中考英语书面表达知识点总结

中考英语书面表达知识点总结
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1．近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，整个国家的空气污染状况令人担忧。

请分析空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施，写一份英文的倡议书，呼吁大家保护环境，减少对空气的污染。

要点提示：
（1）我国空气污染的现象。

（至少写2点）
（2）空气污染产生的原因。

（至少写2点）
（3）减少空气污染的措施。

（至少写2点）
要求：
（1） 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear students ,
As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious
airpollution_____________________________________________________________________ _______
【答案】Dear students,
As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people's activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What's more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is becoming more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what's more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下整个国家的空气污染状况。

所提供的材料中列举了近年来，各大城市雾霾（haze）情况越来越严重，主要从空气污染的现象，原因，应对措施三个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时。

注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
We had better walk or take a bus. 我们最好步行或乘公共汽车。

这里had better表示最好，后面跟动词原形，take a bus表示乘公共汽车。

【高分句型二】
Protecting the environment is our duty. 保护环境是我们的职责。

这里Protecting the environment 做主语，用的是动词的ing形式。

2．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：
1.个人基本情况介绍
2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：
1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

此处go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。

而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。

上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。

因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；
2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。

注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony 【答案】The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony 【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。

信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。

【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。

然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。

接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。

【点睛】
文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。

整
篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。

除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

4．书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your feeling?
要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不
能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

5．书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；
3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。

The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in
class.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
【答案】 The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】
【详解】
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．书面表达
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

一直以来，同学们对作业持有不同的观点。

在你班的主题班会上，同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的讨论，请你根据提示和要求，并结合自己的实际经验，发表你的观点。

Yes No
Help us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；
Make us less interested in studying；...
Your opinion：
要求：
1．80词以上。

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

【答案】Dear students，
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析：审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文，讨论每日的作业到底是不是必要的。

首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点，其次结合自己的实际经验，发表自己的观点。

写作过程中要注意逻辑准确，注意正确使用连词，借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己的观点。

写作亮点：首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题，表达出自己的观点（认为作业是很必要的），可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样的句型。

其次，开始具体陈述观点，陈述的时候要适当使用实例，相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困难，review the knowledge复习知识，think over the difficulties来回思考难点，Little by little 一点一点地。

恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。

最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills
提高我们的技能，在这里也有一点亮点，就是说作业也要有变化性，要丰富多彩，体现了作者的深度思考，总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。

7．中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。

近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。

某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。

提示词语： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提示问题：● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。

学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。

句型：被动句型。

8．书面表达
根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。

In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文
In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.
【解析】
【详解】
试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。

食物等相关信息，要求考生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。

虽然字数要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。

熟悉英语的表达方式。

避免汉语式英语。

句型不要都用简单句。

另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。

写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。

对于城市A 的缺点，作者用了“Although”尽管一词轻轻带过。

对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可
以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of ”。

在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher”在说旅馆时用了“less comfortable ”，比较食物时，用了“as…as”等。

在说选择城市A的原因时，用了that引导的宾语从句。

本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。

9．中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。

读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。

请根据以下要点提示，以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗，并建议大家多读
书，读好书。

要点提示：
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。

3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：classic 经典作品；open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。

Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics.
【答案】Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.
These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book's writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816.She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.
【解析】
这是一篇图表，要求介绍自己读过的一本书。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一，三人称，一般现在时态和过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

10．中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。

假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求：1. 词数100左右，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Hello everyone,
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my pro blems and how I deal with them.
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.
I am not very tall and very common. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.
My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I enco urage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。

要求从个人外貌特点、与人沟通及学习压力等方面进行写作。

要包含表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。

短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：短文开头直奔主题：我想要谈谈我的烦恼及怎样处理他们；后面三段分别从外貌上的烦恼、与父母交流上的障碍、学习上的压力几方面分别谈论自己的烦恼及处理的方式，生动具体，条理分明。

文中的不定式作宾补、作定语、作宾语用得准确恰当；and连接的并列句、并列谓语等等都使短文显得简捷生动。

【考点定位】考查提纲类作文。