中考英语作文写作高分亮点句型一：双否,without

中考英语作文写作高分亮点句型一：双否without
双重否定等于肯定，但是双重否定能加强语气，比肯定的效果要好，更加能突出想要表达的内容。

句型结构：not/no/nothing/nobody/never...+without...
我们来看第一个例句：
Water is very important to us.
这应该是我们平时都写烂了的一个句子。

我们把它改成双重否定句：
Nobody can live without water.
是不是瞬间高大上了很多。

例二：You’d better go to school or work after breakfast every morning.
修改后：You’d better never go to school or work without breakfast every morning.
例三：Work hard and then you can succeed.
修改后：You can never succeed without hard work.
例四：It is clear that he must take action to achieve his dream.
修改后：It is clear that he cannot achieve his dream without any action.
【中考实战一】2020 •北京市
“不积跬步，无以至千里。

”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。

某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语
写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。

Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything.____________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ ________________
提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress
提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge?
●What have you learned from doing so?
[参考范文]
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.
[实战积累]
这篇范文中用了两次without的双否句子。

1.文章给出的首句。

Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything.
该句中为了表示强调，将without accumulating提到了句子的最前面（注意：后面要加上逗号，与句子主体隔开。

）
2.That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation.
We can’t achieve a balance between study and hobbies without good time management.
【中考实战二】2020 •贵州省安顺市
某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛，请以“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加此次大赛。

要求如下：
1.补全标题；
2.征文应包含第一节所有信息（1. What’s your favorite food? 2. How often do you exercise?
3. How many hours do you sleep every night?
4. How do you relax yourself in your daily life?
5. What do you think of your living habits?）；
3.重点谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响和作用；
4.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。

_________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ [参考范文]
Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier
Good living habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think good living habits make me healthier.
I used to prefer meat to fruit or vegetables. But now I try all kinds of food. What’s more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day. Everyone needs sleep. I have eight to ten hours’ sleep at night. With enough sleep at night, I can be ready for school activities. In spare time I’d like to do some reading. It makes me feel relaxed.
I think my living habits are pretty healthy. Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it. I look much stronger than before. I think it is good living habits that make me healthier and healthier.
[实战积累]
将贵州省安顺市与北京市的范文作个对比。

整体来看，贵州市的范文要比北京的难度要低，行文要更加简单。

1.文章第一句：Good living habits are important in our lives.
如前文所说，这就是我们写烂了的句型。

我们可以将之改一下：
Nobody can keep healthy without good living habits.
2.With enough sleep at night, I can be ready for school activities.
修改一下：Nobody can be ready for school activities without enough sleep at night.
【注意】虽然我将这篇范文中的两处都改为了without的双重否定句，但是在实际应用中，一个句式在一篇文章中最好只使用一次。