高中英语作文--建议信

建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括：

1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一；

2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间；

3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。

注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇: 食堂canteen

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

Yours,

Li Hua

作文范文：

Dear Principal,

Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows.

Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste.

As far as I’m concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of al l, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time.

I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

需注意的词汇、表达：

1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)

price 价格

2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格

3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格

4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品

5.For one thing,……. For another,……

6.make sb (not)do sth

7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time

8.The kinds of food are few.

表达食堂出现的问题：

9.The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

10.There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our

needs.

11.It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon.

12.The food in the canteen doesn’t taste good./ nice.

The taste of food in the canteen isn’t good.

13.The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted

14.It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

15.The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food.

16.In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

17.It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon.

表达提出的建议：

18.Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems.

19.I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food.

20.It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

So it’s high time for us to take measures

21.To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the

present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

22.We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price.

23.The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

24.As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,

different kinds of food should be provided.

25.Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

建议模板：

Dear ….,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

建议句型积累：