专业四级便条写作
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The writer only needs to express clearly the reason, motivation and the requirement for
writing.
Types of note 1.to form an invitation 2. A note of accepting of invitation 3. A note of declining of invitation 4. A note of canceling an appointment or arrangement 5. A note of condolence 6. A note accompanying a present 7. A note of regretting not seeing someone 8. A note of returning sth. borrowed 9. A note of asking after one’s health Notice 10. Inquiry 11. Complaint
1. Salutation 2.A. Sir; Gentleman; Dear President; Dear 3. Madame 4.B. Dear Mr. Wallash 5.C. Dear Mama; My dear Tom
2.Date
日期应写在右上角,差不多与收条人的称呼平齐,或高一行 e.g.
Yours, Mary
Note-writing: Invitation & Reply 1 Invitation Note of Invitation is used to invite someone to attend wedding, go on tours,
give lectures and participate in academic meetings abroad, to dinner, tea, film or
1.) May 6, 2005, May 6th,2005
2.) 6May, 2005
3) Jan. 1, 2003 \ Feb. 1\ March 9\
April 9\May 9\June 9\July 9\Aug.9\
Oct. 9\Nov. 9\Dec. 9
3.Body
便条的正文是便条的主体.
absence.
Module Date Dear ______,
We will ⑴活动的内容/事由.Would it be possible for you to meet us ⑵地点和时间? We would be very happy if you could be with us ⑶期待对方接受邀请.
two details 需要有所展开，
若只是提到 when and where 扣 1 分) 语言 4 分：严重错误 1 分，一个句子或同类错误扣 1 分，拼写等小错误两个扣 1 分，
最多扣 4 分。
语言得体性 1 分：总分在 8 分以上可考虑加此分。
评分总体要求：
语言没有错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求
30th. Do let me know if you are
interested.
Yours,
Tongtong
【1】 格式是否完整正确
（日期，称呼，署名各占 1 分。）
【2】 内容与语言：
是否完整：事情；邀请原因；简单介绍；
表达心情；告知相关细节 （4 分）
首句是否照抄？ （1 分）
yours,/ Yours, etc.
（若在一行，名字没写或人名 XX 等扣 1 分
格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，则扣 1 分。
凡不符合上述正确格式或要求均扣 1 分
内容 3 分: organizing + interest + two details (少一点扣 1 分，最多扣 3 分，
Yours, Mary April 22, 2007
Dear Michael,
I’m told you’re organizing a weekend excursion for the class. Is that true? Where are you going and for how long? I’m wondering if I could join you. As you know, I’m an outdoor person, and it would be great to spend a couple of days outdoors after we’ve taken the mid-tem exams. Looking forward to your early reply. Thanks. (60 words)
Sample: TEM-4 Writing (2005 年真题) SECTION B NOTE-WRITING [10 MIN] Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.
Kate
结束语措辞依情况而定
写给单位，团体或不认识的人：
Yours truly, Faithfully yours, Sincerely yours, 等 写给长辈或上级：
Yours respectfully, Yours gratefully, 等 写给熟人或朋友：
Yours, Yours ever, 等 写给亲人或密友：
c. Wish the invitation to be accepted;
Three points to accepting or declining an invitation a. Thanks for the invitation whether you accept it or not; b. If you accept the invitation, please confirm the time and place; c. If you decline the invitation, please give a reason and apologize for your
Tips 写之前 认真读题 思考便条涉及的内容，写便条者与收便条者的关系 确定语言的正式程度，选择称呼，结束语。 行文：注意语法 写之后 检查格式是否正确，内容完整性 检查字数
检查是否有语言错误
Components of note 1.Salutation 2. Date 3.Body 4. Complimentary close
Yours, Lovingly, Lovingly yours, Love， Your loving son, Your devoted friend,
Devotedly， 等
April 22, 2007 Dear Michael,
I’m told you’re organizing a weekend excursion for the class. Is that true? Where are you going and for how long? I’m wondering if I could join you. As you know, I’m an outdoor person, and it would be great to spend a couple of days outdoors after we’ve taken the mid-tem exams. Looking forward to your early reply. Thanks. (60 words)
Lingdian, a famous group pop band
in China. I once heard that they
were your favorite band. Therefore,
would you like to join me? The due
date will be on next Saturday, i.e. April
Yours faithfully,
幸。
Signature Useful Expressions & Sentence Patterns:
1. I am pleased to invite you to…我很高兴地邀请你…… 2. I would like to invite you to…我想邀请你…… 3. Is there any chance of your coming…? 你能来……吗？ 4. I was wondering if you could come… 不知你是否能来……？ 5. I would be very happy if you could come…如果你能来，我将感到十分荣
6. Ｉhope you’re not too busy to come. 我期待你在百忙中光临。 7. We sincerely/faithfully hope you can attend. 我们期待你的光临。
8. Please accept my invitation. 请接受我的邀请。 9. Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience. 是否参加，请早日告知。
Note 评分标准(10)
格式（2 分） 日期与称呼共 1 分；
结尾为 1 分（不论大小错误都扣 1 分）
正确称呼：位置在日期下一行左侧，
如：Dear Michael,(:)/ Michael, (:)
正确结尾：
如：Yours sincerely, / Sincerely yours,/ Truly
visiting. Please provide details on the purpose, time and place.
