最新初中英语写作之思维导图运用

初中英语写作训练一、写作时需考虑哪些方面的因素？

（1）本话题所需要的词块、语块。

（2）本话题的写作模板结构等。

（3）本话题所涉及到的经典名句、谚语等。

二、困惑与对策：

困惑1：写什么？

listening

listen to tapes

do lots of listening practice

……

speaking

talk with friends in English

practice reading aloud

make up conversations

……

reading

read the textbook after the tape

……

writing

translate the Chinese mindmap into English

write to penfriends in English

……

困惑2：即使知道了写作框架，但在补充框架时又会遇到另一个困惑：如何选材？

1．选定英语导图各区域所需的词块和语块。

2．将各区域的词块和语块按段落写成连贯的语篇。

3．对照四维导图自我批改，注意人称、时态语态、句型结构的正确使用。

困惑3：写作句式单一，不清楚同样的意思可以用不同的句式表达。因此文章大多雷同，缺乏个性。

1．对相同意思，注意不同句式的表达法，选择更好的句式。

2．短文写作，表达力求精悍、生动、丰富，避免重复用一样的句式。

3．特别注意使用承上启下的词语和句子。

三、综述：思维导图英语作文写作的思考流程：

1．审题、理清思路：考虑写什么（挑选关键词，搭建作文框架）。

2．选择词语：根据话题和作文框架选用所需要的语料（词块和语块）。

3．遣词造句：根据思维导图中的语料，用合适的句型写作。

4．语篇定稿：根据思维导图修改润色作文——紧扣主题、表达准确，关联自然，语篇流畅。

实例1.【2012天津】

假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明，参加了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。请你根据下列表各中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。

芳芳明明我

1.认为自己英语好，不需要努力；花费时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服

2.因准备不足，太紧张，而没有完成演讲。1.努力学习，想别人请教；

赛前两天腿受伤，但不放弃

2.在比赛中表现良好

应该向明明学习

参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 English Speech Contest

要求：1. 词数：80~100个

2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数

3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Before the contest, Fangfang thought______________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________

高分范文 1.

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best. So she spent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn’t do well in the contest because she hadn’t got ready for the contest.

But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.

No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn from Mingming.

高分范文 2.

Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.

Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn’t need to spend more time on the contest at all. She always considered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.