浙江新高考英语作文命题分析 PPT课件(共13张)

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浙江新高考作文续写公开课 ppt课件

• 6.After discovering ZhangKaiheng is after the same girl he likes, the fearless ZhaoYonghao _____________________________________. felt he must do something
• 2.Matilda put on the necklace and looked foward to the coming of the party. Her dream was ______________________________.
to become the queen of the party of the upper class
• 2.ShenMengyan is a lady-like girl when she__________i_s_in__t_h_e_c_la_s_s_r_o_o_m_________, but when ___in__th_e__d_o_r_m____ she will____b_e__to_t_a_l_ly_a__c_ra_z.y one
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Let's read and pay attention to the red part.
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.

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Old And New 人与自然（自然环境、遗产保护） Book4 Life In The Future（人与社会社会进步、人类文明） Traffic Jam（人与社会社会热点） Body Language And Non-verbal Communication（人与社会良好的人际关系和社会交往） reat Scientists（人与社会对社会有突出贡献的人物） A Trip Along The Three Gorges（人与自然自然环境、遗产保护） Unexplained Mysteries Of The Natural World（人与自然地球与宇宙奥秘探索） Book5 British And American English（人与自我语言学习的规律、方法） A Job Worth Doing（人与自我未来职业发展趋势、未来规划） Adventure In Literature And The Cinema（人与社会小说、文学名著） Carnival （人与社会不同民族文化习俗和传统节日） The Great Sports Personality （人与社会体育活动、体育精神） Animals In Danger.（人与自然）
➢ [2020年全国卷Ⅱ] 上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括： 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受
➢ [2020年全国卷Ⅲ] 假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括： 1. 剧情简介； 2. 指导内容； 3. 商定时间地点。
➢ [2023•1月浙江卷] 上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物” 活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动的过程； 2. 收获与感想。

浙江新高考英语作文命题分析 PPT课件(共13张)

读后续写型作文命题分析

二、对学生能力的要求与应用文不同，故事续写型文章除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。三、教师教学准备一阶段：增加故事型完形和阅读的赏析和段落背诵（情节设置衔接、动词的用法、动作的描述）适当增加新概念故事类文章的讲解和背诵二阶段：设定主题类继续段落的演练（加强词汇句型的准确熟练运用；加强情节衔接的顺畅）三阶段：故事续写类主题文章的大范围练习
读后续写型作文样题

The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （抢劫）！ Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he stared to run.

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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本华
谢谢！
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浙江新高考英语概要写作初探(整理稿)(黄岩中学杨谢友)【优质PPT】
16、自己选择的路、跪着也要把它走完。 17、一般情况下)不想三年以后的事，只想现在的事。现在有成就，以后才能更辉煌。
18、敢于向黑暗宣战的人，心里必须充满光明。 19、学习的关键--重复。
20、懦弱的人只会裹足不前，莽撞的人只能引为烧身，只有真正勇敢的人才能所向披靡。
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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇

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Why?
Why will I always remember the ‘lost and found’ Christmas gifts?
Title? The ‘lost and found’ Christmas Gifts
Write a symmary according to the key words.
sister thoughtmwonethhsaadgolost forever suddenly
I
rae_as_cpa_rp_f_e_a_r_e_dthiant oI’udr_'l_loi_svt_e'_s_.___at school
my mother my father
a _p_a_ir_o_f_s_t_o_c_ki_n_g_s_ that had _g_o_n_e__m_is_s_in_g____ from her closet months
பைடு நூலகம்
Para2.
Q:what did I expect the Christmas to be at first?
It was Christmas Eve of that year. A friend had kindly donated a Christmas tree, but there were no presents under it because we didn’t have the money to buy them. I went to bed that night with a heavy heart. I was expecting it to be the worst Christmas of my life. Instead, it turned out to be the best.

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To research whether such a “sixth sense” really exists, Robert Baker, …
there is really a sixth sense
Only if you ask many different questions will you acquire all the information.
20/40
• … there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
have, exist, S+V+P
changing
opinions， viewpoints
✓People have changing opinions toward dirt over time.
10/40
2.把短语变为单词 Cleaning away day dirt benefits health.
3.使用广义词(general words)代替详细词 (specific words)
She brought home several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek, and some textbooks.
描写某事物性质功用。即“对
√ 说明文
象+性质功用+利好”；针对某个问题提出处理方法或
exposition 方法。即“问题+处理方法”；
介绍某现象及其原因和结果。
√ 议论文
即“现象+原因+结果”
论点+论据(+结论)
argumentation
7/40

浙江高考英语应用文试题解析.ppt

How to combine the information?
On the theme of “First impression on China”, the competition is scheduled to be launched in the school auditorium at 6 p.m.on January 17th.
2020年1月浙江高考英语应用文试题解析
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Part One
试题解读
试题回顾
假如你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括： 1. 比赛时间； 2. 演讲话题； 3. 报名方式。注意： 1. 词数80左右 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
So if you’re interested, please sign up for it on the school website(file your application via Chinesecontest @)before January 15th. Tip3: 根据过往经历和生活经验，从读者视角出发，适当增加必要的细节。
judge of the English Speech Contest to be held next Friday in our auditorium/school hall.
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last about two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Doing things right or doing right things”. With your attendance and precious comments, it is bound to be a great success. It couldn't be better if you could offer us some valuable advice on learning English at the end of the activity.