Three Points to a letter of invitation
a. Make the invitation;
b. Provide details on the purpose, time and place of the invitation;
便条总字数（包括 3 部分格式）要求在 50-60 字，少于 50 或多余 80 扣 1 分
该部分总分为 10 分，6 分为及格线。
Sample analysis
April 24th
Dear Mike,
I’m thrilled to tell you that I have
got two tickets to the conபைடு நூலகம்ert of
专四便条写作
What is note? Note is a kind of simple letter. It’s form is quite similar to that of a letter. It is made up of
date, salutation (heading), body, ending and signature. The content is usually concise.
有无语法错误？ （酌情扣 1-2 分）
【3】语言是否得体？
应根据与收条人的关系确定措辞，
分为正式与非正式。（1 分）
常见问题 缺少日期； 署名和结束语写在同一行； 结束语后用冒号或不加逗号； 署名用 xxx 或中文； 署名后加句号； 字数太多或太少； 内容不完整； 语言文体不得当 语法错误 切记细心、细节。
4. Complimentary Close
结束语应写在便条正文之后两三行,位置中偏右,应该有致敬的结束语和谦 称.谦称.
有尊卑亲疏之分,应该与收条人的称谓相配.在谦称敬语的后面应该加上逗 号.e.g
Sincerely yours,
Kate Yours truly,
Kate Yours very truly,
writing.
Types of note 1.to form an invitation 2. A note of accepting of invitation 3. A note of declining of invitation 4. A note of canceling an appointment or arrangement 5. A note of condolence 6. A note accompanying a present 7. A note of regretting not seeing someone 8. A note of returning sth. borrowed 9. A note of asking after one’s health Notice 10. Inquiry 11. Complaint
1. Salutation 2.A. Sir; Gentleman; Dear President; Dear 3. Madame 4.B. Dear Mr. Wallash 5.C. Dear Mama; My dear Tom
2.Date
日期应写在右上角,差不多与收条人的称呼平齐,或高一行 e.g.
Yours, Mary
Note-writing: Invitation & Reply 1 Invitation Note of Invitation is used to invite someone to attend wedding, go on tours,
give lectures and participate in academic meetings abroad, to dinner, tea, film or
1.) May 6, 2005, May 6th,2005
2.) 6May, 2005
3) Jan. 1, 2003 \ Feb. 1\ March 9\
April 9\May 9\June 9\July 9\Aug.9\
Oct. 9\Nov. 9\Dec. 9
3.Body
便条的正文是便条的主体.
absence.
Module Date Dear ______,
We will ⑴活动的内容/事由.Would it be possible for you to meet us ⑵地点和时间? We would be very happy if you could be with us ⑶期待对方接受邀请.
two details 需要有所展开，
若只是提到 when and where 扣 1 分) 语言 4 分：严重错误 1 分，一个句子或同类错误扣 1 分，拼写等小错误两个扣 1 分，
最多扣 4 分。
语言得体性 1 分：总分在 8 分以上可考虑加此分。
评分总体要求：
语言没有错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求
30th. Do let me know if you are
interested.
Yours,
Tongtong
【1】 格式是否完整正确
（日期，称呼，署名各占 1 分。）
【2】 内容与语言：
是否完整：事情；邀请原因；简单介绍；
表达心情；告知相关细节 （4 分）
首句是否照抄？ （1 分）
yours,/ Yours, etc.
