2017年秋博士生期末考试A卷

I.Error correction (10X1=10)

Directive: Underline the error(s) in the following sentences and write your correction(s) right below.

1.Male students had a higher rate of smoking exposure comparing to female

students. (ONE error)

2.No significantly differences found between two groups in terms of their

satisfaction with or attitudes to the medical ads. (TWO errors)

3.There were over one-third of the participants thought that the canteen food was

not delicious and one-third of them were tired of waiting in line. (ONE error)

4.Acute pain is considered as a protective and adaptive sense, which keep us

away from the noxious stimulation. (TWO errors)

5.Similarly to lack of sleep, the poor quality of sleep was associated with mental

symptoms such as inattention. (ONE error)

6.The supporters thought that food for delivery was more convenience, richer in

variety and more delicious than the food in the school canteen. (ONE error)

7.Generally, the procedures were well tolerated by majority of patients. (ONE

error)

8.No comparative study on this issue can be found in medical literatures. (ONE

error)

9. A total of 4,164 Chinese individuals who had stroke involved in this

multicenter study. (ONE error)

10.Internet also played an important role in spread sex-related knowledge to

young people. (ONE error)

II.Revision (5X2=10)

Directive: Revise the following sentences to make them academically appropriate.

1.In our study, it revealed no significant difference between different gender in

choosing a hospital.

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2.Methods included descriptive analysis mainly.

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3.About two groups on whether to use the equipment protection in the process

of movement, there was no difference between these two groups.

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4.In this study, we reported for the first time applying targeted therapy for HCSs.

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5.All respondents were MD candidates in the medical school of Fudan

University. Among these students, 48 respondents (57.83%) were in an

emergency department, 17 respondents (20.48%) in an internal medicine

department, and 18 respondents (21.69%) in a surgery department.

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