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A reasonable approach to the actual writing process including editing to make it accurate and clear will help one to produce effective reports efficiently.
If
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
Laser
is one of the most sensational developments in recent years, because we can apply it to many field of science and adapt it to practical uses. A Laser is one of the most sensational developments in recent years, because of its application to many fields of science and its adaptability to practical uses.
4. A reasonable approach to the actual writing process including editing to make it accurate and clear will help you to produce effective reports efficiently. (Avoid the pronoun “you” and the abstract noun is preferred.)
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Emphasis should be placed on the discussion of the report for this readership.
Ex. Rewrite the following sentences according to the instruction in the brackets.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
A Despite potential benefits
of such techniques, serious concerns have been raised concerning the potential environmental and medical consequences of GMOs. Although there are potential benefits of such techniques, people have serious concerns concerning the potential environmental and medical consequences of GMOs.
formality
Long and formal words are used instead of words used in daily communication. Complex grammatical structures such as nominal phrases, subordinate clauses and passives are preferred. Avoid using the second person pronouns such as “you”, etc. these pronouns make your writing sound like you are address readers orally. Eliminate contractions such as isn’t, don’t, you’re, etc. which are considered too informal and conversational for academic writing. Avoid run-on sentences. Run-on sentences are common in speech and other informal interactions because we just keep adding something we wanted to say. In writing, however, these run-ons become distracting and hard to follow.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
People present
பைடு நூலகம்
a fairly consistent picture of its short-term effects on users in many publications. A A fairly consistent picture of its short-term effects on users is presented in many publications.
These sections may be broken down into a variety of subsections, and they may be arranged in a variety of ways.
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2. We should place the emphasis on the discussion of the report for this readership. (Use passive sentence)
考试题型
Part I Translation (10%) Part II Sentence-evaluating (10%) Part III Sentence-rewriting (15%) Part IV Plagiarism-checking (10%) Part V Sentence-revising (10%) Part VI Abstract-analyzing (15%) Part VII Paragraph-writing (15%) Part VIII Summary-writing (15%)
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
Men were reluctant to retire, because they anticipated that they would be deprived of money rather than work. A Reluctance among men to retire was associated with anticipated deprivations, mainly of money rather than of attachment to work.
Ex. Rewrite the following sentences according to the instruction in the brackets.
1.
We may break these sections down into a variety of subsections and arrange them in a variety of ways. (Use passive sentence)
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
While
we have already learned much about the acute physiological effects of Cannabis(大麻), there’s still much we need to learn. A While much has already been learned about the acute physiological effects of Cannabis, much remains to be learned.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
one acquaints himself with the manufacturer closely, it will reveal that his consuming passion is production. A Close acquaintance with the manufacturer reveals that his consuming passion is production.
Ex. Rewrite the following sentences according to the instruction in the brackets.
5. If we investigate the relative effectiveness of various swimming strokes, we have to detail the number of swimmers tested. (Use nominal phrases)
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This subsection has rhetorical usefulness in that it enhances the credibility by indicating that the data presented is based on the fact that one has known thoroughly what has been done in the field.
3. This subsection is rhetorically useful because it makes you more credible by indicating that the data presented is based on the fact that you have known thoroughly what has been done in the field. (Avoid the pronoun “you” and the abstract noun is preferred.)
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
A Failure
to recognize the serious problem of growing population will lead to a big mistake. If we don’t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
A The
above analysis seems to indicate that many factors contribute to global warming. From the above analysis, we can see that there are many factors influence global warming.
A reasonable approach to the actual writing process including editing to make it accurate and clear will help one to produce effective reports efficiently.
If
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
Laser
is one of the most sensational developments in recent years, because we can apply it to many field of science and adapt it to practical uses. A Laser is one of the most sensational developments in recent years, because of its application to many fields of science and its adaptability to practical uses.
4. A reasonable approach to the actual writing process including editing to make it accurate and clear will help you to produce effective reports efficiently. (Avoid the pronoun “you” and the abstract noun is preferred.)
rewrite
Emphasis should be placed on the discussion of the report for this readership.
Ex. Rewrite the following sentences according to the instruction in the brackets.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
A Despite potential benefits
of such techniques, serious concerns have been raised concerning the potential environmental and medical consequences of GMOs. Although there are potential benefits of such techniques, people have serious concerns concerning the potential environmental and medical consequences of GMOs.
formality
Long and formal words are used instead of words used in daily communication. Complex grammatical structures such as nominal phrases, subordinate clauses and passives are preferred. Avoid using the second person pronouns such as “you”, etc. these pronouns make your writing sound like you are address readers orally. Eliminate contractions such as isn’t, don’t, you’re, etc. which are considered too informal and conversational for academic writing. Avoid run-on sentences. Run-on sentences are common in speech and other informal interactions because we just keep adding something we wanted to say. In writing, however, these run-ons become distracting and hard to follow.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
People present
பைடு நூலகம்
a fairly consistent picture of its short-term effects on users in many publications. A A fairly consistent picture of its short-term effects on users is presented in many publications.
These sections may be broken down into a variety of subsections, and they may be arranged in a variety of ways.
rewrite
2. We should place the emphasis on the discussion of the report for this readership. (Use passive sentence)
考试题型
Part I Translation (10%) Part II Sentence-evaluating (10%) Part III Sentence-rewriting (15%) Part IV Plagiarism-checking (10%) Part V Sentence-revising (10%) Part VI Abstract-analyzing (15%) Part VII Paragraph-writing (15%) Part VIII Summary-writing (15%)
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
Men were reluctant to retire, because they anticipated that they would be deprived of money rather than work. A Reluctance among men to retire was associated with anticipated deprivations, mainly of money rather than of attachment to work.
Ex. Rewrite the following sentences according to the instruction in the brackets.
1.
We may break these sections down into a variety of subsections and arrange them in a variety of ways. (Use passive sentence)
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
While
we have already learned much about the acute physiological effects of Cannabis(大麻), there’s still much we need to learn. A While much has already been learned about the acute physiological effects of Cannabis, much remains to be learned.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
one acquaints himself with the manufacturer closely, it will reveal that his consuming passion is production. A Close acquaintance with the manufacturer reveals that his consuming passion is production.
Ex. Rewrite the following sentences according to the instruction in the brackets.
5. If we investigate the relative effectiveness of various swimming strokes, we have to detail the number of swimmers tested. (Use nominal phrases)
rewrite
This subsection has rhetorical usefulness in that it enhances the credibility by indicating that the data presented is based on the fact that one has known thoroughly what has been done in the field.
3. This subsection is rhetorically useful because it makes you more credible by indicating that the data presented is based on the fact that you have known thoroughly what has been done in the field. (Avoid the pronoun “you” and the abstract noun is preferred.)
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
A Failure
to recognize the serious problem of growing population will lead to a big mistake. If we don’t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.
EX. Compare the following pairs of sentences and
discuss their style.
A The
above analysis seems to indicate that many factors contribute to global warming. From the above analysis, we can see that there are many factors influence global warming.