高考英语新题型之读后续写

高考英语新题型之读后续写
高考英语新题型之读后续写

高考英语新题型之读后续写

高考英语新题型“新”在哪里?

1.新高考卷取消短文改错题型(部分地区删减一篇阅读)

2.新高考卷写作分为两部分:

第一部分:应用文写作15分(80词左右);

第二部分:读后续写(150词左右)或者概要写作(60词左右)25分(两种形式在不同考次不定期使用)。

那么,何为读后续写、概要写作呢?下面,小简老师将通过一篇文章形式和同学们说说读后续写,概要写作后边会单独再说一下。

读后续写概要介绍

读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式,旨在考查考生的综合语言运用能力。读后续写就是给出前文,写后文。理论上来说,前文用于阅读输入信息,信息经过大脑思维转换后,形成对前文的理解,理解一定是建立在确定主旨大意,明确前文作者态度和关键信息的前提下,在大脑思维中建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括,在此基础上,继续建立顺序思维,确定接下来在理解前文的基础上如何安排下面继续可能或者应该出现的内容。

续写部分内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用、语言的润色等,更重要的是,你要明白你应该如何整理续写内

容,以使得其和前文形成统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。

续写是读和写的统一,之间穿插了对阅读能力、概括能力、思维转化能力、语言领悟能力、语言组织能力、创造性思维能力以及对上下文逻辑关系的掌握等的考查。

续写对于前文文本的选择应该是脉络清晰,能够为不同层次考生根据不同能力确认主旨信息的文本。前文的选择一定既要信息完整,可以提炼观点,又要为下面的续写留有余地,考验命题者的选文判断能力。

高质量地完成读后续写最重要的是要通过大量阅读信息的输入,形成一定的阅读思维能力。沉淀思维,归纳信息,梳理脉络,转换思维,那么阅读的思维能力注定会迅速提升。对续写的前文的理解是这一题型的最关键部分,多读,多思维,多沉淀,多拓展,这是应对读后续写的重要环节!

读后续写题型特点

读后续写的阅读材料一般以记叙文和夹叙夹议文为主。一般来说,记叙文浅显易懂,但故事情节多曲折动人,故事线索的逻辑性也较强。要求考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。情节曲折跌宕,线索性和逻辑性较强。考生要抓住故事的叙事线索,依据原文的写作思路续写文章,并适当发散。

写作要求考生在读懂原文的基础上,在规定时间内展开合理的想象,并运用所学的英语知识完成一篇约150词左右的续写。原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语,所续写短文应使用5个以上。续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已经给出。

考生所续写的部分要有创新性,不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造,同时,还要带有原文色彩(必须使用原文5处以上的关键词语)。

读后续写不是随心所欲地写,而是要在所给段落开头和所标出关键词的帮助下完成续写部分。其中,段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似,在某种程度上引导你的思路向某个方面发展,所续写部分不能脱离各自的段落开头语另起炉灶,要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。

读后续写要求读写并重,需要考生对给定材料精确理解,这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题。续写部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的,考生可根据自己对上文材料的理解,对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。

归纳起来讲,读后续写的特征如下:

1.创造性:即发挥想象力,该题型具有一定的开放性,考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造;

2.逻辑性:即根据已提供的关键信息,按照可能的合理的方

向续写,使文章逻辑结构完整;

3.丰富性:即语言能力的充分体现,词汇句法的准确与复杂程度,细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。

读后续写评分原则

1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。

2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。

3.词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:

(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;

(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;

(4)上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

6.如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。

各档次的给分范围和要求见下表

读后续写题型破解

写作步骤

1.读文:精读文章,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。确定文章体裁和题材(话题)。注意文中的关键词,也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件。

有效的阅读方法是:阅读原文的过程中确定文章的体裁→理清文章的结构及作者的写作意图→明白原文的情节→阅读过程中注意划线词语(因为这些词语是续写下文的暗示)→推敲已给出的续写段首,推理下文的发展方向→揣摩作者原文的语气,判断作者的情感态度。

2.审题:仔细审题,明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生才能做到“心中有数”。

3.谋段:在读文、审题的基础上,先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字,再构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节和划线词汇确定好段落大意,选出每一段可能要用到的原文中带下划线的关键词。结合这些关键词,确定每一段的写作要点。增加次要情节,增加常识情节,这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子,以满足续写词数要求。

4.初写:拟写草稿,修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。写作时要注意所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语(5个以上)。

5.定稿:写好初稿后,考生要结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容。既要确保不出现与原材料相矛盾的地方,又要做到内容上前后连贯,语句通顺。润色续写部分,使之过渡与衔接自然,尽量使用高级词汇或短语,运用各种从句、介词短语结构、非谓语动词等高级表达。标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。

如何写好开头

1.使用副词

(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. (时间副词衔接+环境描写)2.使用形容词短语

(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. (并列情绪形容词)

(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. (状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句)

(201806浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. (情绪形容词+从句)

(201806浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.

3.使用非谓语动词

(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. (-ing 形式+情绪形容词)

(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued

to walk along the stream to find the way out.(-ing形式+状态形容词)

4.使用介词短语

At the end of the lane, he suddenly stopped.

At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.

5.使用从句

As he walked, he whistled

Although he was afraid, he jumped right in.

6.使用对话或独白

(201706浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac.

7.设定情景

(201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty(高耸的)mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. (视觉+环境描写+拟人)

8.动作描写

(201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.

Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? (动作描写+问句衔接)

如何营造故事的高潮(climax)

方法1.增加外部冲突

增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。

1)角色之间的冲突(人物观点差异,竞争需要等)

如:(201711浙江高考)On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张,心有不悦(母子的观点不一)

2)角色与环境之间的冲突

如:(201706浙江高考)Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. ……he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Mac's heart jumped. ……, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, ……. Then it ……, tearing open

his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back ……

Mac骑车独自行,路遇饿狼,与之搏斗,险象环生。(人--角色与狼--环境大战)

3)时间依赖的发展:决策变得紧急

如:(201706浙江高考)The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape! 骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景,刻不容缓)

4)增加障碍:人物角色必须克服挑战, 以达到他们的目标如:(201806浙江高考)But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路(障碍1)---天色渐黑(障碍2)---又累又饿(障碍3)----心理恐慌(障碍4)

方法2. 放大内心冲突

放大内心冲突(你的角色的内心斗争)也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。现在我们在来看高考读后续写中的

内心冲突是如何体现的。

如:(201610浙江高考)Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.”She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.

夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及(内心冲突的刻画)内心独白(往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一)

方法3. 使用环境描写增加不确定性

充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用。当故事角色在碰到困难时候,我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗、恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写增强了高潮元素,我们感受到了紧张的倍增。

例1:Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷)

例2:It didn’t take long for the forest to be enveloped in

darkness(黑暗). Her rasping(急促的)breath steamed(寒冷)in the moonlight and her throat was parched(干渴的)from thirst.

几点注意

1.后续情节一般为故事的高潮或结局,要尽量符合原文思路,设计并发展情节,想象要合理,情节要连贯,并求得与读者的心理共鸣,让读者回味无穷。

2.续写时心态要端正,所续写内容要积极、健康向上,把事物美好的一面展示出来。

3.利用自己已有的知识和经验,在继承原作者风格和语言基础之上,准确、地道地表达,充分展示语言的表现力。提高关联词与过渡语的使用率,增强整句表现力。

4.如果所给短文为议论文,那么议论文中的段落首句多为主题句,观点鲜明。续写时,要围绕段落分论点确定论证方法,如正反对比、例证等。

2017浙江英语高考新题型-读后续写6篇

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浙江英语高考读后续写

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