串句

8. Cindy found the movie disappointing Lee thought it was wonderful. Key: While Cindy found the movie disappointing, Lee thought it was wonderful. Cindy found the movie disappointing while Lee thought it was wonderful.
5.
I got up at 7 a.m., then I went to school. Key: I got up at 7 a.m., and then I went to school.
6.
7. The projector(放映机) broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed(发出 嘶声表示不满), others shouted for a refund. Key: When the projector broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed, and others shouted for a refund.
2.
A lot of men today get their hair styled, they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.
Key: A lot of men today get their hair styled, and they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.
北京市自1月1日启动铁路网上订票业务，“订
的多取的少”，现在上网人次已近四万，但半数以上
表示时间关系的复句
的订票者实际没有取票。
表示让步关系的复句
表示因果关系的复句
市民对网上能否购票半信半疑，很多人是“订一 张试试”，部分网民则是在闹着玩儿，实际并不需要
表示并列关系的分句
票。
英语则不然，如果将逗号用于完整的独 立句之间，便会产生串句。例: ( revise the run-ons) e. g. Mike decided to stop smoking, he didn’t want to die of lung cancer. 1. Mike decided to stop smoking, for he didn’t want to die of lung cancer. 2. Mike decided to stop smoking because he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.
1. The Difference between English and Chinese
in the Use of “comma”
汉语中，逗号可表示单句内部的停顿，也可以是 分句之间的停顿。下面的一段话中逗号反复连用， 直到意群完整才使用句号。 注：复句指由两个或两个以上意义紧密联系， 结构 相互独立的单句即分句组成的句子称为复句。组成复 句的单句叫分句。
Exercises: revise the run-ons 1. I wanted badly to cry, however I remained cold and silent. Key: I wanted badly to cry; however, I remained cold and silent. I wanted badly to cry. However, I remained cold and silent
3.
In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards passing them was not easy. Key: In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards, for passing them was not easy. In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards because passing them was not easy. In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards. Passing them was not easy.
注意： 我们往往会把一些副词或短语、词组错认为是连词 ，从而使用它们来连接两个完整的意思。这些词包 括： then, hence, therefore, however, as a result, consequently, what’s more, 当我们遇到这些词时，一定要记住它们并不是连词， 不能用来连接句子。这些词的前面要么是“；”， 要么是“.”，要么是加上一个连词如 “and”
Towards Writing
Common
Errors (I)
by Yuan Xueping
Run-on Sentences (串句) A run-on sentence incorrectly runs together two independent clauses without a conjunction or punctuation. This kind of error will confuse the reader, who will not be able to tell where one thought stops and the next begins. 串句是指错误地将两个独立的分句串在一 起，不用连词或标点符号连接。最常见的问题在 于直接用逗号“，”连接两个意思完整的句子。
The Christmas party was dull, Jane and I left at 9:30. Key: The Christmas party was dull, so Jane and I left at 9:30.
4.
People are worried about the future, they are especially concerned about the economy. Key: People are worried about the future, and they are especially concerned about the economy.
The End
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3. Mike decided to stop smoking, not wanting to die of lung cancer. 4. Mike decided to stop smoking; he didn’t want to die of lung cancer. 5. Mike decided to stop smoking. He didn’t want to die of lung cancer.