GRE考试作文笔记

一、是非判断类领域相关In the field of science, experts would achieve further conspicuous accomplishments than beginners do.Intherealmof arts, however, beginners’ contributions would dwarf those of experts. In addition to the aforementioned two cases, we would benefit from taking into consideration some scenarios, education, for example, in which the significance of beginners’ and experts’ contributions are rather conditional.不矛盾的：Not mutually exclusiveNot contradictoryA superficial conflict between A andB conceals a harmonious relationship between them.同意、反对Appreciate sthGive support to sthSympathize with sthDo not reserve any approval of sthFail to concede sthOppose to sthMy perspective diverges from sthReserve approval of sth二、因果类既要提到原因也要提到结果三、两种看法类两种都要提及题目同义改写Somepeoplebelievethatthe purpose of education is to free the mind and the spirit. Others believe that formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.The debate concerning education, including the role it should assume and consequence deriving from it, has never ceased and even gained further vigor in the current society. Some people emphasize the goal of education to liberate students’ soul; at the other side of this debate, however, lies other people’s aversion to education since it is believed to impede our thinking. Taking these two views into consideration, I argue that…四、敌方看法类要提到哪些用来反驳你的例子和理由。

我的看法我的看法敌方看法：敌方看法+敌方的理由+我对敌方的评价① 有些人会反对我，它们认为应该推翻不正义的法律。

② 他们会举出历史上的一系列以推翻不正义法律为目的的运动、起义或革命。

在他们看来，当法律威胁到人们的根本利益时就应该推翻。

[提到敌方反对我的具体理由（对应instruction 中的reasons and/or examples）]③ 但我认为，就算法律威胁到了我们的根本利益，也不代表我们应该推翻这些法律。

而面对不正义的法律，我们首先要确认它是对大多数人都不正义，并且要确认我们是有能力推翻它的。

[我的评价（我认为敌方看法是对的还是错的）]五、建议类让步观点1观点2Remainsuperficial流于肤浅，流于形式Studentswouldintuitivelydrawa link between parents’ absence and indifference.结果：consequence, result, outcome, effect, ramification好的结果: positive, desirable, beneficial, promising坏的结果: negative, undesirable, detrimental, deleterious眼下的结果: short-term consequence长远的结果: long-term consequence导致xx的结果: lead to/cause/result in/contribute to/bring about/trigger/generate/invite段落写法：思维模版+对主题句的解释解释：事理解释（推理过程）and/or 事例解释（紧扣事理（句子和词汇））狂用逻辑连接词Active Verbs:What we are exploring now are in a lot of cases new fields, which our ancestors barely know. Therefore it is reasonable to conclude that the past achievements do not have a decisive influence on our exploration.Argument还原推理过程+结合Instruction事实性信息假设性信息结论性信息四类：1.提出新证据用新证据正反评价原argument例子：To begin with, despite the current evidence provided by the author, we would need additional evidence to better evaluate the claim that the new jazz club would have the local market all to itself. A survey, for example, which investigates the local transportation condition, would be of great significance to help us assess the claim. If the survey reveals that the potential customers possess their own cars, or they have easy access to public transportation tools, then the author’s claim might be overly optimistic. On the contrary, if the survey shows that the local transportation condition is extremely limited, then we tend to believe the author’s claim, namely, the new jazz club would overshadow the old one in terms of distance and it would dominate the market.2.中间那层的假设是否成立，如果不成立的话就xxx例子：To begin with, the argument is unconvincing due to the questionable stated assumption that the new jazz club would have the local market all to itself.Firstly, the assumption would be invalidated if the potential customers possess private vehicles or have easy access to public transportation tools. In addition, the possibility that the old jazz club is equipped with other attractions, such as appealing music or agreeable environment, would also undermine the assumption.What is more, if it turns out that another more competitive jazz club is established in the near future, the proposed jazz club might lost its dominance.All of the previous scenarios would serve to weaken the author’s assumption concerning the potential market of the new jazz club, and once such an assumption is weakened, the conclusion of the argument is then open to doubt.3.问问题，给答案用答案来正反评价这个建议例子：To begin with, although the author passionately endorses theestablishment of a new jazz club, we should raise more questions to better evaluate the claim that new jazz club would have the local market all to itself. For instance, we need to know whether the potential customers possess their own cars or have easy access to public transportation tools. If it turns out that almost everyone ownsa car, or public transportation vehicles serve people well, then theauthor’s claim would be thrown into doubt. On the contrary, if the author provides a negative answer to the previous question, then we are inclined to believe that people would assign more preference to the new jazz club and it would thus occupy the local market.4.给其他的解释例子：Although the writer of this argument attributes the relatively better state in Leeville to its relaxed pace of local life, before we examine other possible explanations, it remains hasty to regard the writer’s explanation as the only reasonable one. For instance, it is likely that Leeville people’s healthier state springs from more agreeable natural environment, which exerts a direct impact on people’s physical conditions; it is of equal possibility that harmonious interpersonal relationship in Leeville could have also contributed to local people’s healthier mental conditions; what is more, we cannot denythe scenario in which Leeville people are born healthier. To put it in other words, genetic factors could have also given rise to the fact mentioned in the argument.Unless the author manages to rule out all the previous possibilities,I argue that his interpretation is one of the possible explanations, at best.句子整理中文1.许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已经满载乘客。