新课标全国2卷：语法填空+短文改错作文-解析

新课标全国2卷：语法填空+短文改错作文综合解析
第二节：(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

【新课标Ⅱ】
A 90-year-old has beenawarded “Woman Of The Year” for___61___(be) Britain’s oldest
full-timeemployee—still working 40 hours a week. Now Irene Astbury works from 9am t o 5pmdaily at the pet shop in Macclesfield, ___62___ she opened with her latehusband Les. Her years of hard work have ___63___(final) beenacknowledged after a customer nominated(提名) her to be Cheshire’s Woman Of The Year.
Picking up her “LifetimeAchievement” award, proud Irene___64___(declare) she had no
plans ___65___(retire)from her 36-year-old business. Irene said, “I don’t see any reason to give upwork.
I love coming here and seeing my family and all the friends I ___66___(make)over the years. I work not because I have to, ___67___ because I wantto.”
Granddaughter Gayle Parks, 31—whoworks alongside her in the family business—said it remained unknown as to whonominated Irene for the award. She said, “We don’t have any idea who putgrandma forward. When we got a call ___68___(say) she was short-listed,we thought it was ___69___ joke. But then we got an official letter andwe were blown away. We are so proud of her.
It’s ____70____(wonder).”
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
Since I was a kid, I’veconsidered different j ob I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted tobe a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studiedchemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. Theywere two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact thata sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the otheris that I wanted to help people in need.
知识点总结：_____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________第二节：书面表达(满分25分)72.假定你是校排球队队长李华。

请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：1. 比赛信息；2.赛前准备；3.表达期待。

注意:1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

知识点总结：_____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________
【语法填空答案】61. being 62. which 63. finally 64. declared 65. to retire 66. have made 67. but 68. saying 69. a 70. wonderful
【Mr. Liu解析】本文为一篇记叙文。

文章讲述了九十高龄的Irene作为英国最年长的全职员工，依然在宠物店做着朝九晚五的工作，没有退休的打算，她由此被评为“年度女士”。

【61题详解】考查非谓语动词。

Mr. Liu解析根据其前介词for可知，此处用动名词形式作宾语，故填being。

【62题详解】考查非限制性定语从句。

Mr. Liu解析分析句子结构可知，先行词为the pet shop，在非限制性定语从句中作opened一词的宾语，故用which。

【63题详解】考查副词用法。

Mr. Liu解析根据空格所处位置可知，此处应用副词形式作状语，修饰谓语动词have been acknowledged，意为“最终得到认可”，故填finally。

【64题详解】考查谓语动词。

Mr. Liu解析根据上下文可知，该句主语为Irene，此处为谓语成分，根据后文had以及said可知，用一般过去时态，故填declared。

【65题详解】考查不定式作定语。

Mr. Liu解析此处用to do sth作后置定语，用来修饰前面的名词plan，表示“……的计划”，故填toretire。

【66题详解】考查动词时态。

Mr. Liu解析根据该定语从句中的时间状语“over the years”可知，此处用现在完成时态，句意：我喜欢到这里来看看我的家人和我这些年来交到的朋友们。

故填have made。

【67题详解】考查并列连词。

Mr. Liu解析根据句意逻辑可知，此处为转折关系，句意：我工作不是因为我不得不做，而是因为我想做。

此处用but与前文not呼应，构成“不是……而是……”之意，故填but。

【68题详解】考查非谓语动词。

Mr. Liu解析前面已经有谓语动词call，故此处用非谓语动词形式，根据say与其逻辑主语call是主动关系，故填saying。

【69题详解】考查冠词用法。

Mr. Liu解析句意：我们还以为这是一个玩笑。

此处joke为泛指，故填a。

【70题详解】考查形容词作表语。

Mr. Liu解析根据句子结构可知，在系动词is之后用形容词形式作表语，故填wonderful。

【短文改错答案】
1.job→jobs；
2.co olly→cool；
3.five→fifth；
4.too→very/so；
5.chemistry后面加上in/at；
6.or→and；
7.They→There；8.amazing→amazed；9.去掉more；10.is→was；
【Mr. Liu解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。

