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However 一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子这里面however是没有实际意义的，就是表转折，但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块我不光唱歌，而且跳舞i not onle sing ,but also dance 改动一下not only do i sing,but also dance.倒装句！重要Important -------------- significant 所以so ------------therefore 建立Set -----------establish 越来越好 better and better---------- enhance好 good，great， wonderful ---------gorgeous ----------------- fabulous 不想要 unwanted-------------unsatisfactory 改变 change--------------transform 宾语从句，I think that...... -------------同位语从句 I have a thought that......I hear that......-------------- ------- It is reported that...... -----------There is a piece o f news that......我喜欢玩篮球，篮球有很多种特点，可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......师者，所以传道授业解惑也------teacher is a job who传道，who授业（and）who 解惑定语从句中先行词是主语时that不能省略；去掉and是因为这是定语从句，不是一个完整的句子，加上and就成了一个完整的句子后置定语穿着比基尼的女孩 a girl who wears a bikini变成a girls wearing a bikini正当什么时候as soon as-----------The moment......（注意The前面不加介词！）这女孩很漂亮 the girl is as beautiful as a red rose 像红玫瑰一样漂亮形容柔弱，as weak as water 形容壮 as strong as horse（马）形容健康 as fit as fiddle， fiddle是大提琴的意思表示某种现象的原因 because----- for the simple reason that 总是能够 can always-----双重否定 never fail to it isn‘------ it is not如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词；如果是递进关系，用―furthermore‖―what is more‖Since ，because ，for不要放在句首引导原因状语从句。

事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的According to（根据）……题目大意……I believe that（我认为）……你的观点 As far as we know（我们都知道）……题目大意……from my point of view (我认为)……你的观点First （首先）……second（其次）……at last (最后)…… (或)First （首先）……and then (然后)……in conclusion（最后，总之） As far as we know（我们都知道）……moreover（而且，此外）…… specially （特别是）……inconclusion（最后，总之）表并列：similarly同样的 / in the same way 以同样的方式表转折：however/but 但是表对比：not that …but that…不是…而是…/ one hand….on the other hand一方面…另一方面…/ unlike…与…不同/not so much….as…与其…不如…表目的：for the……….为了…表因果：therefore因此，所有/ so 所以表例证：for example 例如表假设：if 如果表让步：although…虽然……（注意：后不可接but！虽然但是不可这样连用）/of course 当然…/clearly…显然…all in all（总的来说）……by and large （总的来说）…… in my opinion（我认为）…… no matter how （不管怎样）…… on the whole（总的来说）相关过渡语1). 表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last…2). 表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…3). 表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless , otherwise…4). 表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus…5). 表示递进关系: besides, what‘s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of…6). 表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…7). 表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude Career or Family: which is more important?When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond dif ferently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are al ways other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living tim e will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their in come from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as ma ny people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Witho ut it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, the y can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical 事业还是家庭:哪个更重要?当被问及他们认为事业和家庭,人们总是有不同的反应。

一些人认为它更重要的追求自己的事业,虽然总是有其他的人认为家庭应该是一分之一的生命数量。

毫无任何问题,职业生涯中扮演着一个重要角色在我们的生活中。

在非常第一的地方,事业能给我们一个目标,生活在。

没有事业,我们大部分的生活肯定会浪费时间。

更重要的是,职业可以给我们提供一个意味着活在。

大多数人获得他们的收入从一个工作。

另一方面,家庭也是一个不可或缺的生活的一部分,因为很多人会承认。

家庭总是被视为一个地方我们可以逃避生活中的困难。

此外,我们可以获得一种归属感,从家庭。

没有它,人就会感到孤独和绝望。

在我看来,事业和家庭并不互相对立。

相反,它们可以提高对方,这样一个人的生活可以变得越来越好。

因此,这不是一个选择正确和错误之间,但一个理想的和实际之间最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。

讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为40％的同学认为1．不应该收门票2公园是公众休闲的地方3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1．应收门票，但票价不要太高2．支付园林工人工资3．购新花木注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：门票---entrance feeDear Editor．I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrancefee should be charged for parks．高考满分作文Dear editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?Yours truly,Li Hua长短句结合，在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了Asa creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet theprimary need o f my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way qu ite similar.主题句，一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事，To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the ex am（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the question s correctly.一二三原则，1，to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 2，to start with, next, in addition, finally 3，first and foremost, besides, last but not least 4，most important of all, moreover, finally短语优先，如I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. I want it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.多实少虚，原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。