高考历年-改错真题-教师版

短文改错参考答案

2016～2012年各省市高考题

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My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to

that

where I live.Though not very

big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at

meal times.Some people even had

have to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to

his success is honest

honesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables

or

and high

quality oil are using

used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams of/about

becoming rich in the

a short period of time.Instead，he hopes that

our

his business will

grow

steady steadily.

1．that→where[考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]

2．去掉but[考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but 连用。]

3．had→have[考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现在时。]

4．honest→ honesty[考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应当用名词形式。]

5．or→and[考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择关系。]

6．using→used[考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。] 7．在dreams之后加上of或about[考查短语动词。固定短语dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。]

8．the →a [考查代词的用法。in a short period of time 为固定词组，意思是“短时间内”。]

9．our →his [考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my uncle 诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将our 改为his 。]

10．steady →steadily [考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。]

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The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how what to

do during the holiday.We can chose choose between staying at home and take taking

a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but and there is no need to spend money.But in that

case, we will learn little about the world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your our view and gain knowledges knowledge we can not get from books.Some classmates

suggest we can can /或should

go to places of interest nearby.I thought think that it is a good idea.It does not cost many much ， yet we can still learn a lot.

1．how →what [考查疑问词的用法。我和同学正在谈论假期里做什么。固定表达what to do ，如果用how 结构为how to do sth.]

2．chose →choose [考查动词形式。根据语法知识可知，情态动词can 后要用动词原形。]

3．take →taking [考查非谓语动词的用法。此处为between...and...结构，根据前面的staying at home 可知，此处也要用动名词形式，与前面保持一致。]

4．but →and [考查连词的用法。如果呆在家里，感觉舒适，还不花钱。根据句意可知，此处应是并列关系，而不是转折关系。]

5．world 前加the [考查定冠词的用法。此处特指我们所生活的这个世界。]

6．your →our [考查形容词性物主代词的用法。根据前面的主语we 可知，此处要用our ，表示“我们能够开阔我们的视野”。]

7．knowledges →knowledge [考查不可数名词的用法。knowledge 为不可数名词，没有复数形式。]

8．去掉can 或can →should [考查虚拟语气。suggest 表示“建议”，后面的宾语从句要用should do 形式，should 可以省略，故答案有两种改法。]

9．thought →think [考查一般现在时的用法。我认为这是一个好主意。根据上下文可知，此处并不是过去的看法，而是现在的看法。]

10．many →much [考查代词的用法。这样不会花很多钱。cost much 花费很多。此处也可理解为much money 的省略。]

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The teenage year years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were

also the best and worse worst years in my life.At the first ，I thought I knew everything

and could make decisions by yourself myself .However ，my parents didn ’t seem to think

such so .They always tell told me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my

parents couldn ’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely free from them.I showed

them I was independent by wear wearing strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to for

college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I

need help. 【语篇导读】 本文主要讲述了青少与父母之间的关系。

1．year →years [此处指13～19 岁的年龄，故用复数。]

2．worse →worst [与前面的best 并列，此处应用最高级。]

3．去掉the [at first 固定短语。]

4．yourself →myself [根据句意，此处指“我自己”。]

5．such →so [so 指已经提到的事。]

6．tell →told [此处应用过去时态。]

7．freely →free [此处应用形容词作表语。]

8．wear →wearing [此处用动名词作介词的宾语。]

9．to →for [固定搭配 leave for 去……。]

10．whenever 后加I [whenever 引导状语从句，从句缺少主语I 。]

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