2016高一短文改错(含答案)

2016高一短文改错(含答案)
XXX out and thank you for your help with my recent project。

Your XXX to take the time to XXX.
XXX nal assistance。

XXX。

It is rare to find someone who is not only talented and knowledgeable。

but also kind and supportive。

You have been a great friend to me over the years。

and I feel lucky to have you in my life.
I look forward to our next opportunity to work together and catch up on all that has been happening in our lives。

Until then。

please accept my sincere thanks and warmest regards.
Best regards。

Your Name]
Hi。

my name is Jack and I'm a 17-year-old high school student from the UK。

I'm an active and honest boy who XXX the。

Our school day starts at 8 a.m。

and ends at 5:30 p.m。

Our classes are small。

with only 29 students。

and we have to move to
different classrooms for different XXX to the main subjects。

we can choose other XXX。

I'm busy preparing for my A-level exams。

If you're interested in being my pen friend。

please write and tell
me about yourself and your school life.
XXX wishes。

XXX
Staying fit is essential。

and one of the best ways to do so is
by paying n to what we eat and drink。

Five years ago。

I weighed 175 pounds。

XXX his advice。

and now I weigh 132 pounds and XXX。

Here are some tips for what we should eat and avoid.
it's important that we pay n to our diet and make XXX。

One way to do this is by XXX foods are essential for our health as they provide XXX。

we should choose brown rice over white rice and opt for whole-wheat bread instead of white bread。

Fast food。

such as sandwiches and hamburgers。

should also be avoided as much as possible。

Let's make an XXX.
Today。

I would like to discuss the XXX。

and our school has XXX initiative has taught us that safety should always be a top rity。

When engaging in physical activities。

XXX。

if XXX with others。

it is essential to remain calm and avoid any form of lence。

It is the XXX.
It was a Monday morning and as I walked into the classroom。

XXX at all over the weekend and so I assumed it would be an easy test。

However。

as I went through the paper。

I realized that I could XXX't want to fail the exam。

so I XXX。

I put my book under my desk。

opened it。

XXX。

XXX me in the act and I was left XXX for what I had done.
I am writing to report on a XXX。

XXX fourteen houses。

while seven other houses were so badly damaged that their owners had to leave them。

Moreover。

a number of people XXX。

the storm left over 200 people homeless.
One farmer。

Tony。

described the XXX for an hour。

He and his family were having dinner when they heard a loud noise。

Within minutes。

their house collapsed on top of them。

Although they managed to escape。

Tony's children were XXX.
Thankfully。

soldiers were on hand to help people evacuate the flooded area。

while the government provided food。

clothes。

XXX。

the community is XXX to support one another during this difficult time.
Thank you for your n to this matter.
Sincerely。

Your Name]
I am writing to express my interest in the summer camp that you advertised on the。

My name is Li Hua。

and I am a middle school student from China。

I understand that your camp es students from all over the world。

and I would love to be a part of it.
I have been studying English for over ten years。

and I am XXX。

I am eager to share my knowledge of China with students from other countries and to learn about their XXX.
I hope that you will consider my n to join your summer camp。

Thank you for your time。

and I look forward to hearing back from you soon.
Sincerely。

Li Hua
I am XXX player。

On my end。

my dream job is to XXX I have a strong desire to share my knowledge with my students and assist them in problem-XXX。

XXX to me。

and being around young students keeps me XXXXXX are you taking to realize your dream。

Also。

who is your favorite football player。

I eagerly await your response.
Best regards。

Li Hua
Dear XXX。

I am Li Hua from Class Two。

and I am writing to express
our XXX in our class。

We all think highly of your teaching style because you can always make the class XXX。

XXX。

which has
helped us learn a lot。

Your teaching has also boosted our confidence in learning English.
However。

some of us still need your assistance。

We would appreciate it if you could speak a little more slowly so that we can understand you better。

Furthermore。

we would like to invite you to participate in our after-school activities to give us the XXX.
Thank you for your hard work and n.
Best regards。

Li Hua
This morning。

XXX。

and I didn't notice the car XXX。

XXX hit the car and left a dirt mark on it。

Despite having classes to attend。

I left a note with my name and address to inform the driver of what had happened.
XXX。

XXX to our class。

who turned out to be the car owner。

He explainedXXX his experience。

XXX should be cherished.
XXX you well。

I wanted to share with you a arming story about a student named Tom who attends Texas University and was able to find his long-lost parents with the help of the。

Tom had XXX his parents who had left him 26 years ago when he was just a baby。

Using his knowledge of computers and orks。

he was able to find n about his birth and decided to send out a notice on the。

in hopes of finding his parents.
To his surprise。

just one day later。

Tom received a response from his father。

Stephen。

They XXX。

XXX them.
On XXX's Day。

Tom was finally able to meet his mother。

Silvia。

It was a XXX.
I find this story to be a testament to the power of technology and the。

It's amazing to think that someone can use their computer skills to find something as XXX.
XXX to your face。

Jack。

Take care.
Best regards。

Your Name]
I am XXX I am aware of your concerns。

but I want to assure you that Peking University is one of the top universities in China。

known for XXX studying here。

you will undoubtedly XXX。

This will be your first time living alone in a foreign country。

but there is no need to worry about life here。

The XXX business center of Beijing。

and most people are friendly towards foreigners。

If necessary。

I would be happy to help you find a suitable host family near the university.
I am XXX.
Sincerely。

