2020届河北衡水新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习题(六)写作指导(含范文)

2020届河北衡水新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”

模拟练习（六）写作指导

一、概写原文

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Workaholics live for their work, often spending many extra hours at work, and often taking work home to complete. It's fine to live in a work-hard culture, but when work becomes the only reason for a person's existence above more important things ( such as family and friends),the issue becomes critical. That's the problem more and more Americans are faced with.

Americans are working more hours per week than in years past, and with many companies reducing employees, more and more workers are worried about their own jobs. Some studies show that as many as 40 percent of American workers don't even bother to take vacations, partly because of fears they may not have a job to come back to if they do. Besides, it is obvious that part of the matter is financial. More and more people begin to define success in terms of financial measures. The higher one's income is, the more respect one gets. Finally, people nowadays live and work in a connected environment--e-mails, instant messaging, fax machines, and cell phones-making it hard for them to truly get time away from their work, even when they are on holiday.

When work becomes the only reason for being--when it becomes the only thing people think about, the only thing that truly makes people happy, many Americans find that they are no longer close to their kids. Divorce rate jumps and serious stress-related health problems come up. Undoubtedly, it is time to do something.

To reduce workaholism, you must stay away from work once in a while. There are many ways to do that: Spend time with family and friends; Call home often to stay connected; Learn to say no to new assignments; Consider exercises to get your body back to a healthy shape; Fight the urge that everything you do must be perfect. It will take some effort, but for yourself and those you love, you really should make the effort. Have a try and you won't regret it.

二、概写步骤

第一步：通读理解全文，了解文章结构，明确各段落之间的逻辑关系，提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。

第二步：细读原文，划出各段的主题句与关键词，关键词以动词与名词为主，涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。

第三步：根据所划内容，结合理解，重新组织语言。可用中文概括出段落大意，然后用一句话翻译出来。

第四步：通读修改。修改是一个重要的环节，要考虑连接词的使用；高级词汇的替换；句式的多样；语法是否正确以及字数的多少。

第五步：用自信衡水体抄到试卷上，力求清楚美观。

三、分段概括

关键词句已在原文标出，结合理解，用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。

?许多美国人面临着成为工作狂的问题。

Numerous Americans are facing the problem of being a workaholic.

?原因包括担心失业、追求财务成功以及由于现代通讯而更方便进入工作场所。

Causes of it include fears about unemployment, pursuit of financial success and easy access to the workplace due to modern communication.

?如果他们只注重工作，就会出现像忽视家庭之类的问题。

If they only focus on work, problems like neglecting the family, may arise.

?因此，为了避免成为工作狂，你应该优先考虑家庭与健康、学会拒绝并记得没有一个人是完美的。

Therefore, to avoid becoming a workaholic, you should give a higher priority to family and health, learn to refuse, and remember no one is perfect.

四、下水范文

Numerous Americans are facing the problem of being a workaholic. Causes of it include fears about unemployment, pursuit of financial success and easy access to the workplace due to modern communication. If they only focus on work, problems like neglecting the family, may arise. Therefore, to avoid becoming a workaholic, you should give a higher priority to family and health, learn to refuse, and remember no one is perfect.【70字】

参考范文：

An increasing number of Americans are becoming workaholics. They work extra hours every week to maintain their jobs and become financially successful. Even on holiday, modern communication technologies always connect them to work. Consequently workaholism breaks up their families and damages their health. Luckily, there is a lot one can do to make time away from work though it takes some effort, but anyway it's worthwhile to have a try.【70字】