2013年9月雅思写作考试题汇总

2013年9月雅思写作考试题汇总+解析

9月7日BY 上海环球雅思邹燕萍

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首先分析题目，类似于地图题。有两张，介绍了美国和日本办公室的相关格局。之所以只能说类似于地图题，是因为过往的经验告知大家，地图类一般考的最多的都是城镇变迁这个类别。这次考试的图型不是流程图，近似于地图。但不是体现时间变化的地图，而是类似于两个地方同一个时间点的格局比较。没有明显时间标志词的时候，时态上可以选择一般现在时。

写作方法上，原则上一个图形写一段。然后是读题，小作文忌讳主观评论，更需要的是客观描述图形。比如本次考试，可以先看第一个日本办公室，总体是按照部门从上到下来落座；而美国的办公室更多按照功能来划分，从左到右来落座，分成功能房，员工区，管理区。不建议学生过多的添加主观评论，比如日本人是一个压迫式的格局，美国是一个平等的格局等等。措辞需要客观。

框架提示：

开头段

The two diagrams illustrate the structure in a typical Japanese office compared with that in an American office.

中间第一段

A careful analysis of the first diagram makes it clear that seats are generally arranged based on one’s title. Specifically, it is the general manager who holds the central as well as top position in the office. As to other employees, they are divided, horizontally, into different groups. Within each section, the white-collar workers are seated on either side of the table, with their section manager sitting in the front.

中间第二段

Different from what is organized in Japanese offices, the American tend to utilize the space by function. The office is separated, from left to right, into three parts. On the left side, there are four rooms for copying, storage as well as conference. Adjacent to these four rooms are a number of independent studios for employees who are seated in the middle of the office. On the right side are several rooms for section managers and the general manager. Most notably, the seat for the general manager is located in the lowest right corner, contrary to the top middle position for the manager in Japan.

结尾段

In summary, clear from these two pictures is the specific organization of a typical Japanese office versus that of an American. It is noticeable that the Japanese tend to arrange the space according to one’s position while the American prefer a function-based office.

二雅思大作文部分

题目：Nuclear energy is the best source of power in meeting ever-increasing energy needs，To what extent do you agree or disagree?

提示：分析文章关键词是“nuclear energy”,题目类型是观点类别的，所以需要考生开头段提出自己明确的观点。笔者在观点类别的教学中，建议考生开头段提出观点之后，中间至少两个分论点来支撑自己的总观点。如果有条件可以进行中间第三段即让步反驳段的写作。结尾段需要重申观点，条件允许提出解决行的建议。

思路：笔者上课讲授过五大思考问题的基本原则，比如金钱，身心健康，文化，效率和环境原则。

金钱原则：核能的生产成本相对较低(Low operating costs relatively)

身心健康原则：

1.核辐射，核泄漏危害健康(be exposed to radioactive contamination)

2.有被利用到战争中的可能性

During the operation of nuclear power plants, radioactive waste is pr

oduced, which in turn can be used for the production of nuclear wea pons. In addition, the same know-how used to design nuclear power pl ants can to a certain extent be used to build nuclear weapons (nucl ear proliferation).

环境：相对清洁，比起化石燃料. Lower carbon dioxide (and other greenhouse gases) released into the atmosphere in power generation

效率原则：运用范围更广.Large power-generating capacity able to meet industrial and city needs .

观点问题：这个话题，很难规定大家怎么写。建议是你正面的素材充分，就写她是很好的能源。如果是反面素材多，就写她的弊端过多。接下来挑选的是正面观点（即利大于弊）进行框架写作。

文章框架：

Intro:

导入话题

The dialogue about using nuclear power – and expanding it – centers on weighing the risks against the rewards. A number of people are afraid of its use, or more exactly, afraid of hidden dangers associated with its use.

2) 我的观点

Despite that, I am strongly convinced that the benefits of nuclear power will overweigh the disadvantages in the long run.

Body 1:

1)分论点

First of all, large power-generating capacity adds force to the use of nuclear energy.

2)论证思路：To be more specific, low-power technologies like solar might meet only local, residential, or office needs but cannot generate power for heavy manufacturing. On the contrary, nuclear energy could satisfy not only household, commercial but also industrial needs.

Body 2

1.分论点

Moreover, nuclear energy proves to be a clean energy compared with fossil fuels.

2.论证思路：Nuclear power generation does emit relatively low amounts of carbon

dioxide (CO2). The emissions of green house gases and therefore the

contribution of nuclear power plants to global warming is therefore

relatively little.