高考英语作文专题复习：漫画作文 精品优选公开课件

Group work （1）:
• Appreciate some wonderful sentences学科网
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A mother whose child surfs the Internet frequently is asking the professor how to keep her child away from the PC monitor.---姜娜娜
一篇好的英语漫画作文
仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写
不论在生活中还是网络里，人人都会有朋友。如果没有朋友情，生活就不会有悦耳的和音，就如死水一滩；友情无处不在，它伴随你左右，萦绕在你身边，和你共渡一生。 友情，是雨季中的一把小伞，它撑起了一个晴朗的天空；友情，是风雪之夜的一杯淡茶，它能将寒意驱走，带来温暖；友情，是迷途中的一盏灯，它在你迷失时给你方向……人生漫漫，若能拥有一段地久天长的相知相伴的友情，生命亦无憾。 大千世界，红尘滚滚，一年又一年的风风雨雨，几许微笑，几丝忧伤，随着时间小河的流淌，许多人和事都付之东流去。但有一种人却随着时间的推移，你与ta的交往，如陈年酒香，沁人心肺。你与ta的友情是世上最珍贵的情感。这种友情是一种最纯洁、最高尚、最朴素、最平凡的感情。也是最浪漫、最动人、最坚实、最永恒的情感。 小时候，友情是简单的一个玩伴，是一份哭哭笑笑的天真无邪。儿时的友情是真切的我和你，可以肆无忌惮的吵架，互相赌气撅起的嘴，片刻之后又携手言欢。那时的友情是那一块小小的糖，甜甜的味道，永远留在了儿时的记忆里，无论何时回味起，都是美滋滋的。 长大后，友情是一樽透明的酒杯，举杯邀明月时，对影成三人。失败或落寞时的酒话连篇，ta不会觉得你烦。友情，是伤心不必躲在一个角落悄悄地哭泣，ta默默地陪你，告诉你在哪里跌倒的就在哪里爬起来。于是，成长里有我们友情地久天长的足迹。
Let’s practise!
下图描绘的是许多孩 子的苦恼，请你根据 对下面这幅漫画的理 解用英语写一篇短文， 描述一下造成这种现 象的原因并发表你的 看法。
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布局谋篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning (purposes / reasons) 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
2010年江苏省高考说明：writing
示例１
文字材料类
示例２
漫画类
2010届 高考书面表达指导
漫画作文 (议论类)
Tasks:
1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing
much expectation on children. They want to equip their children with all kinds of knowledge and skills so that children can be well prepared for the challenges of the uture.
Part 3 Give your opinions
I think/believe that As far as I’m concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,
should It is better/advisable to… I consider it necessary…
Assignments
下图描绘的是目前许 多孩子的苦恼，请你 根据对下面这幅漫画 的理解用英语写一篇 短文，描述一下造成 这种现象的原因并发 表你的看法。
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The picture shows the helplessness facing many children in China. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. He is forced to put aside what he really likes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.
their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear.
certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”!
From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to inspect the Internet and ban unhealthy websites. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to distinguish good from bad. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.
How to write a good essay?
1. 观察漫画 2. 解析意图
3. 布局谋篇
观察漫画 What should we pay attention to?
观察漫画
夸张
The underwear is a funny way to show how desperate parents get to prevent children from seeing things they should not!
Part 1 Describe the picture
The picture is talking about/shows… The picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing… The picture above is about … …Let’s look at the picture above/first.
So many parents are asking for some good suggestions that can be effective to protect their children from being drunken with the Internet.---孙进
Her child is hooked on playing computer games and surfing the Internet.---刘娜娜学科网 zxxk
The parents use all the methods that they could think of, but those don’t work.-----徐谦
It’s no use limiting children’s time because it doesn’t solve the key to the problem.---郭义
It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it shows vividly how desperate parents get when faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!
Part 2 Interpret the picture
It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
Only in this way can….
Something to add：
保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时
注意“三写”： 拼写，书写，大小写
Group work （2）:
2. Polish up an essay
My version: For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep
This is a satirical cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon facing many children. As we all know, many families have only one child, so parents put
Let’s practise!
Discuss with your partner and make a list of the key points
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解析意图
1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度
praise or criticize？
解析意图
２. 联系生活，明晰主旨
Imagination!
解析意图
注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！！！