文章讲述了作者从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。

【详解】1. 考查名词的数。

Mr. Liu解析“job（工作；职业）”为可数名词，用different（不同的）修饰时意思为不同种类的工作，应该用名词的复数形式。

故将job改为jobs。

2. 考查形容词的用法。

Mr. Liu解析句中的“looked（看起来）”为系动词，系动词后需用形容词作表语。

故将coolly改为cool。

3. 考查序数词。

Mr. Liu解析年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的，所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词，故将five改为fifth。

如果是Grade在前，则可以用基数词。

4. 考查副词。

Mr. Liu解析句意：在五年级的时候，因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师，所以我想变成一名老师。

“so much”在句中一般表达肯定意思，可与that连用表示“如此……以至于”。

而“too much”表太多，一般与to搭配，表达否定意思“太……以至于不能……”。

本句话表达肯定意思，故将too 改为very/so。

5. 考查介词。

Mr. Liu解析“在高中”需要在地点名词前加介词in或者at，故在high school前加in/at。

6. 考查连词。

Mr. Liu解析句意：在高中学化学的时候，我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。

“重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系，不是选择关系。

故将or改为and。

7. 考查there be句型。

Mr. Liu解析句意：这项决定有两个原因。

句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系，且后边句子中的one与theother是对这两个原因的解释，故此处要用there be句型。

故将they改为there。

8. 考查形容词用法。

Mr. Liu解析句意：病人看完医生就会感觉好很多，对此我感到惊奇。

amazed 意为“（使）大为惊奇（人）”，amazing意为“令人惊奇的（事物）”。

本句话中主语为I，表示“感到惊奇”，故将amazing改为amazed。

9. 考查形容词比较级。

Mr. Liu解析句中better为well（健康；身体好）的比较级形式，多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more加形容词或副词，即more不能与better连用。

故将more去掉。

10. 考查一般过去时。

Mr. Liu解析本篇文章的基础时态是一般过去时，且与最后一句并列的“one was that...”用的也是一般过去时，所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。

讲述当时做决定时的原因。

故将is改为was。

【Mr. Liu写作指导】
本题考查的是通知邮件的应用文写作，通知队友做赛前准备，参考结构如下：
第一段：在开头说明写信意图；
第二段：按照文章要点展开写作，例如比赛信息和赛前准备。

第三段：最后表达你的期待。

【好词好句】
upcoming 即将来临的
stadium 体育场
preparation 准备
inform sb. of sth. 告诉某人某事
prepare for 准备
is scheduled to 定于，被安排
come up with 提出
stick to 坚持
get in shape 恢复健康
attach great importance to 非常重视
devote oneself to doing 致力于做某事
1. You being a member of the team, proper preparation on your partwould be appreciated.
你是这个团队的一员，请做好适当的准备。

2. For starters, please come up with a workout schedule and stickto it so that you can get in shape soon.首先，请制定一个锻炼计划，并坚持下去，这样你就能很快恢复健康。

3. Since the school attaches great importance to this game, I hopewe can devote ourselves to becoming
a stronger team and beat our opponent.
因为学校高度重视这次比赛，我希望我们能够成为一个更强大的队伍，打败我们的对手。

【优秀范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Hua, captain of the school volleyball team. I’m writing to inform you of the upcoming volleyballgame that you should prepare for.
The game is scheduled tobe held in the school stadium next Sunday. You being a member of the team,proper preparation on your part would be appreciated. For starters, please comeup wi th a workout schedule and stick to it so that you can get in shape soon.Secondly, you should attend the team training sessions and meetings to studythe visiting team together with the teammates.
Since the schoolattaches great importance to this game, I hope we can devote ourselves tobecoming a stronger team and beat our opponent.
Sincerely,
Li Hua 【官方参考答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing to letyou know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will takeplace in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will playagainst the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, weshould get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to trainfor two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pmfrom Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellentplayer. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’stry hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua 【刘老师解析】【分析】今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。

本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。

【详解】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。

首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。

【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。

I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball matchnext month.宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目状语。

文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。