浙江新高考概要写作(课堂PPT)

• Topic? Topic sentence? • Is the first sentence the topic sentence?
4
Paragraph 1
• Bad news sells. If it bleeds, it leads. No news is good news, and good news is no news. Those are the classic rules for the evening broadcasts and the morning papers. But now that information is being spread and monitored (监控) in different ways, researchers are discovering new rules. By tracking people's e-mails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther than disasters and sob stories.
6
Paragraph 2
• "The 'if it bleeds' rule works for mass media," says Jonah Berger, a scholar at the University of Pennsylvania. "They want your eyeballs and don't care how you're feeling. But when you share a story with your friends, you care a lot more how they react. You don't want them to think of you as a Debbie Downer."

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第五档（25-30 分）
• 完全完成试题规定的任务 • 覆盖所有内容要点 • 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 • 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，
但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 • 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑； • 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 从以上两种做法中选择一种
2. 以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区,学校，同学姓
写 1界名.作亮等定要观真：实点点班信（（息级量选。活分择否动及）则评，卷按考看试点作）弊行为认定。 23选..给列择理事：例由坚（（持选班并级择说活的服动动某机o案、r 尊初例重）衷、他预人期意或见效果）
1）审题、布局欠合理典型：两种观点都写了，却没例子，写成议论文；只有详细例子没观点，写成记叙文；例子和观点不搭，不能自圆其说。 2）内容要点之间无逻辑性，或漏了要点典型：将原因写在例子中，而应该亮观点时没有观点；亮观点，讲原因，举例子中三缺一，或三缺二。
3）例子千篇一律，且没有扣准题目不明白此处的“班级活动”特指“课外活动”，很多写的是上课讨论学科问题。
④评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及语汇用法均可接受。
⑤如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。
2015年书面表达题：
在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion “为题，用英语写一篇100-120 个词的短文。要求如下：

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件

Voice
Language use
02
03
04
01
Writing skills
Prompt Review
Analyze the specific instructions and requirements provided by the question
Title Review
Identify the main topic or concept of the composition
Reading is an effective way to improve English writing ability.
Summary
Candidates should read more English articles, especially classic and historical papers, to cultivate language sense and reading comprehension ability. At the same time, pay attention to analyzing the structure, sentence structure, and vocabulary of the article, and learn excellent expression methods.
01
Introduction Structure
Start with a clear introduction that hooks the reader's interest
02
Body Organization
Organize ideas into a logical flow that supports the main argument

浙江新高考概要写作PPT课件

• Topic? Topic sentence?
• Is the first sentence the topic sentence?
2019/12/31
.
4
Paragraph 1
• Bad news sells. If it bleeds, it leads. No news is good news, and good news is no news. Those are the classic rules for the evening broadcasts and the morning papers. But now that information is being spread and monitored (监控) in different ways, researchers are discovering new rules. By tracking people's e-mails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther than disasters and sob stories.
2019/12/31
.
6
Paragraph 2
• "The 'if it bleeds' rule works for mass media," says Jonah Berger, a scholar at the University of Pennsylvania. "They want your eyeballs and don't care how you're feeling. But when you share a story with your friends, you care a lot more how they react. You don't want them to think of you as a Debbie Downer."

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浙江省新高考英语应用文写作试题分析及范例点评2016年10月起，浙江省高考英语科目启用了新题型，其中写作分为两部分，第一部分为应用文写作，要求考生根据所给情景，写一篇80词左右的短文。

题型分析应用文属实用文体，有严格的语境限制，比如确定的时间、地点，确定的对象、范围，确定的行文目的等。

因此，应用文写作应力求主旨鲜明，格式正确，语言简练，语气因人因事而异。

书信、电子邮件是常见的应用文写作考查题型，主要包括询问信、致歉信、致谢信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信等。

写作时要注意格式正确，包含称呼语（salutation），正文（body），结束语（complimentary close），签名（signature）。

如在2016年10月的试卷中，应用文写作的要求是给未曾谋面的加拿大的住家（homestay）写一封咨询信（Letter of Inquiry）。

写作时遣词应尽量客气一些，行文应力求具有亲和力，切忌使用一些艰深的大词，也不宜使用一些结构过于杂糅的长句。

题目要求假定你是李华，下学期你将作为交换生（exchange student）去加拿大一所高中学习，要住在Lynn的家里。

请给Lynn写一封邮件，内容包括：介绍自己；1.2.告知到达时间；3.询问应做何准备。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

试题要点分析答题难度提示写作具体要求（一）内容要点1.介绍自己；2.告知到达时间；3.询问应做何准备。

（二）应用词汇和语法结构的情况1.使用与主题相关的词汇；2.能够使用恰当的语法结构。

（三）上下文的连贯性按照内容要点展开写作，使用恰当的连接词或表达法使文章内容连贯。

写作构思对于这封咨询邮件（（Letter of Inquiry），可采用以下步骤来构思：参考范文，Dear LynnI'm Li Hua， an exchange student from China. I'm happy to know that I'll be staying with your family in the next few months while I'm studying at the local high school. Thank you for having me！ I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place later that afternoon. I wonder if you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.Looking forward to seeing you！Best wishes，Li Hua习作点评学生习作1Dear Lynn，I'm Li Hua， an exchange student from China. Next term I'll study in a senior high school in Canada， during which I will live in your house.As a high school student， I do well in my schoolwork and get along well with others. After school， I am fond of reading books and watching films.I am scheduled to arrive just a week before my class begins. And since I have never been to Canada before， Ihave no idea what to prepare. It would be really kind of you to give me some advice.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua点评1这篇习作无论是内容、结构，还是语言、信件的格式，都非常好。

浙江卷高考英语书面表达续写公开课ppt完美课件(20页)

who
content Jane, Tom
when
one weekend in July
where what Why
in the forest Jane was lost they quarreled
main idea?
On weekend in July, Jane was lost in the forest because she had quarreled with Tom.
Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. But no more helicopters came and it was dark. _________________________________ It was daybreak when Jane woke up. _________________________________________

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