Unit4 写作课课件课件-高中英语人教版(2019)选择性必修第二册

第三步 句式升级 1.用非限制性定语从句改写句1 _O_n__J_u_l_y__7_，__m_y__p_a_r_e_n_t_s_a_n_d__I_t_o_o_k__a__b_u_s_t_o__L_e_s_h_a_n_，__S_ic_h_u__a_n_ _P_r_o_v_i_n_c_e，__w__h_i_ch__i_s _f_a_m_o_u_s__fo_r__th_e__G_i_a_n_t_S_t_o_n_e_B__u_d_d_h_a_._______ 2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3 _L_o_o_k_i_n_g__u_p_a_t__th_e__la_r_g_e__h_e_a_d_a_n_d__d_o_w__n_a_t_t_h_e__la_r_g_e_f_e_e_t_，__I_f_el_t_ _I_w__a_s_s_o_s_m__a_ll_. __________________________________________
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5.在黄昏时刻，我们返程。
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6.我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。
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[谋篇] 第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通 方式等。 第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当。 第三段：总结全文，发出邀请。
第二步 遣词造句 [核心词汇] 1.使十分惊讶 2.字面上；真正地 3.巨大的；非常严重的 4.顶峰；山峰 5.令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的 6.景色 7.让人惊叹 8.在黄昏
6.Wherever you go ， there are plenty of activities to choose from. 7.It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world. 8.We were all exhausted，but our trip to...was really unforgettable.
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I’m looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time. Yours， Li Hua
Thank you!
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9.令人愉快的；友好的 10.一定会
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写作实践
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom写信询问你的一次难忘的旅 游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：
1.旅游过程； 2.你的感受。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：大佛the Giant Stone Buddha
第一步 审题谋篇 [审题] 写作时应注意以下几点： 1.确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游 经历。 2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。 3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
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U4写作课课件
Period Six Writing—An email about a journey
Learning Aims(学习目标) 1.Learn how to write an email about a journey. 2.Practice writing one.(重点难点)
本单元的写作目标是写一篇关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次 出行、游览、参观等的记录。这类文章一般分为三部分：第一部 分介绍自己游览或参观的地点。第二部分写自己的游览经历，也 是文章的重点。第三部分往往以向朋友发出邀请来结束全文。在 介绍游览经历时，一般按游览的先后顺序写，由先而后依次记述 游览过程中所见到的景物。另外要选取自己印象最深刻的或最有 特色的景物，作较为详细的描写。最后可以加上自己的感受，做 到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。
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[连词成句] 1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方。 On July 7 ， my parents and I took a bus to Leshan ， Sichuan Province.Leshan is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha . 2.我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。 We were astonished to find that the Buddha is literally massive. 3.当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到自己是多 么渺小。 When I looked up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.
4.第二天，我们登上了峨眉山山顶，山上的美景让我们惊叹。 The next day，we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei.The awesome and
spectacular scenery on the mountain took our breath away.
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常用表达 1.I’d like to share one of the most fascinating experiences with you. 2.I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you. st week/month/year，I paid a visit to...，which is famous for... 4.It lies/is located/situated in... 5.The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath
第四步 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，
组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。
[参考范文] Dear Tom，
I’m glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I
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