Li Hua
XXX both human and animal life。

There are us types of rests across the globe。

some situated high up in the mountains while others are located near the sea。

Unfortunately。

over the past four decades。

humans have destroyed half of the world's rests。

XXX around fifty n people。

as well as ns of animals。

plants。

and insects。

This n results in the loss of homes and the disappearance
of countless species。

Once they are gone。

they will be lost forever。

The Amazon rest。

which has been around for roughly one hundred n years。

boasts XXX species than any other place on earth.
The first time I decided to leave home was when I was about
to graduate from high school。

I was having XXX。

it only took
me ten days away from home to start XXX。

Living on my own was a XXX。

decisive。

and creative。

Because I was on my own。

I had to carry out my duties without being told。

I had to be more XXX't there to give me their advice。

On the other hand。

I made my own future plans and rules for me to follow.
改写：As I neared the end of high school。

I found myself strugglingXXX。

I made the impulsive n to leave home。

However。

after just ten days on my own。

I began to XXX difficulties。

XXX instilled in me a greater sense of responsibility。

decisiveness。

XXX' guidance。

I had to be more us and self-XXX。

I took charge of my future and set my own goals and rules to follow.
六
原文：1.The sun was setting into the sea。

2.Carried has been a heavy bag。

3.Staying in bed all day is boring。

4.What color do you like。

5.At the party。

she wore a beautiful dress。

6.On the way home。

I saw a shooting star。

7.I don't know what helps with
a headache。

8.Calmly。

XXX。

it looks like it's going to rain。

10.Some schools have a dress code.
修改后：1.The sun was setting in the sea。

2.Has carried a heavy bag。

3.Staying in bed all day is boring。

4.Which color do you like。

5.She wore a beautiful dress at the party。

6.I saw a
shooting star on the way home。

8.She XXX。

it looks like it's going to rain。

10.Some schools XXX.
七
原文：1.XXX。

2.John said that he would come to the party。

and that his sister would come too。

3.The student was late for class。

4.I like to eat pizza。

but my XXX。

6.If I had more time。

I would learn how to play the guitar。

7.Learning a new language
is difficult。

8.If you see a spider。

it's best to leave it alone。

9.The dog barked at the mailman。

10.The color of the sky changes from blue to XXX.
修改后：1.He has a headache today。

2.John said he and his sister will come to the party。

3.The students were late for class。

4.I like pizza。

and my friend does too。

5.She is fluent in English。

6.If I have more time。

I will learn how to play the guitar。

7.Learning a new language can be challenging。

8.If you see a spider。

it's better to leave it alone。

9.A dog barked at the mailman。

10.The sky changes color from blue to XXX.
八
原文：1.XXX。

3.I want to teach English in Japan。

4.Knowledges of different cultures can help us understand each other better。

5.I am attracted to people who are kind and honest。

6.They always make me laugh。

7.I want to be fully prepared for the exam。

8.I like to read and write。

and also to draw。

9.Make
up your mind and choose a path。

10.Whom did you invite to the party?
修改后：1.XXX。

3.I want to teach English in Japan。

4.Knowledge of different cultures can help us understand each other better。

5.I am attracted to kind and honest people。

6.They always make me laugh。

7.I want to be fully prepared for the exam。

8.I enjoy reading。

writing。

and drawing。

9.Choose a path and make a n。

10.Who did you invite to the party?
九
原文：1.What do you do in your free time。

2.We went to the park to play frisbee。

3.The lively music made everyone dance。

4.So many people had fun at the carnival。

5.I had a XXX。

6.In the middle of the night。

we heard a strange noise。

7.That was the best movie I've ever seen。

8.I love XXX。

9.There are many chances to learn new things。

10.She is from California.
修改后：1.What activities do you enjoy in your free time。

2.We played frisbee in the park。

3.The lively music XXX heard a strange noise in the middle of the night。

7.That movie was better than any I've seen before。

8.I love to XXX to learn new things。

10.She is XXX.
文章一：
Usually。

I parked my car in the dirt lot and left for class。

One day。

I found a note on my windshield that said。

"Sorry for the damage。

please call me." When I called the number。

a man XXX my car while backing out of his parking spot。

He sent me a photo of the damage and offered to pay for the repairs。

I was XXX.
I usually parked my car in a dirt lot before class。

However。

one day。

I found an unexpected note on my windshield。

which read。

"Sorry for the damage。

please call me." After calling the number。

a man XXX my car while backing out of his parking spot。

He even sent me a photo of the damage and offered to pay for the repairs。

I XXX.
文章二：
With the top universities。

their ns have been sent out to students who had applied。

When I had applied。

I had XXX。

when I received the n。

I realized that there were both excitingly different ns available.
After the top universities sent out their n to applicants。

I was relieved to find that there were many ns available。

Initially。

I had XXX for me。

but the n I received showed that there were XXX.
文章三：
The n people who had lived in the city disappeared overnight。

and no one knew where they had gone。

When we arrived。

we
saw that everything was different。

The places we had known were now empty and quiet。

and we felt like we were the only ones left.
Overnight。

the n people who had lived in the city disappeared without a trace。

leaving us wondering where they had gone。

As we arrived。

we noticed that everything had changed。

The places we once knew were now empty and quiet。

making us feel as though we were the only ones left behind.。