2015中考英语作文第7天作文

连词和插入，可作过渡语； 巧妙连上下，文章有韵律； 条理更清晰，顺畅如水渠。
一、使用连词进行过渡 并列连词： and, but, or, so, as well as, not only… but also…, either…or…, neither…nor…, etc.
从 属连词： after, before, as soon as, when, while, as, because, since, though, although, if, until, even if, so that, in order that, etc.
I had a bad cold last week. __A__fi_rs_t___, I had a running nose, __b__u_t ____ I didn’t take it seriously. __T_h_e_n___ I began to cough. _A_f_te_r__th_a_t_, I had a fever and felt weak. _F_in_a_l_ly__, I was sent to hospital and had to live in bed for three days.
因为
②for this reason 由于这个原因
③as a result 结果
④in this way 这样
（3）表总结 ①in a word / all in all
总之
②in general / in short 总之
③generally speaking 总的来说，一般来说
④as you / we know 正如你们/我们所知
My name is Li Hua and I am studying in Guangming Middle School. I am good at English and Chinese, but I don’t do well in maths. I am always ready to help others, so all my classmates like me. In my spare time I like doing sports as well as listening to music.
⑧meanwhile / at the same time 期间，同时
⑨immediately / at once 立刻
⑩in the past / now , in the morning, at noon,
in the afternoon, at night 过去，现在，早上，中午，下午，晚上
（2）表因果 ①because of
As you know, our monitor is a good girl. She studies very hard so that she is good at all the subjects. What’s more, she likes sports. She takes an active part in the school sports meetings. In addition（此外）, she is always ready to help others. In a word, she has set us a good example.
段落练笔2 选词填空
However, in fact, in a word, but, such as, so
Time is money, ___b_u_t___ I think time is more valuable than money. The reason is that when money is spent, we can make it again. H__o_w_e_v_e_r, when time is spent, it will never return.__S_o____ we mustn’t waste our time. Some people often spend their time doing nothing useful_s_u__c_h_a_s_ smoking, drinking and so on. _I_n_f_a_c_t___, wasting time means wasting a part of valuable life. I_n__a_w_o_r_d_, we should keep a good habit of saving time.
段落练笔3 选词填空 as a result, so, unluckily, just then, a few minutes later
This afternoon when I was on the way home, it rained suddenly. _U__n_lu_c_k_i_ly_ I didn’t take an umbrella or a raincoat with me.A_s__a_r_e_s_u_l_t , I was all wet. _J_u__s_t _th_e_n_, a taxi stopped beside me and the driver asked me to get into it. The driver was so kind that he drove me to home. I said “thank you” to him and got off the taxi. _A_f_ew_m_i_nu_t_es_la_te_r_, I heard someone knock at the door. I was surprised to see the driver. He said I had left my schoolbag in his taxi, __s_o_____ he sent it to me.
例：我们的班长是个好女孩。她学习努力，各门功课 优秀。她喜欢体育活动，积极参加学校的运动会。 她还乐于助人。她给我们树立了好榜样。
一般表达
Our monitor is a good girl. She studies very hard. She is good at all the subjects. She likes sports. She takes an active part in the school sports meetings. She is always ready to help others. She
例如：我的名字叫李华，在光明中学学习。我擅长 英语和语文，但数学学得不好。我乐于助人，同学们 都很喜欢我。业余时间我喜欢作运动，喜欢听音乐。
My name is Li Hua. I am studying in Guangming Middle School. I am good at English and Chinese. I don’t do well in maths. I am always ready to help others. All my classmates like me. In my spare time I like doing sports. I like listening to music.
⑤in my opinion 我认为
（4）表举例、列举、解释说明 ①for example / for instance
例如
②take… for example 以……为例
③on the one hand …on the other hand… 一方面……另一方面……
④for one thing,…for another,… 一方面……另一方面……
简析：“较好表达”中使用插入语 as you know, what’s more, in addition, in a word, 分别起到了解释说明、递进表达和 总结全文的作用。对比“一般表达”，“较好表达”语气连贯， 行文流畅，句子之间的内在关系十分紧密。
3、常用插入语分类 （1）表时间或次序 ①first(ly), second(ly), third(ly)…
playing basketቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱall. 简析：使用插入语especially对句子进行拓展后，
把“我喜欢运动”这一特点说得更具体、更 清楚。
例2：杰克擅长英语。 一般：Jack is good at English. 较好：Jack is good at English. For example,
③more importantly 更重要的是
④obviously 显然
⑤luckily / fortunately 幸运的是
⑥unluckily / unfortunately 不幸的是
⑦believe it or not 信不信由你
段落练笔1 选词填空
finally, then, at first, after that, but
（5）表并列或递进 ①also / besides / in addition
此外；而且 ②furthermore / moreover / what’s more
此外；而且 ③what’s worse / worse still
更糟糕的是 ④even
甚至 ⑤in particular / especially
has set us a good example.
较好表达
As you know, our monitor is a good girl. She studies very hard so that she is good at all the subjects. What’s more, she likes sports. She takes an active part in the school sports meetings. In addition（此外）, she is always ready to help others. In a word, she has set us a good example.
第一，第二，第三
②at first / in the beginning 首先
③next / then / after that 其次，然后
④suddenly 突然
⑤afterwards / later 后来，随后
⑥finally / at last / in the end 最后
⑦soon / before long / after a while 不久
二、使用插入语进行过渡 英语插入语：副词、词组 作用：解释说明、转移话题、强调重点、
拓展句子和连接上下文。 写作：拓展句子和连接上下文 1、使用插入语拓展句子 例1：我喜欢运动。 一般：I like sports. 较好： I like sports, especially swimming and
尤其，特别 ⑥to one’s surprise
令某人惊讶的是 ⑦to one’s joy
令某人高兴的是
（6）表转折对比 ①however / still / yet
然而
②instead 反而，却
③on the contrary 相反
（7）表强调 ①certainly
当然，肯定
②in fact 事实上
My name is Li Hua. I am studying in Guangming Middle School. I am good at English and Chinese. I don’t do well in maths. I am always ready to help others. All my classmates like me. In my spare time I like doing sports. I like listening to music.
he can talk with foreigners in English freely. 简析：使用插入语for example通过举例说明来
强调“杰克擅长英语”。
2、使用插入语连接上下文 例：我们的班长是个好女孩。她学习努力，各门功课
优秀。她喜欢体育活动，积极参加学校的运动会。 她还乐于助人。她给我们树立了好榜样。