八年级英语下册 Module 4 Seeing the doctor模块主题写作四课件 (新版)外研版
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模块主题写作四
话题分析 本模块以“健康”为话题，以“看病”为主题，让学生 根据提示写出关于健康生活的短文，并能针对病情提出合理 建议。通过本模块学习可以提高学生参加体育运动的意识， 使学生学会反思自己或父母的生活是否健康，并学会关心他 人。
模块主题写作四
典型例题
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你发来电子邮件，说 他总是感觉很疲惫，以至于不能集中精力听课。请根据以下提 示词，给Jack回一封电子邮件。
素材积累
常用短语 1．感觉疲惫 _f_e_e_l__t_i_r_e_d__ 2．吃早餐 __e_a_t_/_h_a_v_e__b_r_e_a_k_f_a_s_t_____ 3．帮助你好好学习 _h_e_l_p__y_o_u__s_t_u_d_y__w_e_l_l_____ 4．做更多的锻炼 __d_o_/_t_a_k_e_m_o_r_e___e_x_e_r_c_i_s_e__ 5．使你保持健康 _m_a_k_e__y_o_u__k_e_e_p__h_e_a_l_t_h_y_/_f_it 6．有八九个小时的睡眠
均衡饮食keep a balanced diet; 按时饮食have meals regularly
How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy._________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.
常用句型 1．I'm sorry to hear that… 2．Let me… 3．First, you should… 4．…make you keep healthy. 5．It is also important to have… 6．I hope…
模块主题写作四
高分模板
Dear Jack, I'm sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let
me give you some advice. First, you should eat breakfast every morning. Eating
breakfast can help you study well. Then, you should do more exercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also important to have eight or nine hours' sleep every night. Good sleep can make you feel well. Try to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well.
_h_a_v_e__e_i_g_h_t__o_r__n_i_n_e__h_o_u_r_s_'__s_l_e_e_p__ 7．尽力做某事 t_r_y__t_o__d_o__s_t_h 8．有健康的生活方式 _h_a_v_e__a__h_e_a_l_t_h_y__l_i_f_e_s_t_y_l_e
模块主题写作四
模块主题写作四
One possible version：
How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Then what can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips： First, you should have healthy eating habits. You'd better keep a balanced diet and have meals regularly. Don't eat junk food. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don't eat too much meat. Don't drink too much coffee because it's bad for you. Second, you shouldn't stay up. You can play sports in your spare time. Sports can make you stronger and healthier.
模块主题写作四
小试身手
[2016·来宾] 根据以下提示，请以 “How to Keep Healthy”为题写 一篇短文。从良好的生活习惯、适当的锻炼以及健康的饮食习惯等方面，为 “how to keep healthy”提出良好的建议。 要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2．不得使用真实的地名、校名和姓名等； 3．词数：80 左右。文章的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 部分参考词汇：熬夜stay up；垃圾食品junk food;
I hope these can help you.
Your源自文库， Li Hua
模块主题写作四
名师点评 本文语言流畅，结构严谨，内容齐全。 文章开头“I'm sorry to hear that…”表达了对
笔友的安慰；第二段中，作者用到了关于提建议的几种 不同的表达方式，体现了作者较高的英语写作水平。邮 件以“I hope…”结尾，表达了对笔友的祝愿。
模块主题写作四
思路点拨
表示安慰 提出建议 表达祝愿
I’m sorry to hear that…Let me…
First,you should… Then,you should … It is also important to have …
I hope these can help you.
模块主题写作四
提示词：help, exercise, keep healthy, sleep, try 要求：1.词句通顺，语言流畅，行文连贯；
2．70词左右。 _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________
话题分析 本模块以“健康”为话题，以“看病”为主题，让学生 根据提示写出关于健康生活的短文，并能针对病情提出合理 建议。通过本模块学习可以提高学生参加体育运动的意识， 使学生学会反思自己或父母的生活是否健康，并学会关心他 人。
模块主题写作四
典型例题
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack给你发来电子邮件，说 他总是感觉很疲惫，以至于不能集中精力听课。请根据以下提 示词，给Jack回一封电子邮件。
素材积累
常用短语 1．感觉疲惫 _f_e_e_l__t_i_r_e_d__ 2．吃早餐 __e_a_t_/_h_a_v_e__b_r_e_a_k_f_a_s_t_____ 3．帮助你好好学习 _h_e_l_p__y_o_u__s_t_u_d_y__w_e_l_l_____ 4．做更多的锻炼 __d_o_/_t_a_k_e_m_o_r_e___e_x_e_r_c_i_s_e__ 5．使你保持健康 _m_a_k_e__y_o_u__k_e_e_p__h_e_a_l_t_h_y_/_f_it 6．有八九个小时的睡眠
均衡饮食keep a balanced diet; 按时饮食have meals regularly
How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy._________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.
常用句型 1．I'm sorry to hear that… 2．Let me… 3．First, you should… 4．…make you keep healthy. 5．It is also important to have… 6．I hope…
模块主题写作四
高分模板
Dear Jack, I'm sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let
me give you some advice. First, you should eat breakfast every morning. Eating
breakfast can help you study well. Then, you should do more exercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also important to have eight or nine hours' sleep every night. Good sleep can make you feel well. Try to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well.
_h_a_v_e__e_i_g_h_t__o_r__n_i_n_e__h_o_u_r_s_'__s_l_e_e_p__ 7．尽力做某事 t_r_y__t_o__d_o__s_t_h 8．有健康的生活方式 _h_a_v_e__a__h_e_a_l_t_h_y__l_i_f_e_s_t_y_l_e
模块主题写作四
模块主题写作四
One possible version：
How to Keep Healthy Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Then what can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips： First, you should have healthy eating habits. You'd better keep a balanced diet and have meals regularly. Don't eat junk food. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don't eat too much meat. Don't drink too much coffee because it's bad for you. Second, you shouldn't stay up. You can play sports in your spare time. Sports can make you stronger and healthier.
模块主题写作四
小试身手
[2016·来宾] 根据以下提示，请以 “How to Keep Healthy”为题写 一篇短文。从良好的生活习惯、适当的锻炼以及健康的饮食习惯等方面，为 “how to keep healthy”提出良好的建议。 要求：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2．不得使用真实的地名、校名和姓名等； 3．词数：80 左右。文章的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 部分参考词汇：熬夜stay up；垃圾食品junk food;
I hope these can help you.
Your源自文库， Li Hua
模块主题写作四
名师点评 本文语言流畅，结构严谨，内容齐全。 文章开头“I'm sorry to hear that…”表达了对
笔友的安慰；第二段中，作者用到了关于提建议的几种 不同的表达方式，体现了作者较高的英语写作水平。邮 件以“I hope…”结尾，表达了对笔友的祝愿。
模块主题写作四
思路点拨
表示安慰 提出建议 表达祝愿
I’m sorry to hear that…Let me…
First,you should… Then,you should … It is also important to have …
I hope these can help you.
模块主题写作四
提示词：help, exercise, keep healthy, sleep, try 要求：1.词句通顺，语言流畅，行文连贯；
2．70词左右。 _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________