我的图画大作文示例

绿色倾斜句：为可替换上一句的句子，防模板重复，第一次看只看黑色
以2011年爱心和时政热点”小悦悦事件”人们冷漠缺乏爱心来说明同样一篇模板的变通。

( 第一段，简单描述图画)I was profound ly shocked/moved by what I have seen in this picture /cartoon/drawing/ painting which is so symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive .As is apparently demonstrated in the drawing above，爱心像一盏明灯越在黑暗中越亮love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places./Shocked /moved as me, what I have seen in this picture which is so symbolic and instructive ,as is apparently demonstrated above,_________________________________（描述图画内容）.(The other picture informs us that_______________________用来描述图二，如果有图二).what a philosophic and thought-provoking/ compelling scene it is！（最后一句的可替换句However symbolic/ interesting /educational and instructive it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather thought-provoking/ compelling implications . / The picture , at the first glimpse , seems to be simple ,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.）（出题的哪幅图画不让人深思呢？）
（消极主题意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously/Evidently, the
drawing mirrors a current phenomenon about人们爱心缺乏people lack of love（主旨）is both inspiring and
thought-provoking . There’re numerous reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typical ones. For one
thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend
（积极主旨意义的第二段，原因段）Obviously/Evidently, the drawing mirrors a current phenomenon about爱心对社会的重要性the importance of love to society（主旨）is both inspiring and thought-provoking . There’re numerous reasons why it is and I would like to explore the most typically ones. For one thing ,with the miraculous economic better-off brought about by more than thirty-year of reform and opening up, people tend to put more attention on 爱心，最好的例证是陈光标love，the best example is Chen Guangbiao（主旨）.For the other ,there are increasing numbers people who are realizing爱心对和谐社会的重要性the importance of love to build up a harmonious society（主旨）is indispensable to us. Undoubtedly,奉献爱心dedication of love（主旨）to us is just like water to fish and wing to bird.
（第三段，措施段、总结段，一般用于消极意义主题）as far as I’m concerned/ personally ,lack爱心love（主旨词）will lead to the corruption of public moral and irredeemable financial losses ,and even building harmonious society will become an empty talk. There are some immediate measures that should be taken before it’s too late. On one hand, “eight honors and eight disgraces ”advanced by H u Jin t a o should be publicized so as to enhance our scenario of
traditional virtues . On the other hand ,it’s the responsibility of the government and
mass media to enhance people’s awareness of爱心love(主旨)as soon as possible ,and at the same time ,strengthening the regulations and Laws should be done.(替换句On the one hand, we should appeal to authorities that explicit laws were worked out （implemented）to
control/protect_____________________).Only when these above-mentioned steps are carried out can we succeed in solving the problem, and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous.
（最后一句替换句In brief, only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.）
( 第四段，备用段，即举例段、意义段、总结段，用于不适合写措施的题目，可代替第三段或第二段，一般用于积极意义主题)looking around, we can find similar
happenings are too numerous to list, the most persuasive example is George Soros.
His对东欧国家的爱心love of eastern European countries（主旨）has been pivotal in helping eastern European countries develop democratic societies and
market economies .If he hadn't done the good deed , eastern European countries would not get
the achievements now. we should learn from him so as to keep bright the key that opens the treasury of great achievement . Today, the sprit of奉献爱心dedication of love （主旨）can also broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization and even be conducive to the building-up a harmonious society/world. In addition , to a county, the international image can be elevated by the enhancement of （主旨）爱心意识love consciousness .Altogether/In summary/ To conclude, I firmly believe that爱心love（主旨）will be passed down from generation to generation，and make our world dimensional, colorful and vigorous.。