
(2012·陕西卷)
假定你是李华. 下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动,请根据写作要点并参考图画内容,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文.
写作要点:1.活动的策划；
2.教室的布置；
3.活动的内容；
4.你的感想.
注意:1.短文词数不少于100；
2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数；
3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当；
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称.
Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day: she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would
have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.
【思路点拨】
(1)本文要求根据一幅画和写作要点提示描述教师节那天你们班为英语老师组织的一次庆祝活动.
(2)审题:属于半开放性的记叙文；时态主要是一般过去时；人称:第一人称.
(3)内容要点:
活动策划:As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate...
教室的布置:decorate our classroom with...
活动内容:stand in line, clap hands and say loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!”; present her with the prepared flowers; sing songs
感想:cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance
【参考范文】
Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day: she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.
As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon
of September 10, some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!”
Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their kung fu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li.
Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.
（2012•上海卷）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120~150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
上周一,你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课(如图所示),回家后你用英语写了一篇日记,内容包括:
●对两堂绘画课的具体描述；
●你从中获得的启发.
【思路点拨】
首先,本文属于图片作文,提供的图片有两张,提高了对于描写的要求. 高考英语作文已经不再仅仅考查学生的议论能力,它有些借鉴中文作文,要求学生夹叙夹议. 在叙述中,如果只是平铺直叙那显然得不到高分. 描写的关键在于捕捉事物的特征,而高考作文往往要求学生在短短几句话中描写到位.
其次,图片的含义并不是显而易见的,需要看出每张图背后的意义并将两张图结合起来说.
再次,文章要求考生用日记的方式写.
【参考范文】
June 8, 2012
At a primary school, I saw in one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. By contrast, the same student used a brush to make a breath-taking landscape painting-so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the singing birds.
“Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” It’s this famous saying on success that lends insight into the two paintings. The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success.
So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of our dreams. We’d be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a searchlight if we have faith in ourselves.
The paintings taught me a lot.
三、图表作文
（2012•江苏卷）
生活中冲突时有发生. 假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张. 请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿.
注意:
1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译.
2.词数150 左右. 开头已经写好,不计入总词数.
3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等. Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
【思路点拨】
(1)本题为半开放作文,要求学生介绍事情经过、冲突原因以及避免冲突的做法. 在写作中,学生首先应该注意时态的变化. 在叙述事情的经过以及冲突原因时应该使用过去时,在谈及避免冲突的做法时应该使用一般现在时.
(2)学生还应注意段落清晰,行文流畅. 根据要点提示,作文最好分为三段,第一段介绍事情经过,第二段分析冲突原因,第三段谈论避免冲突的做法,提出建议.
(3)内容要点:碰撞(bump into) 争执(quarrel)
关系紧张(tense relationship) 过错(fault) 该受到责备(be to blame)
过分关注输赢(care too much about winning and losing)
避免冲突(avoid conflicts) 设身处地为他人着想(put ourselves in others place )
【参考范文】
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing
and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
四、（半）开放作文
（2012·北京卷）
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文. 词数不少于50.
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
【思路点拨】
(1)本文是开放性作文,要求根据提示,就漫画内容发表自己的看法,应写成以一般现在时态为主的说明文.
(2)本文应首先描述漫画内容,然后展开想像,挖掘漫画中人物的内心想法. 最后再联系现实,表明自己的态度.
(3)内容要点
白铅笔在嘲笑黑铅笔(laugh at)
黑铅笔的反应(calm, fall into deep thoughts)
现实中,我们该向黑铅笔学习(learn from the black pencil)
【参考范文】
One possible version:
I think the white pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” The black pen cil, on the other hand, remains calm. The white pencil’s words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It’s true that he’s approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.
In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.
（2012•湖北卷）
请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文.
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外,文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右.
【参考范文】
Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best use of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.
（2012•浙江卷）
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动. 该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流,以下是某同学摘录的句子:“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”. 请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文:
1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；
2.举例说明理由.
注意:短文的开头已给出(不计词数).
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”
【参考范文】
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” I can’t agree more with this view. It’s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
【思路点拨】
1.仔细审题:
(1)文体:议论文
(2)时态:以一般现在时为主.
(3)人称:第一人称为主.
(4)段落:可分两段或三段
①两段:第一段:陈述观点；第二段,举例说明理由
②三段:第一段:陈述观点；第二段,举例说明理由；第三段:总结
2.归纳要点:
(1)你对于名言“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”的看法.
(2)举出一些例子来说明你的理由.
注意事项:
(1)从话题看,该题符合考生的认知发展水平. 考生可以联系熟悉的事例.
(2)要写好这篇短文,需要考生有评判性思维能力,用事实论证观点.
3.参考词汇:
(1) be in favor of; I can’t agree more; I think it is reasonable; It’s true that...
(2) take sth./ sb. for example...;for instance/example; we can learn from...
(3) in a word, in one word, in brief, therefore...
(2012·重庆卷)
某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务. 现在,你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换(exchange). 请你用英文在该网站上发帖,发布物品交换信息. 内容应包括:
·你将拿出什么物品进行交换
·具体介绍该物品
·你希望换回什么物品
·请愿意交换的朋友给你留言
注意:
(1)词数100左右；
(2)格式不限；
(3)文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称.
【思路点拨】
(1)本文是半开放式作文,要求在提供个人闲置物品交换的网站上发布物品交换信息,将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换. 发布物品信息,需要介绍物品的特点,故应写成以现在时态为主的说明文.
(2)本文应首先点明主题:自己想拿出什么物品进行交换,并重点介绍该物品的详细信息,如物品的新旧程度、功能特点等. 其次应再写想换回什么样的物品,以及自己对该物品的要求,最后应在文末写明请愿意交。