成都市棕北中学(桐梓林校区)书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案解析

成都市棕北中学(桐梓林校区)书面表达英语作文汇编中考英语专项训练含答案
解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。

你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。

请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。

提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提示问题：●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter，
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。

本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。

句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

2．（·广州市天河中学中考模拟）书面表达
请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。

提示：1. 出行方式
2. 不浪费纸、水、电等
3. 其他低碳生活的方式（补充一点）
4. 低碳生活的作用
注意：1．词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名等相关信息。

My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. _______________________
_________________________________________________________________
【答案】My low-carbon life
Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when I don't need them. What's more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.
I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.
Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文。

请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。

本文时态主要为一般现在时。

人称主要为第一人称。

认真阅读所给提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有
要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
我的低碳生活
低碳生活是一种生活方式。

节约我们周围所有的能源是一种习惯。

保护我们的环境很重要。

首先，我总是步行去上学，告诉父母步行去上班，而不要开车。

其次，当我不需要的时候，我会及时关掉水龙头、风扇、电视机和电灯，以节约用水和用电。

更重要的是，我们家里的水一直都在重复利用。

第三，我使用纸张的两面。

我认为充分利用纸张是件好事。

通过这样做，我们可以拯救许多树木。

最后，我会带着篮子购物而不使用塑料袋。

我相信如果我们能做这些事情，我们的生活会越来越好。

低碳，快乐生活。

我们采取行动吧。

【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。

注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。

2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。

3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。

4.连句成文，合理使用连词。

5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。

6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

3．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
A small thing
提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。

【答案】A small thing
It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.
This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。

本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。

It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。

最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me
that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小
事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。

文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。

【点睛】
认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。

必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。

写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。

4．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。

你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。

内容：1、健康饮食；
2、早睡早起，不熬夜；
3、参加运动，强身健体。

要求：
1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、80词左右；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ __
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【答案】Healthy habit
I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?
First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should ha ve at least eight hours’ sleep every night.
As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first
of all, moreover以及last but not least。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

5．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
A Special Day
提示：在每个人的生活中，总会有些特别的日子。

请根据所给题目“A Special Day”写一篇英语短
文，记叙你特别的一天。

要求：1、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。

2、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。

3、请将短文写在答题卡上，写在试题卷上无效。

【答案】A Special Day
Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise. My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. She was very happy to teach me. With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present for him.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如such a special day，give him a surprise，a lot，make a dish，want to do，with the help of，return home等。

而复杂并列结构My father is a great father, and he always gives me what I want.和Today is my father’s birthday, which is such a special day for me, so I want to give him a surprise./ I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father. / With the help of my mother, I am confident that I can make a good meal. /When my father returned home, he was very happy and praised me a lot.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富
有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．（·江西中考模拟）健康的体魄离不开好的生活习惯。

同样，对于学生来说优异成绩的取得也需要好的学习习惯。

请根据以下要点提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”为题写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法。

提示：1. 养成好的学习习惯的好处；2. 学生中不良学习习惯的表现；3. 对养成好的学习习惯的建议（至少提三条建议）。

要求：1. 内容必须包括以上提示要点可以，适当发挥；2. 90词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study w ell, but it′s not
easy.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
【答案】How to Develop Good Study Habits
Every student wants to study well, but it s not easy. Good study habits help us learn better and more quickly. However, not all students have developed good study habits. Some are too lazy to finish their homework on time. Some always want to play instead of studying. So how can we develop good study habits?
First, you should pay attention to the study time. The best time to study is when you aren't feeling sleepy. Second, find a comfortable place to study, but not too comfortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you'd better ask for help when having trouble studying.
Always remember these suggestions and follow them. Then you’ll find it not so hard to study well.【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达要求学生写出如何培养良好的学习习惯。

【详解】
考生要根据提示的3点进行发挥。

在内容方面，首先要写出好的学习习惯的好处，也就是为什么要培养好的学习习惯；其次是在学习中发现的不好的学习习惯；最后提出自己对养成好的学习习惯的建议；在语言方面，使用考生自己熟悉的句型，简洁无错；在规范方面，注意单词拼写，标点防护好的正确使用。

