英语作文 求助信
How to Write a Letter of Request
Task 1：下面是2011课标卷高考作文，请阅读范文，并找出求助信件的框架结构（通常为三部分）：假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简历
2.求助内容
3. 约定时间
4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua@https://www.360docs.net/doc/c6324961.html,;Phone:12345678)
注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
I came here last month and I find my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:lihua@https://www.360docs.net/doc/c6324961.html,; 12345678. Thanks for your kindness in advance.
Look forward to your reply.
yours,
Lihua
Common structure of a request letter:
1. Opening: Introduce yourself & _______________ politely.
2. Body: Describe your _________ & _____________ again. Make some specific requirements if necessary.
3. End: Give ___________ to the person who will help you.
Useful expressions for writing a request letter:
https://www.360docs.net/doc/c6324961.html,eful expressions for an opening：
写信寻求帮助。(用至少两种方式表达)
(a). ________________________________________________________________________________.
(b). ________________________________________________________________________________. More expressions:
https://www.360docs.net/doc/c6324961.html,eful expressions for describing your problems:
高三学生，地理学习有困难。(用至少两种方式表达)
(a) _______________________________________________________________________________.
(b) _______________________________________________________________________________. More expressions:
努力过，但人际交往仍然有问题。(用至少两种方式表达)
(a) ______________________________________, interpersonal relationship is still a headache for me.
(b) ______________________________________, interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle for me to
overcome.
https://www.360docs.net/doc/c6324961.html,eful expressions for feelings, request & appreciation：
(1) Having failed for so many times, I ________________________________________.（描述情绪）
(2) 请求帮助，表示谢意。（用至少两种方式表达）
（a）________________________________________________________________________________. （b）_________________________________________________________________________________. More expressions:
Task 2 结合所学句型、根据提示、适当拓展，撰写下面的求助信：
（2011山东卷）假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：
a．询问Tom的生活和学习情况；b．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；c．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：a．词数：100左右；b．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
It’s a month since you studied in Beijing. ①(问候) __________________________________?
I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. ②（我要认真准备）_____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________. However, ③（搜集资料困难）_____________________________________________________________. Meanwhile,④（语言运用困难）_________________________________________________________________________.⑤（求助并感谢）_____________________________________________________________. I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off.
I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
Task 3下面是一位同学的习作，根据所学内容，找出文章中4个需要改进的句子：
假如你叫李华，在光明中学读书，在高中学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助，并想给班级的英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
Dear teacher,
My name is Li Hua. I wanna you to help me. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn.
Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. You should introduce us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily. In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students like me can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways of learning grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study if you can answer my question and follow my advice.
Yours,
LiHua
英语作文建议信
一、建议信?Letter?of?Advice? 建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同于投诉信，所以写信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下内容：首先说明写信的目的，其次，在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法（否则别人以为你在投诉，而不是在提建议），最后表达希望 采纳建议。 写作“三步走”：? 自我介绍、说明目的—>委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告—>礼貌地总结或期盼回 复? 二、书面表达之建议信 假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。 [写作内容] 1. 说明回信 的意图；2. 向小明提出建 议；3. 预祝小 明比赛成功。 参考词汇： 充分准备： 1.get well prepared 充分准备 2. a brief and concise language 简洁精练的语言 3. leave/make a deep impression on 给某人留下深刻的印象 Dear Xiaoming ，
... [参考范文] Dear Xiaoming, I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to prepare the English speech contest. Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it’s important to get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours， Li Hua 四、课后练习 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie， 收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习 和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1．词数120左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried.: I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. Yours, Jamie 参考范文： Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, keep optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
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开头： 自我介绍/问好 认识→问好(可问可不问) 最近好吗？ How are you doing? How are you these days? How do you do? How is it going? How is everything going? 好久不见 Long time no see. 收到你的来信真好! How nice to hear from you! 不认识→自我介绍 我是李华，育才学校学生会主席。 I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. 我来自高二一班的李华， I’m Li Hua from class one,senior two. 复述背景，表明目的 1．收到来信，得知你在中文学习上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 I have received your letter saying you have difficulty (in) learning Chinese so I’m writing to offer you some suggestions. 2．得知你在学习中文上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 Learning that you have trouble in learning Chinese,I’m writing to provide you with some advice. 3．你询问我一些在中文学习上的事情，我会尽量给你一些建议。 You have asked me for some advice on Chinese learning(how to learn Chinese well/how to
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建议信英语作文
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高中英语作文 建议信
写作 假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。 1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习； 2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文； 3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力； 4.每天坚持写日记。 注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数； 2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 Dear Wang Mei, I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
Dear Wang Mei, I’m very glad to have received your I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can/regularly after is known to all=As we all know (众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts ’s more,try to communicate with your classmates in English out of this way you can improve your listening and spoken English but not least,you should develop the habit of keeping a diary,which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt. I hope these suggestions will be of use to :where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成 /The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”. 一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。 Best wishes! Yours,