（若在一行，名字没写或人名 XX 等扣 1 分
格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，则扣 1 分。
凡不符合上述正确格式或要求均扣 1 分
内容 3 分: organizing + interest + two details (少一点扣 1 分，最多扣 3 分，
Yours, Mary April 22, 2007
Dear Michael,
I’m told you’re organizing a weekend excursion for the class. Is that true? Where are you going and for how long? I’m wondering if I could join you. As you know, I’m an outdoor person, and it would be great to spend a couple of days outdoors after we’ve taken the mid-tem exams. Looking forward to your early reply. Thanks. (60 words)
Sample: TEM-4 Writing (2005 年真题) SECTION B NOTE-WRITING [10 MIN] Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.
Kate
结束语措辞依情况而定
写给单位，团体或不认识的人：
Yours truly, Faithfully yours, Sincerely yours, 等 写给长辈或上级：
Yours respectfully, Yours gratefully, 等 写给熟人或朋友：
Yours, Yours ever, 等 写给亲人或密友：
c. Wish the invitation to be accepted;
Three points to accepting or declining an invitation a. Thanks for the invitation whether you accept it or not; b. If you accept the invitation, please confirm the time and place; c. If you decline the invitation, please give a reason and apologize for your
Tips 写之前 认真读题 思考便条涉及的内容，写便条者与收便条者的关系 确定语言的正式程度，选择称呼，结束语。 行文：注意语法 写之后 检查格式是否正确，内容完整性 检查字数
检查是否有语言错误
Components of note 1.Salutation 2. Date 3.Body 4. Complimentary close
Yours, Lovingly, Lovingly yours, Love， Your loving son, Your devoted friend,
Devotedly， 等
April 22, 2007 Dear Michael,
I’m told you’re organizing a weekend excursion for the class. Is that true? Where are you going and for how long? I’m wondering if I could join you. As you know, I’m an outdoor person, and it would be great to spend a couple of days outdoors after we’ve taken the mid-tem exams. Looking forward to your early reply. Thanks. (60 words)
Lingdian, a famous group pop band
in China. I once heard that they
were your favorite band. Therefore,
would you like to join me? The due
date will be on next Saturday, i.e. April
Yours faithfully,
幸。
Signature Useful Expressions & Sentence Patterns:
1. I am pleased to invite you to…我很高兴地邀请你…… 2. I would like to invite you to…我想邀请你…… 3. Is there any chance of your coming…? 你能来……吗？ 4. I was wondering if you could come… 不知你是否能来……？ 5. I would be very happy if you could come…如果你能来，我将感到十分荣
6. Ｉhope you’re not too busy to come. 我期待你在百忙中光临。 7. We sincerely/faithfully hope you can attend. 我们期待你的光临。
8. Please accept my invitation. 请接受我的邀请。 9. Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience. 是否参加，请早日告知。
Note 评分标准(10)
格式（2 分） 日期与称呼共 1 分；
结尾为 1 分（不论大小错误都扣 1 分）
正确称呼：位置在日期下一行左侧，
如：Dear Michael,(:)/ Michael, (:)
正确结尾：
如：Yours sincerely, / Sincerely yours,/ Truly
visiting. Please provide details on the purpose, time and place.
Three Points to a letter of invitation
a. Make the invitation;
b. Provide details on the purpose, time and place of the invitation;
便条总字数（包括 3 部分格式）要求在 50-60 字，少于 50 或多余 80 扣 1 分
该部分总分为 10 分，6 分为及格线。
Sample analysis
April 24th
Dear Mike,
I’m thrilled to tell you that I have
got two tickets to the conபைடு நூலகம்ert of
专四便条写作
What is note? Note is a kind of simple letter. It’s form is quite similar to that of a letter. It is made up of
date, salutation (heading), body, ending and signature. The content is usually concise.
有无语法错误？ （酌情扣 1-2 分）
【3】语言是否得体？
应根据与收条人的关系确定措辞，
分为正式与非正式。（1 分）
常见问题 缺少日期； 署名和结束语写在同一行； 结束语后用冒号或不加逗号； 署名用 xxx 或中文； 署名后加句号； 字数太多或太少； 内容不完整； 语言文体不得当 语法错误 切记细心、细节。
4. Complimentary Close
结束语应写在便条正文之后两三行,位置中偏右,应该有致敬的结束语和谦 称.谦称.
有尊卑亲疏之分,应该与收条人的称谓相配.在谦称敬语的后面应该加上逗 号.e.g
Sincerely yours,
Kate Yours truly,
Kate Yours very truly,