高考英语写作专题 地点介绍教案

高考英语写作专题地点介绍教案

写前输入：

1）用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

above in front of in the centre of on the left

across below in the distance on the right

beyond nearby opposite to over

also further next to on top of

up down close to beneath

under around near to along

2）有关地点说明文应该着重掌握面积﹑人口﹑位置﹑环境﹑今昔对比等。以城市为例：（请仔细体会下面的句子的精彩之处）

1．Our city covers … square kilometers

2．Our city has an area of …square kilometers

3．The size of our city is ... square kilometers

4．The population of our city is…

5．Our city has a population of …

6．Our city is located in…,

7．It is very convenient for you to come to our city…

8．You can take a bus, a train or a plane to….

9．The best way to experience… is to take a bus tour.

10．It takes … to take a bus from… to…

11．… is only a few bus stops from downtown.

12．… is within eas y reach.

13．The city stretches itself lazily along…..

14．The city is well-known/famous for its…/as…

15．The city offers …..and a variety of …

16．Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.

17．You can go on the city tours to enjoy the sights, taste the local food, explore the lively nightlife and learn about its history and culture.

18．If you are interested in …, you can…. If you prefer…, you can…

19．After exploring …, you can relax and enjoy a good meal in…

20．There’re … where visitors can find shade from the hot sun and a moment’s rest from the busy city.

21．A walk around …is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.

22．The city is home to …

23．The city treats visitors to (blue seas)…

24．… is a must-see for tourists, as……

25．The city, know n as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.

26．…may explain why people spend so much time on trips to …

27．… reminds visitors that it is an important…

28．You are sure to have a wonderful time in….

29．Few visitors leave the city feeling disappointed.

教师点拨

3) 近几年的高考书面表达已经提高了能力的要求，鼓励考生多使用高级词汇和复杂句型，这样可以直接影响高考书面表达的得分档次。不过，如果考生是因尝试高级词汇和复杂句型出现的少量错误可以不扣分。同学们应该学会使用分词短语﹑with复合结构﹑定语从句﹑强调句型﹑感叹句﹑倒装句和it作形式主语等复杂句型。具体的地说有：

As we can see , …

It is well-known to us all that…

It is∕was… who∕that…

It is∕was ＋adj.∕n.＋for ∕of sb. to do sth.

so …that …too … to …

with ＋n.∕ prep.∕v-ing.∕v-ed., ……

How ＋adj.∕adv.＋subject＋be! What＋adj.＋n.＋subject＋be!

因此，只要考生准确地使用了以上这些高级词汇和复杂句型，就一定会增强文章的表达效果，也就一定能在高考英语的书面表达中获得较为理想的成绩。

范文欣赏与学习

范文1：江苏卷2004假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括表中的内容:

自然情况位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住

成就经济发展迅速，新建了不少工厂、住房、道路

存在问题水、空气污染，交通拥挤

对江城发展的看法(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意: 1. 回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

2. 词数120左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3. 参考词汇:经济economy n.

Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.

In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Xiao Hua

范文2：全国卷2006（I）假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

注意：1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。

June 8

Dear Bob,