How to write a narration

• 晚上乘车返回银川。很遗憾没有去长城， 希望下次还能去玩。这次旅行虽然很急也 很累但是我很开心.
I returned in the evening by train. It’s a pity that I didn’t climb the Great Wall, I am looking forward to the next chance. All in all, it’s a hurry and short journey. I’m tired but enjoy myself.
• 4. 内容要点： • ① 故事发生的时间、地点； • ② 涉及的主要人物； • ③ 事件发展的过程； • ④ 故事的结局。 5. 注意故事情节的合理性、完整性以及讲 述的连贯性。
• 句与句之间的过渡连接主要通过时 间和地点。
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时间：4月4日 地点：北京 人物：我和我的朋友 原因：清明节放假，准备出游 过程：1. 4日乘火车，第二天早上到达北京， 和朋友见面。 • 2. 逛了西单和王府井，人很多，小 吃也很多 • 3.第三天参观了天安门广场，毛主席 纪念馆，故宫，清华和北大。 • 结果：4月6日晚上返回。
• 2. 逛了西单和王府井，人很多，小吃也很 多 • 3.第二天参观了天安门广场，毛主席纪念馆， 故宫，清华和北大。 • 结果：4月6日返回。
• 清明节放假三天，我去了北京去见一个朋 友。 During QingMing festival, I traveled to Beijing to meet/ have fun with my friends.
• 第二天早晨到达北京，下种各样的小吃和商品。
I arrived in BeiJing next morning. As soon as I got there, I went to the famous streets XiDan and Wangfujing, where there were many people and all sorts of goods and snack.
An Unforgettable Experience
During QingMing festival, I traveled to beijing to meet my friends as well as visit the beauty of capital city in our country. I couldn’t help thinking about the moment I got Beijing. I arrived in BeiJing next morning. As soon as I got there, I went to the famous streets XiDan and Wangfujing, where there were many people and all sorts of goods and snack. The following day, as the weather was so fine, we set off to Tiananmen Square, Chairman MAO memorial hall, which was built to in memory of Mao Zedong, and Great Hall of the People , every brick of which was so solemnly. Then, the rich culture of Qinghua and Beijing University shocked me a lot. It was a wonderful experience. Later we visited Summer Palace, which was built in Qing dynasty.
I returned in the evening by train. It’s a pity that I didn’t climb the Great Wall, I am looking forward to the next time. All in all, it’s a hurry and short journey. I’m tired but enjoy myself.
How to write a narration?
• 【审题要素】 • 写作时应注意下面几点： • 1. 确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，应注意 故事情节的陈述。 • 2. 主体时态：文章是陈述过去发生的事 件，应以一般过去时为主。 • 3. 主体人称：以第一或三人称讲述发生 在自己或者他人身上的故事。
• 第二天早晨去了天安门广场，参观了毛主 席纪念馆和人民大会堂。下午去感受了清 华北大的浓郁的校风。随后参观了颐和园。 The following day, we went to Tiananmen Square, Chairman MAO memorial hall and Great Hall of the People . We really experienced a rich culture in Qinghua and Beijing University. Later I visited Summer Palace, which was built in Qing dynasty.