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During the snowstorm
What did she see? snow, saw many people… What happened?
lost …, walked slowly
P2-P3
Where was she?
at Millie’s home
After the snowstorm
P4
What did she hear? the noise of traffic What did she see? people tried to clear the snow
Para1. Introduction An earthquake/A flood/A snowstorm/…hit… Para2. Main body I was doing…when… …because of the heavy rain/snow… We could only hear/see… …kept falling. Suddenly,… …had to walk slowly /pull oneself through… Para3. Conclusion …was really terrible.
Where did it happen?
duction
Beijing
P1
When did it happen? on Friday, 5 January Where was Sandy? in the classroom What did she do?shared, walked to bus stop What did she hear?
Suddenly, a strong wind came from behind. I lost my __________in the wind and I nearly umbrella _____over. We had to walk slowly in the deep fell snow. When we arrived at the bus stop, we waiting saw many people _________ there. At last, we got on a bus to Millie's home. I stayed at Millie's home that night. I heard the noise of _______ the next morning. People traffic were trying to _______ the snow from the clear streets.
I was doing my homework in the classroom when __________ Mr Wu came in and told us to_____________. My go home early parents could not get home that night because of the heavy snow, so Millie asked me to go to her home. I _______an umbrella with her while we shared were walking to the bus stop. The weather was really terrible. The snow kept falling around us. ______ We could hear the _______ blowing. wind
Task Writing about a natural disaster
choose the topic 定题
choose materials 选材
make the list 列提纲
start to write 着手写作
A snowstorm
Notes
When: Friday, 5 January What: snowstorm hit Beijing During the storm: I was doing my homework in the classroom when Mr Wu came in and told us to go home early. I shared an umbrella with Millie. The snowstorm was terrible. The snow kept falling. I could hear the wind blowing. I lost my umbrella in the wind. I nearly fell over. Many people were waiting at the bus shop. After the storm: I stayed at Millie’s home. I heard the noise of the traffic the next morning. People were trying to clear the snow from the streets
Topic: Snowstorm hit Beijing Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2-3 Paragraph 4 Introduction During the snowstorm After the snowstorm
Complete the article
Snowstorm hit Beijing A snowstorm hit Beijing on Friday, 5 January.
Useful expressions
These words are useful:
First, Then, Next, Finally/At last
Tornado (龙卷风)
On April 21st, a tornado hit Hengyang in Introduction(where,when) Hunan. At the beginning, it became dark. Everyone could hear a strange noise. They were very frightened. But nobody knew what was happening. During the tornadopeople heard A few minutes later, it came. First , thunders and saw lightning. Then, everything began to move. It rolled up paper and sticks, car and houses into the sky. It was very terrible. At last, it stopped suddenly. The great noise disappeared(消失). Everything was in a mess(混乱), After the tornado About7people died. Over 2400 houses fell down.
During the snowstorm
What did she see? snow, saw many people… What happened?
lost …, walked slowly
P2-P3
Where was she?
at Millie’s home
After the snowstorm
P4
What did she hear? the noise of traffic What did she see? people tried to clear the snow
Para1. Introduction An earthquake/A flood/A snowstorm/…hit… Para2. Main body I was doing…when… …because of the heavy rain/snow… We could only hear/see… …kept falling. Suddenly,… …had to walk slowly /pull oneself through… Para3. Conclusion …was really terrible.
Where did it happen?
duction
Beijing
P1
When did it happen? on Friday, 5 January Where was Sandy? in the classroom What did she do?shared, walked to bus stop What did she hear?
Suddenly, a strong wind came from behind. I lost my __________in the wind and I nearly umbrella _____over. We had to walk slowly in the deep fell snow. When we arrived at the bus stop, we waiting saw many people _________ there. At last, we got on a bus to Millie's home. I stayed at Millie's home that night. I heard the noise of _______ the next morning. People traffic were trying to _______ the snow from the clear streets.
I was doing my homework in the classroom when __________ Mr Wu came in and told us to_____________. My go home early parents could not get home that night because of the heavy snow, so Millie asked me to go to her home. I _______an umbrella with her while we shared were walking to the bus stop. The weather was really terrible. The snow kept falling around us. ______ We could hear the _______ blowing. wind
Task Writing about a natural disaster
choose the topic 定题
choose materials 选材
make the list 列提纲
start to write 着手写作
A snowstorm
Notes
When: Friday, 5 January What: snowstorm hit Beijing During the storm: I was doing my homework in the classroom when Mr Wu came in and told us to go home early. I shared an umbrella with Millie. The snowstorm was terrible. The snow kept falling. I could hear the wind blowing. I lost my umbrella in the wind. I nearly fell over. Many people were waiting at the bus shop. After the storm: I stayed at Millie’s home. I heard the noise of the traffic the next morning. People were trying to clear the snow from the streets
Topic: Snowstorm hit Beijing Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2-3 Paragraph 4 Introduction During the snowstorm After the snowstorm
Complete the article
Snowstorm hit Beijing A snowstorm hit Beijing on Friday, 5 January.
Useful expressions
These words are useful:
First, Then, Next, Finally/At last
Tornado (龙卷风)
On April 21st, a tornado hit Hengyang in Introduction(where,when) Hunan. At the beginning, it became dark. Everyone could hear a strange noise. They were very frightened. But nobody knew what was happening. During the tornadopeople heard A few minutes later, it came. First , thunders and saw lightning. Then, everything began to move. It rolled up paper and sticks, car and houses into the sky. It was very terrible. At last, it stopped suddenly. The great noise disappeared(消失). Everything was in a mess(混乱), After the tornado About7people died. Over 2400 houses fell down.