【优选】中考英语作文训练课件

I feel lucky to join you . I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener .
That’s all . Thank you for listening .
时态错误：用错时态，写错动词的形式， 第三人称单数漏加“S” 词组、短语、句型搭配与使用错误
句子结构错误：缺主语，缺谓语，“系表”不分
人称代词的主、宾格不分，大 小写，标点，单复数，冠词的
使用
修饰关系错误：不能正确使用人 称代词的各种关系；名词当动词 用或动词（或形容词）当名词用；
副词与形容词的使用 5
Dear Jim,
How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! I'm very happy to hear from you again. I love the shirt very much, Jim. And red is my favourite colour! You remembered! It7 s just my size. Every time I wear it, I will think of you. I'm fine here in China Last week I had a birthday party. Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food. We really had a wonderful time together. How, are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much. I always miss the days we were together last summer. I hope you can come to China some day. Please write back soon.
Your friend, Li Lei 18
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VIII．书面表达（共15分，02年北京海淀区） 根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表
格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、 符合逻辑的英文文段。 注意：1．字数60一80。
2．所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信 息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）
3．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要 抄写在答题卡上）
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【实例】（1997年江西中考题） 请你以校长室的名义拟写一个书面通知 ，告诉同学们明天去参加植树活动。 提示：明天是植树节，天气暖和。你们 不上课，去公园植树。早晨八点在学校 门口集合，骑自行车去。中午在那里吃 饭，请带好水和食物。（词数：50— 70words）
Yours Li Ping
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No. 9 Minzu Road, Zhongshan City,
Guangdong, China 528400 June 22nd,2002
Dear Jack, I am glad to receive your letter and know you want to have some pen friends in China. Now let me tell you something about my friend, Wei Hua, a student of Class 3, Grade 2 in Yucai Middle School. He would like to know something about your school life and your country. I m sure you will be good friends soon.
写信人地址：信封左上角 与汉语相反
Jim 438 King Street, New Town Sydney, Australia
收信人地址：信封右下角 与汉语相反
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信的正文
188 East Dongfeng Street
Weifang, Shandong, China
June 23, 2002
Dear Jim,
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称呼
地址日期
落款
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Ⅷ．书面表达(本题20分，02年山东潍坊) 假设你是Li Ping，潍坊十八中的一名学生
。请根据提示写一封约120个词的英文信和一 个英文信封。
信息提示：
收信人姓 Jim 名
收信人地 438King Street
址
Australia
New Tom,Sydney
写信人姓 Li Ping 名
biologist, grow up
good friends, do one's best, make the earth
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Dear friends , I’m very glad to introduce（介绍） myself to
you. My name is Zhang Bin . I’m fifteen years old . I live in Beijing . One of my favorite subjects is biology . I’m interested in drawing . In my free time , I often go camping（野营） , draw some pictures of plants , and enjoy the singing of birds in nature . I want to be a biologist（生物学家） when I grow up .
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一、描写 记述 （与一般的课文一样） 二、英文书信 三、英文请假条、便条 四、英文讲稿（发言稿、自我介绍 五、 英文通知
六、英文日记
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看图写话：给出画面，或英文提示，按要求 写作。
看图（或材料）填空
材料作文（近年各地市常考的题型）： 给出一定的书面（中文或英文）材料，按题目要求写作
命题作文（多为描写，记事，叙述)
That's all. Thank you for listening.
Interest Free Time Activities
Future Job
Hope
drawing
go camping, draw pictures of plants, enjoy the singing of brids in nature.
Yours, Li Lei
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C)书面表达 (共 10分， 02年湖 南 益 阳）)
请代为韩梅给英语老师Mr Smith
出写一张病假条，可选用下列单词 或短语(有的要作必要的变动)。请假 条的开头部分已给出。(字数50—70)
catch a bad cold, go swimming,
doctor, tell me, go to school, can
not, stay in bed for two days,
today and tomorrow, hope, get
well, because）
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June 20,2002 Dear Mr Smith, I'm sorry to tell you that…
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June,20,2002 Dear Mr Smith, I'm sorry to tell you that I'm not feeling well today. I have caught a bad cold because I went swimming in the river yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days. So I can't go to school today and tomorrow. I hope I' 11 get well very soon. Thank you. Your student Han Mei
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Ⅳ．书面表达(共计15分，02年河北，感谢信) 根据提示和要求完成下面短文。 假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim
从英国给你寄来一件礼物——一件红色的衬衫，并 附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来 在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信(100个词左右) 表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容：
1．向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。 2．礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，疋寸很合适，你非 常喜欢。 3．告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日 聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来 中国。
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June 21st, 2002 65 Zhonghua street Shijiazhuang 050000 Hebei China
写信人地 址 写信内容
写信日期
188 East Dongfeng Weifang,Shandong China
Street
简 介 潍 坊 ， 简 介 潍 坊 18 中 ， 学 校 生 活 ， 个人 2002年6月23日
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VIII英文信封 Li Ping 188 East Dongfeng Street Weifang, Shandong, China
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切题：用足所给材料，写 作最简单的英文句子，千 万别漏了所给的“要点材
料”
句子结构：人（物）+ 干（是）….+（宾语或表语）+ 其他
动词的时态：依据文义或句子的 意义，确定使用正确的时态并使用
准确的动词形式（最重要） 词汇、短语、句型的搭配与使用
其他：主宾格，修饰关系，标点，大小写，
文体格式
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单词拼写错误
假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织 的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准 备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。
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name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology …
Dear friends, I'm very glad to introduce myself to you.
like playing computer games, football and watching TV. I have many good friends. We help each other. There are three people in my family. They are my
father, my mother and I. I want to make friends with you. Please write to me soon. Welcome to Weifang.
How are you? I'm very glad to write the letter to you. My name is Li Ping. I'm a
Chinese boy. I'm from Weifang, China. Do you know Weifang? It's a beautiful city in Shandong. It's a kite city. I study in No. 18 Middle School. Our school is very beautiful. I'm in Class 1, Grade 3. There are 24 classes in our school. We study Chinese, maths, English and other subjects. I like English very much. I
一般现在时：常用于一般性的介绍、描写中， 常见错误是主语为第三人称单数时漏加S 被动式：is/ are + done
一般过去时： 用于过去时间里发生的事情（日记文体中），
常见的错误是，写错动词的过去式； 被动式：was / were + done
一般将来时： 用于将要发生的事件中：will + do 或 be going to do ,常见错误是，will 或 to 之后不使用动词原形； 被动式：will be + done ; is / are going to be done