新东方六级满分作文点评

1对立观点型（第一段：一些人认为；第二段：另一些认为；第三段：你的看法。

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Should Firecrackers Be Banned
There has been much controversy(辩论) over setting off firecrackers during the past decades, with each party owning convincing evidences. Some hold the positive view. They contend that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also assert that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.
Yet that is not always the case. Others maintain the principal（主要的）points that firecrackers should be banned. They claim that firecrackers are responsible for（引起）fires, which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They argue that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources as well.
Personally, I am convinced that both sides have something right. Actually, firecrackers are supposed to be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both benefits and troubles. But we ought not to give up eating for fear of choking（因噎废食）. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and minimize their unhealthy influences, so that they can be of a benefit to us in a better way.
2、解决问题型（第一段：提出问题；第二段：分析问题（危害）；第
三段：解决问题。

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My View on Fake Commodities
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that fake commodities have been a grave problem with which we are confronted（面对）. Fake commodities flood the markets. Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous（多）to list: pirated editions（盗版）of books and films, food and drinks of poor quality and the like（类似的）.
Fake commodities are bound to generate severe consequences on condition that we keep turning a blind eye to them. First and foremost, they directly infringe upon（侵犯）consumers’ rights, wasting their money and threatening their health and even lives. Furthermore, the production and sale of fake goods cause great losses on the part of （就……而言）honest and lawful producers. Last but not least, the destruction of fake commodities means a grievous（严重的）waste of the nations’ resources.
In view of（鉴于）the seriousness of this problem, effective measures are supposed to be taken with all possible expedition（尽可能快地）. On no account can we see the situations become worse and worse. It is high time that the public enhanced their awareness of identifying and refusing sub-standard（不合标准的）commodities. With proper laws and an alert（警觉的）public, it will only be a matter of time for fake goods to become things of the past.
3、图表题（第一段：描述数据；第二段：说明原因；第三段：总结、建议、展望。

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Changes in the Ownership of Houses in China
As indicated in the chart, there have been dramatic changes（日新月异的变化）in the ownership of houses in China during the past decades. While the percentage of state-owned houses has declined from 70% in the 1950s to 20% in the 1990s, that of private houses has soared from 30% to 80% during the same period of time.
A substantial（大量的）number of factors could account for（解释）the significant changes（巨大的变化）in the chart, but the following are the most critical（决定性的）ones. First and foremost, thanks to the policy of reform and opening-up（改革开放）, the nation’s economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. Therefore people have more extra money to improve their housing. Furthermore, other relevant state policies and the boom of real estate industry（房地产业）provide citizens with more opportunities to choose their own dwelling places（住处）. Last but not least, people have attached greater importance to（加入）their quality of life. Thus more of them have purchased houses in their own favor.
In conclusion, the chart is a perfect index（标志）of China’s fast expanding economy and people’s rising standard of life. Although a series of（一系列）problems have arisen in the process, it is reasonable
for us to believe that they can be worked out（解决）in the near future with effective measures taken by both the government and the public.
笑傲总结：同义词优先级由低到高，考试直接选后面的词
1、认为：think=believe=suppose=hold=argue=emphasize=point out=be under the impression that=be convinced
that=claim=assume=maintain=assert=contend
2、the principal points=the cardinal points(用于“一些人坚持这样的主要观点”Some hold the principal points that…)
3、There is no doubt that…=There is no denying that…=Nobody can deny the fact that…=It goes without saying that…=Nobody could deny the fact that…(用于“不可否认的是…”一段开头)
4、严重的：serious =grave=severe=gross(用于“引起严重后果generate severe consequences”)
5、大量的:many=a lot of=all different kinds of=a variety of =a series of= a host of= a substantial number of= a multitude of
6、尽快：as soon as possible=with all possible expedition(用于“I will cordially （真诚地）appreciate it（it特殊用法）on condition that（不用if）you would be so kind as（固定搭配）to response to my letter with all possible expedition（不用as soon as possible）.经典写信结束语”)
7、It can be seen from the chart that…=As we can see from the
chart ,…=As the graph indicates,…=As can be seen from the chart,…=As
indicated by the chart,…(用于“从图表中我们可以看出”图表题首句) 8、增加：grow=rise=increase=expand(一般增
长)=jump=rocket=surge=roar（剧增）=climb（缓慢增长）
9、下降：fall=drop=decrease=decline
10、剧烈的：
sharp=marked=remarkable=signigicant=condiderable=drastic
=dramatic=conspicuous
11、轻微的：slight=gradually=modest=marginal
8、9、10、11搭配使用于图表题描述数据
12、首先：at first=firstly=in the first place=first and foremost
13、再者：besides=what’ s more=more importantly=in
addition=additionally=moreover=furthermore
14、最后：finally=in the end=at last=last but not least
12、13、14搭配使用
15、竭尽全力地：try one’s best to do sth.=make every effort to do sth.=spare mo efforts to do sth.=go all out to do sth.=lay oneself out to do sth.=go to great lengths to do sth.=do one’s utmost to do sth.
16、开阔视野:broaden one’s horizon=extend one’ vision=expand one’s mind=nurture one’s mind=enlarge one’s view
17、在我看来：in my opinion=as far as I know=from my point of view=as far as I am concerned=in the sight of me
18、占据：constitute=occupy=compose=make up=account for(用于图表
题“the percentage of…accounts for 50%”)
19、尽管：although=though=notwithstanding
20、然而:but=however=nevertheless=nonetheless
21、例如：for example=for instance=to illustrate
22、总而言之：in a word=in short=in brief=in conclusion=in summary=in general=all in all=on the whole=to put all into a nutshell。