7．（·重庆一中中考模拟）书面表达。

“开心的是暑假如期而至；盼望的是我们独自旅行；烦恼的是父母不予支持。

我们，可以独自出游么？”这是本月我校英语“烦恼墙”上最令人关注的内容，并引发了大家的热烈讨论。

同为青少年的你觉得在没有父母的陪伴下出游可行吗？请你按要求写一篇英语作文。

参考要点：
1. 解读“烦恼墙”内容；
2. 陈述你的观点及理由；
3. 提出合理的相关建议。

要求：
1. 词数80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校名称。

Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.
______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?
Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is coming, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s d ifficult for them to accompany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our self-care capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important self-help knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题议论文。

【详解】
英语作文一般分为三部分：
第一部分：阐明论点。

解读“烦恼墙”内容并陈述自己的观点——青少年应该被允许独自旅行。

第二部分：主体部分。

分条逐一阐明理由并提出合理的相关建议。

第三部分：再次重申论点。

8．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。

你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。

以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。

请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste
of time; cause a lot of stress
要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。

开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
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Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer t hese classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.
Thank you!【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。

另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。

首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。

短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and i t’s not helpful for their study等。

9．（·天津中考模拟）作为中学生该怎么度过自己的闲暇时光？你会推荐什么样的放松方式？理由是什么？请根据以下表格中的信息写一篇文章。

参考词汇：增长见识increase one’s knowled ge 开阔视野open one’s mind
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Our society is developing fast. People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
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【答案】Our society is developing fast People are getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.
Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and watching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy for them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,they are not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge.
I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. What's more,we also do
after−class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇议论文。

以第三人称陈述观点，以第一人称提出思考。

主体时态是一般现在时。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

10．（·山东初三）
你知道年最受欢迎、最新潮的健身方式是什么吗？“Plogging”，一边捡垃圾，一边慢跑，正逐渐走进我们的生活。

拾荒（clean up trash）、慢跑（jog），不仅促进环境卫生，而且有益身体健康，可谓一举两得。

请结合自己的日常生活经历，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

内容包括：1、身体力行，保护环境的事例；坚持锻炼，增强体质的事例。

2、结合事例，谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式（plogging）的认识，以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者。

注意：1、可以围绕主题，根据要求，进行适当的发挥。

3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my community. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇是材料作文，要求结合自己的日常生活经历，谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式（plogging）的认识以及怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者。

【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以第一人称，谈谈自己对目前最环保的运动方式（plogging）的认识以及结合自己的日常生活经历，谈谈怎样从身边小事做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者；陈述现阶段的事情用一般现在时。

书写时要注意题干所给的提示材料，成文时要文句通顺，内容完整。

2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。

开篇紧扣主题，介绍自己最喜欢的运动是跑步；正文部分顺理成章的介绍plogging这种运动方式以及自己如何身体力行地做到锻炼、环保两不误；结尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.点题，总结全文。

文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点：
高分短语： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to；keep ……clean .
高分句型：
1.I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure.
2.Plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running .
3.Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river；
4.To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.
【点睛】
本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）；关注题
材的格式（记叙文），注意文章的篇章结构；书写时要紧扣主题，做到中心突出，内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。

11．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
86. 上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。

请根据以下提示点，写写你的经历和感受。

1. 在图书馆二楼，有一个大约四岁的小男孩，在大声喧哗、跑跳；
2. 他的妈妈没有阻止他，而是在一旁大声接打电话；
3. 你走过去，告诉他这样做是不对的；小男孩表示歉意然后悄悄回到座位。

4. 对此现象，你的感受和想法……
参考词汇： some uncivilized phenomena一些不文明现象
1. 字数80-100个；
2. 开头字数已给出，不计入总字数；
3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. When I was on the second floor, I found some uncivilized phenomena. I saw a boy who was about 4 years old shouting and running noisily. He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. What should I do then? I walked towards the lit tle boy and told him that it was wrong to do so. The boy said “sorry” and went back to his seat quietly.
In my point of view, this mother set a bad example for her child. It is important for her to tell his son some public rules. As long as everyone follows these rules, all of us will be in a civilized society.
【解析】
【详解】
上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。

请根据以下提示点，写写你的经历和感受。

这是一篇给材料作文。

本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. 学习中注意总结,
牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
12．（·山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来
介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”
是其中一个选题。

请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：
1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口
2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：
1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.
2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.
After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。

目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。

时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。

作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。

写作时，避免汉语式英语。

注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

13．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达
亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。

假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。

通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就
中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。

请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。