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英语建议信 建议信 建议信写作模板 Dear__, You have asked me for my advice about___(问题),and I will try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following measures___(建议的内容). I hope you will find these suggestions useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 假定你是李明，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点给他写封 建议信。 要点： 1.参加中文学习班 2.看中文书刊、电视 3.学唱中文歌曲 4.交中国朋友
Dear Steven, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practise with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try and write to me in Chinese next time. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Ming 建议信
高考英语作文之建议信
高考英语作文之应用文“建议信 1. 简介 建议信写作注意事项： 写作目的是针对某事向对方提出合理化的建议和忠告，使对方接受自己的想法、主张和建议，从而解决问题。（常用一般现在时和一般将来时） 写作风格： 简明扼要、目标明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强、有说服力，语言文雅，礼貌当先 写作内容： 写信的原因+建议的内容+这样建议的理由 2. 写作方法 首段 1 ）自我介绍/ 问好（不要啰嗦）一两个句子，概括性 2）复述背景，表明目的 主体 1 ）提出具体建议 2）篇幅允许的话，可适当先肯定对方优点，再提出建议 3）适当说明原因或这样做的好处 结尾 1 ）总结建议，注意礼貌 2 ）希望采纳/ 希望建议有用 3. 范文练习 假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven 向你咨询怎样学好中文，请根据下列要点给他写封建议信：1）参加中文学习班 2）看中文书刊，电视 3）学唱中文歌曲 4）交中国朋友
开头： 自我介绍/ 问好 认识→问好(可问可不问) 最近好吗？ How are you doing? How are you these days? How do you do? How is it going? How is everything going? 好久不见 Long time no see. 收到你的来信真好! How nice to hear from you! 不认识→自我介绍 我是李华，育才学校学生会主席。 I ' m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. 我来自高二一班的李华， I' m Li Hua from class one,senior two. 复述背景，表明目的 1．收到来信，得知你在中文学习上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 I have received your letter saying you have difficulty (in) learning Chinese so I ' m w offer you some suggestions. 2．得知你在学习中文上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 Learning that you have trouble in learning Chinese,I 'wrmiti ng to provide you with some advice. 3．你询问我一些在中文学习上的事情，我会尽量给你一些建议。 You have asked me for some advice on Chinese learning(how to learn Chinese well/how to have a good command of Chinese) and I will try to give you some suggestions.
精选高中英语作文--建议信
建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类 请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括： 1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一； 2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间； 3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。 注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂canteen Dear Principal, Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 作文范文： Dear Principal, Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows. Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. As far as I’m concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of al l, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time. I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you! 需注意的词汇、表达： 1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格 2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5.For one thing,……. For another,…… 6.make sb (not)do sth 7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8.The kinds of food are few. 表达食堂出现的问题： 9.The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them. 10.There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our needs. 11.It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12.The food in the canteen doesn’t taste good./ nice. The taste of food in the canteen isn’t good. 13.The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14.It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15.The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16.In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study. 17.It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议： 18.Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19.I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20.It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems. So it’s high time for us to take measures 21.To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs. 22.We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23.The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long. 24.As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more, different kinds of food should be provided. 25.Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. 建议模板： Dear …., I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累：
建议信英语作文模板
建议信英语作文模板 模板① Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Li Hua 模板② Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果，给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Li Hua 1、建议信写作注意事项 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
英语作文建议信
一、建议信 Letter of Advice 建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同于投诉信，所以写信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下内容：首先说明写信的目的，其次，在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法（否则别人以为你在投诉，而不是在提建议），最后表达希望 采纳建议。 写作“三步走”： 自我介绍、说明目的—>委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告—>礼貌地总结或期盼回 复 二、书面表达之建议信 三、典范文背诵 假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下 内容给他写一封建议信。 [写作内容] 1. 说明回信的意图； 2. 向小明提出建议； 3. 预祝小明比赛成功。 参考词汇：
充分准备：1.get well prepared 充分准备 2. a brief and concise language 简洁精练的语言 3. leave/make a deep impression on 给某人留下深刻的印象 Dear Xiaoming， ... [参考范文] Dear Xiaoming, I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to prepare the English speech contest. Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it’s important to get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be p anic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours， Li Hua 四、课后练习 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1．词数120左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried.: I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. Yours, Jamie
高考英语作文：建议信 - 万能模板
高考英语作文：建议信- 万能模板 道歉信 模板① Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
英语作文建议信
一、建议信?L e t t e r ?o f ?A d v i c e ? 建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同于投诉信，所以写信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下内容：首先说明写信的目的，其次，在肯定优点的基础上提出自己的建议或看法（否则别人以为你在投诉，而不是在提建议），最后表达希望 采纳建议。 写作“三步走”：? 自我介绍、说明目的—>委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告—>礼貌地总结或期盼回 复? 二、书面表达之建议信 三、典范文背诵 假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛，他对比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。 [写作内容] 1. 说明回信的意图； 2. 向小明提出建议； 3. 预祝小明比赛成功。 参考词 汇： 充分准备： well prepar ed 充分准备 2. a brief and concise language 简洁精练的语言 3. leave/make a deep impression on 给某人留下深刻的印象 Dear Xiaoming ， ...
[参考范文] Dear Xiaoming, I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to prepare the English speech contest. Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it’s important to get well prepared bef ore the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forg et your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours， Li Hua 四、课后练习 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1．词数120左右； 2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Hi Worried.: I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. Yours, Jamie 参考范文： Hi Worried, I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, keep optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.