初级中学三年必背地15篇优秀满分英语作文作品写作
第一篇：
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
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My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
【写作要求】
每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起
了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90
词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。
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Friends
What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble.
Don’t forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you
to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You can’t walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as
many friends as possible.
【写作要求】
最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：美德virtue
Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
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Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．
Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us
just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．
However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．
In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．
【写作要求】
某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：
1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；
2. 我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；
3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；
4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。
5. 有问题时，我们…
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90个左右；
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。
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How to Deal with Our Study Problems
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.
When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.
【写作要求】
学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person Who Ha s Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：
1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；
3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分
时
间都奉献给了工作；
4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。
5. 我希望……
要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90个左右；
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。
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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
My mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.
【写作要求】
假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：
1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款
2. 10月23日，星期六
3. 路径：学校—市中心
4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。
5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为…
注意：1. 报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 词数80个左右。
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Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas.
It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.
We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
【写作要求】
“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。
注意：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect our environment around us.
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How to be a greener person
It’s our duty to protect the inviyonment around us.
When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go
out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home
we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudn’t listen to pop music or spit in pulic.
Let’s do something to protect our environment.
【写作要求】
“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生
从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。
要求：①包含所选信息卡上的内容；②适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；③不能出现表明你身份的信息；④词数80左右，不含已给出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For
me,
【优秀满分范文1】The Hero in My Heart
As we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.
Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938， he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care o f his own injured hand and died.
I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.
【优秀满分范文2】The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me， Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.
Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.
With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.
第九篇：
【写作要求】
请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题, 根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文, 注意适当表达自己的看法。
1. Who is the writer of the great book?
2. What is the main idea of the book?
3. Who are the important characters?
4. What’s the theme of the story?
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My Favourite Great Book
My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain.
Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and Joe. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lost in a cave. And finally Tom and Huck find a box of gold. Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Becky is pretty with fair hair. Huck is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.
The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.
【写作要求】
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点, 写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:
1. 父母规矩太多, 过于强调学习成绩, 不理解自己等问题;
2. 你对这些问题的看法;
3. 你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go
out
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How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results.
I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
H owever, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it
is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
【写作要求】
Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；
2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
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Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.
People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.
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以“My Weekend Housework”为题写一篇短文，谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活，并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。要求：内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，表达正确。
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My Weekend Housework
On last Saturday morning I got up at about seven o’clock. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any was hing. In the afternoon I cleaned the yard. After that I folded my clothes and made my bed.
【写作要求】
实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于表达，更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。
注意：1．词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。
Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon，everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener”with
you.
Thank you for your listening!
【优秀满分范文】Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon, everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you.
Good listening can always show respect and build good relationships with people.
Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.
We’d better be patient while listening. Don’t forget to keep silent while listening. In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
第十四篇：
【写作要求】
为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
1.慎重交友
2.遇险报警
3.安全饮食
4. 其他(1-2点)
注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥
2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3)词数80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad
How to keep safe?
As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First,
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How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on
line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.
In short, safety must come first !
第十五篇：
【写作要求】
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以“Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。内容包括：
1. 你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
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Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or
in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them
are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
初中英语作文写作话题
写作话题 1. 观察下图。根据图示和参考词语，适当拓展想象空间，以Why are trees important? 为标题，用英语写一篇不少于80个词的短语。 注意： (1) 短文应切中题意，条理清楚，词句通顺，书写清晰、规范。 (2) 短文第一句话已给出。参考词语：take in carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳；oxygen氧气； insect昆虫；stop water and soil from going away防止水土流失；desert沙漠。 [解析] 1. 认真审题：本题已给出题目，我们可以根据题目，用提示词和图示为线索展开书写。 2. 确定要素： ①树能吸收二氧化碳，释放氧气。 ②树能给鸟类提供家园。 ③树能为某些小动物提供食物。 ④树能阻止水土流失。 ⑤树能防止土壤沙漠化。 ⑥植树造林，美化家园。
Why are trees important? Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you. Trees take in carbon dioxide from the ai r and make oxygen. That’s important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and insects live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees.Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, they can stop land from being desert. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautiful. Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them. 2. 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David 的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。(信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。) 提示词语：Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important…, listen, talk, read, write Dear David, I’m glad you’ll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming [解析]首先确定体裁为书信第一人称。内容 要点如下：①学中文的体会和方法；②建议；③祝愿
10篇优秀英语作文范文
1. 感谢信 假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you. Because of your help，now I am a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University，but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate （回报）your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Li Hua 2. 道歉信 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120~150；2. 可适当增加细节。
中考满分作文六大写作技巧
中考满分作文六大写作技巧 一种体裁 写记叙文，就好好把记叙文复习好。 两个原则 1、真实才能动情。真正能打动读者的，还是那些你亲身经历有真情实感的身边小事； 2、妙语才能煽情。只有风趣幽默，生动活泼的语言才能让读者眼前一亮，读之使人不断点头默叹。 三字要求 1、稳：写好事，力求能够按照记叙文的六要素把事情交代清楚，开头结尾注意点题，结尾处要点明中心，稳定的发挥好自己的写作水平。特别是写作能力较好的同学，不要强求自己必须写出惊世之作来，考试作文能够发挥自己80%的写作水平就很了不起了。 2、细：不要像电视剧情介绍那样的简单叙述，中间要加入环境描写、人物外貌、动作、语言、心理描写，能力好的同学再来
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