高中英语作文写作教学课件公开课 观点议论[优质ppt]

• 使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下 Ø）However, …of them hold a different view. / …of
them hold the opposite opinion.
Ø People who are against it don’t think so.
Ø Different from those…., …people think ….
supporting idea 1 supporting idea 2 supporting idea 1
supporting idea 2
Conclusion paragraph: 结尾
相关词汇短语默写
1. introduction(topic):
高三学生 s_e_n_i_o_r_3__st_u_d_e_n_t_s 春游 __g_o__sp__ri_n_g__o_u_ti_ng 讨论 ___d_is_c_u_s_s_io_n_____
RReeaassoonn11：：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空 气，有利健康
They think it good to do sth…… sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do
sth…… 翻译:They think it good for their health to be close
写作基本步骤
1.仔细审题，列举大纲。 2．围绕要点，写出句子。 3. 添加过度，确保连贯。 4. 先求正确，再求灵活。 5. 认真眷写，卷面整洁。
现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不 要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一 篇短文。
６５％的学生认为
３５％的学生认为
１．应该春游
_m__y__o_p_in_i_o_n_…___
主题句的内容要明确，语言简洁，开门见山， 句式力争多样性
1. introduction(topic):
Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.
2. body(supporting ideas):
高考临近 w_i_t_h_c_o_l_le_g_e_e_n_t_r_a_n_c_e_e_x_a_m__in__a_ti_o_n_d__ra_w__in__g_n_e_a_r__ 接触自然_b_e__c_lo_s_e_t_o__n_a_tu_r_e__ 精神放松 _r_e_la_x__th_e_m__s_e_lv_e_s_ 呼吸新鲜空气 _b_re_a_t_h_e__so_m__e_f_r_e_s_h air 大脑休息 _r_e_s_t _th__ei_r_b_r_a_i_n_s____ 没心情玩_（__d_o_n_’_t_f_ee_l_l_i_k_e_g_o_i_n_g_） 耽误学习_(_w_a_s_te__th__e_t_im__e_)_____
towards … Ø People have different opinions on this problem. Ø People take different views on this question.
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Ppooiinntt11:： 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）
In the third place… • Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
• RReaesaosno1n：1:高考临近，没有心情玩
• 翻译: They say that with college entrance
examination drawing near, they don’t feel like going anywhere.
翻译：Most students, about 65%, are in favor of the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.
表达观点一句型： Ø …of them hold the opinion that …. Ø …of them are in favor of the idea that… Ø People who are for the idea think …
• They say/believe/hold the opinion… that….
•RReaesaoson2n：2:春游耽误学习
翻译:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can’t afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies.
In the third place… • Finally/ Last but not least/, ....
Reason2：2:活动是精神放松/大脑休息/有利于学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接） 翻译: What’s more，they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.
Ø On the other hand, … some people are against the idea.
表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, ....
Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place…
１．不应该春游
２．接触大自然，呼吸新 ２．高观考临点近类，没有心情玩
鲜空气，有利健康
作文写作
３．活动是精神放松，大 ３．春游耽误学习
脑休息，有利于学习
The outline of the writing
Introduction paragraph: 开头引出话题
Body
Point 1… Point 2…
巧用过渡句，过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系
Ø Opinions are divided on this question. Ø Different people hold different / opposite opinions. Ø People have taken/adopted different attitudes
• 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In
addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…
Conclusion paragraph: 结尾
结尾常用句型 Ø In my opinion/Personally, … Ø As far as I’m concerned, … ØIn short/ in brief/ in a word, …
to nature and breathe some fresh air
表列举说明的关联词: • Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, ....
Secondly… Thirdly… • In the first place… In the second place…
英语作文写作
观点类
Whatmakes
agoodessay?
基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句： 感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，名人名言。
• Eg: They think it will do good to their students.
• Ppooiinnt 2:：３５％的学生认为不应该 春
•
游（亮明观点）
• 翻译: On the other hand, about 35% students are
against the idea.
• 表示递进、强调的关联词 • .... Besides/Apart from/ What’s more/ In
addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse…
CConocnlculsuiosnion: 小段总结，进一步亮明 观点，前后呼应。
Homework:
Finish and improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.
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