小学英语写作(人物介绍)范文(共15篇)
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Happy family
Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy. Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her “Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname “Small Head Father”. I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname “Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student. We are happy every day!
I l ove m y f amily
Here is a photo of my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and me.My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s in Beijing now. He goes there by plane.I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材,一篇生动的作文。
这样的命题,我们可能面对几次,甚至几十次了。
但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧,了了数言,让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上,很值得我们去思考,我们能做到吗?
小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外,在结构上也有闪光之处。
先总说,将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍,后分说,把家人的工作、上班方式,爱好一一细说。
最后以一句话进行概括,起到点题的作用。
我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?
My best friend
My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair, two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class.
I like to read books, but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice cream. I like them, too. Her favourite food is fish. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary, too. They are cute. Do you have a best friend? Can you tell me something about your friend?
My English t eacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。
小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的单词或短语,以免写出一些错误句子。
写作时要注意语意连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰规范等。
My family
Hi, everyone! I’m C indy. I live in Hainan. I’m 13 years old. I am tall and thin. Now, let me tell you something about my family. There are seven members in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister, my brother and me. My grandparents like reading newspapers. They are very old. They are always happy. My father is a businessman. He works hard. He’s very tall but fat. He likes sleeping. He’s kind. My mother is a housewife. She looks young. She’s strict with us. My sister is a university student. She studies hard. My brother is in Grade Four. He is only 10 years old. He likes playing computer games. He’s a naughty boy. I love each person in my family. I love my sweet warm home.
My father's Day
My father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by subway. He teaches maths at school. His maths is very good! In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. After lunch, he reads newspapers. Then he goes home at 5:30. He eats dinner. Then he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at the living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00. My father works hard. I like my father very much!
My f avorite p eople
Who is your favorite person? My favorite person is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us every day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.
My favourite teacher
Hello, my name is Steven. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher. She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun. She sings songs and plays games with us. We are so happy.
And we learn English well. Our English are very good. So I like her very much. She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much. This is my favourite teacher. She is a good teacher. I like my English teacher very much. What about you? Do you have a good teacher, too?
My friend and I
I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150cm tall. I’m 148cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43kg and I’m 41kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger. Our favourite colour is white. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, w e play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!
【要领点评】
写法:这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。
既然写作范围是两个人物,就要笔墨均匀,两者缺一不可。
不能只描写朋友,也不能只叙述我。
这无形中增加了写作的难度。
解决这个难点的关键是:找出两个人几方面的异同。
可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况,再进行比较,通过比较突出每个人物的特点。
这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。
时态:像此类题目的作文,运用一般现在时即可。
句型:因为涉及两个人的比较,不要忘记使用比较级句型:A+be+比较级+than+B注意:在列举两个人的“外貌、喜好”等方面情况时,。