上海高考英语优秀作文汇编(15-18分左右)

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In contrast to the commonly held belief that the most efficient way of learning English is to reside in an English-speaking country for a certain period of time, I maintain that the critical part lies in learners themselves rather than varied academic approaches or favorable environment.

Try to imagine a man living abroad but narrowly surviving with his broken English or body gestures merely. What if a man living in china usually attends English corners and is bound up in communicating with the foreigners he or she encountered in a restaurant or a pub? Just as Arthur Schopenhauer said ‘ordinary people merely think how they shall spend their time, a man of talent tries to use it.’ The more time we spend learning, the more skilled we’ll be; the more diligent we are, the better consequence we’ll gain. Our future is up to ourselves.

Of course, indispensable as our subjective efforts are, an immersive language learning environment may contribute to our improvement, bettering our command of English, but remember that, what really matters is ourselves. (181 words)

话题归属：英语学习，学习方法

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Dear anyone concerned,

I’m thrilled to know that our school is recruiting volunteers for the open day, and there’s nothing I want to do other than sign up for the society activities representative.

As the leader of school’s art society, I’m sure I can call on my society members to join in the activity, showing how diverse, meaningful and high-quality the extracurricular courses in our school are. With our extraordinary painting and curving skills presented, chances are that the parents coming to visit will have more knowledge of our comprehensive abilities rather than just the academic performance.

I intend to draw a painting on the scene, giving the visitors immersive experience and teaching anyone who would like to test the water as well. Of course, I’ll graphically give a picture of the usual class and the achievement we’ve got.

I’m looking forward to your favorable reply and wish you a lovely day.

话题分类：志愿者；学校生活

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I'm more than thrilled to know a new activity room will be set up in our school, in hope of students’ better involvement , I'd like to put forward my humble opinions.

If I were the school board, I would favor the design both economical and effective, consequently, several desks, chairs and yoga mats may be a good option, which are convenient tools for students to do whatever they like. From my perspective, DIY projects can not only bring happiness and a sense of fulfillment to students but also enable us to acquire some knowledge out of school curriculum.

Serving as a platform where students exchange what they recently have been exposed to , this