月考作文及评分标准

第四题：书面表达（20分）

假如你叫李华，是某中学高一的新生。请用英语给你的英国笔友Jim写一封信，介绍你的高一学习生活情况。信中应包括以下内容：

1. 早晚的作息安排。

2. 课程及课余活动。

3. 你的感受。

注意：

1. 信件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；

2. 词数：100左右。

Dear Jim,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student. ___________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Li Hua

内容是否完整，条理是否清楚；交际是否得体，语言是否准确。内容完整，条理清楚；

交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。

18-20 优秀：内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。

15-17 良好：内容完整，条理较清楚；交际较得体，表达时考虑到了交际的需求；体现出一定的语言运用能力。

12-14 合格：内容完整，有交际，有一些语法错误但不影响整体表达。

9-11 四类文：内容不完整（少要点），缺乏交际意识，勉强能够用英文表达，且达到规定词数。

6-8 五类文：内容不完整（少要点），无交际，勉强能够用英文表达，词数没有达到要求的50%

1-5 六类文：内容不完整（少要点），无交际，基本无法用英文表达。

Dear Jim,

I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student. I am writing to introduce my school life to you, hoping that you would know more about me.

Since I study in a boarding school, my time is strictly scheduled. In the mornings, we usually get up before 6 o’clock so that we will get ready for the morning exercises at 6:30. After about 10 minutes’ jogging, we have nutritive breakfast in the school canteen, which provide energy for our study and activities in the whole morning. Our study load is so heavy that we don’t go to bed until 22:00 every night, which is the happiest moment in a whole day.

As for the day-time study, we have more subjects than we did in junior high school, each

opening a new gate of knowledge for us. Besides, we also have optional courses on Thursday afternoons, where we can choose whatever we like to explore. Spare-time activities such as playing basketball and singing are our favorite since they will relax us and reduce our pressure.

Living such a busy and rich life makes me feel happy and excited. Although sometimes I feel tired, the thought that I am in a process to better myself always drives the tiredness away.

How about your lifestyle in England? Do you mind sharing it with me?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua