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2) It is believed that ads help inform people of new products. 3) If it were not for ads, people wouldn’t get …
4) How helpful ads are in providing information for people.
waste …doing …
Your attitude / opinion:
1.As far as I am concerned, …outweigh… 2.Even though…I still consider it… 3.With all its…we must acknowledge… 4.I believe we can…as long as… …
Reading • As science and technology develops , we can see
advertisements almost everywhere. (Introduction) • Advertisements help people get much information
5. With all its…we must acknowledge…
增分策略五 句式变换 Advertisements help people get much information about new products.
1) It is ads that help people get../ It is with the help of ads that people can ….
Welcome
话题写作
Topic Advertisements
Advantages
• …help us in many aspects. • …benefit … a lot ./…be beneficial to … • keep sb. informed of; • have access to; be accessible to • expose sb. to sth. , • help …compare … • have a better understanding of … • promote the sales of, sell well • educate sb. to do …/ teach sb. to do
增分策略六 注重主题句
With the help of ads , people can get much information about new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Some advertisements educate the public
about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public. (Advantages)
• Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset.(Disadvantages)
(段内句子之间衔接)
增分策略四 加强一义多形 How to express one’s opinion or suggestion 1. As far as I am concerned…/ As to me/From my point of view … we should attach more importance to …
As far as I am concerned, advertising is of use. If we are armed with enough facts from ads, it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.
(123 words)
As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere 替换为：With the development of science and technology ,
With science and technology developing
Learn to organize
Part1: introduction to your topic Part2: advantages / disadvantages Part3: your opinion
A good composition
Organization Content Language
2. As for my own idea about…I believe/think / propose / suggest …
3. Personally/ But for me, I would rather …/ prefer … to ….
4. Even though…I still consider it…
增分策略 二 使用非谓语形式
1. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which
increases the cost of products. 1) …increasing the cost of products.
2 ) …causing / leading to / resulting in/ contributing to / bringing about… …the higher prices of products.
2. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They also make us upset.
In the first place, it wastes …. In the second place , they mislead….Furthermore, they make us upset.
1.Advertisements benefit us in many ways. …
2.Ads bring a lot of benefits to us. …
3.Advertisements are beneficial to us in many aspects. … 4.Ads are playing an important part / role in our daily life. …
Appreciating the polished work With the development of science and technology, people are constantly exposed to ads.
Ads benefit us in many ways. It is believed that ads can inform people of new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Advertisements educate the public.
增分策略三 巧用过渡连接表达
1. Para.2 is about advantages of advertisements.
Para3: Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.
However, advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. (段际过渡)
2. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. Having enough facts from ads, we can ….
Armed with / Equipped with enough facts from …
Summary
• To be complete. To be accurate . • To be varied. To be coherent.
三性一复杂
内容的完整性
Hale Waihona Puke Baidu
用词的准确性
篇章的连贯性
句子的复杂度
However, there exist some bad effects on our daily life. In the first place, it is a waste of natural resources, increasing the cost of products. In the second place, not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed.
Disadvantages
• However, there exist a lot of disadvantages.
• mislead sb. / cheat sb. into /take in ..
• interrupt sb./ bother sb. • do harm to . / be harmful to , • increase the cost of …/
• I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. ( My opinion) (86words)
Learn to polish
增分策略一 使用高级词汇
替换为： people are constantly exposed to ads… People have access to …/are accessible to ads…
Advertising finds its way into / floods into our daily life….
4) How helpful ads are in providing information for people.
waste …doing …
Your attitude / opinion:
1.As far as I am concerned, …outweigh… 2.Even though…I still consider it… 3.With all its…we must acknowledge… 4.I believe we can…as long as… …
Reading • As science and technology develops , we can see
advertisements almost everywhere. (Introduction) • Advertisements help people get much information
5. With all its…we must acknowledge…
增分策略五 句式变换 Advertisements help people get much information about new products.
1) It is ads that help people get../ It is with the help of ads that people can ….
Welcome
话题写作
Topic Advertisements
Advantages
• …help us in many aspects. • …benefit … a lot ./…be beneficial to … • keep sb. informed of; • have access to; be accessible to • expose sb. to sth. , • help …compare … • have a better understanding of … • promote the sales of, sell well • educate sb. to do …/ teach sb. to do
增分策略六 注重主题句
With the help of ads , people can get much information about new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Some advertisements educate the public
about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public. (Advantages)
• Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset.(Disadvantages)
(段内句子之间衔接)
增分策略四 加强一义多形 How to express one’s opinion or suggestion 1. As far as I am concerned…/ As to me/From my point of view … we should attach more importance to …
As far as I am concerned, advertising is of use. If we are armed with enough facts from ads, it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.
(123 words)
As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere 替换为：With the development of science and technology ,
With science and technology developing
Learn to organize
Part1: introduction to your topic Part2: advantages / disadvantages Part3: your opinion
A good composition
Organization Content Language
2. As for my own idea about…I believe/think / propose / suggest …
3. Personally/ But for me, I would rather …/ prefer … to ….
4. Even though…I still consider it…
增分策略 二 使用非谓语形式
1. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which
increases the cost of products. 1) …increasing the cost of products.
2 ) …causing / leading to / resulting in/ contributing to / bringing about… …the higher prices of products.
2. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They also make us upset.
In the first place, it wastes …. In the second place , they mislead….Furthermore, they make us upset.
1.Advertisements benefit us in many ways. …
2.Ads bring a lot of benefits to us. …
3.Advertisements are beneficial to us in many aspects. … 4.Ads are playing an important part / role in our daily life. …
Appreciating the polished work With the development of science and technology, people are constantly exposed to ads.
Ads benefit us in many ways. It is believed that ads can inform people of new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Advertisements educate the public.
增分策略三 巧用过渡连接表达
1. Para.2 is about advantages of advertisements.
Para3: Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life.
However, advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. (段际过渡)
2. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. Having enough facts from ads, we can ….
Armed with / Equipped with enough facts from …
Summary
• To be complete. To be accurate . • To be varied. To be coherent.
三性一复杂
内容的完整性
Hale Waihona Puke Baidu
用词的准确性
篇章的连贯性
句子的复杂度
However, there exist some bad effects on our daily life. In the first place, it is a waste of natural resources, increasing the cost of products. In the second place, not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed.
Disadvantages
• However, there exist a lot of disadvantages.
• mislead sb. / cheat sb. into /take in ..
• interrupt sb./ bother sb. • do harm to . / be harmful to , • increase the cost of …/
• I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. ( My opinion) (86words)
Learn to polish
增分策略一 使用高级词汇
替换为： people are constantly exposed to ads… People have access to …/are accessible to ads…
Advertising finds its way into / floods into our daily life….