高中英语写作方法指导-定语从句的写作
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5．我经常想起被陌生人的言语伤害和侮辱的时候，甚 至有时是来自熟悉的人。
I often think about the times ________________ and sometimes even from acquaintances.
答案 1．which should not be missed 2．without whose help 3．as is shown in the report 4．where you live 5．when I have felt hurt and insulted by rude remarks from strangers
Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学 Kate 的英 语短文，尽可能多地使用定语从句。
1．我有一个同学叫 Kate，她的妈妈是我以前的英语老 师。
2．Kate 是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她。 3．Kate 在此次口语竞赛中获得第一名，这使得她妈妈 很高兴。
4．新年就要到了，到时 Kate 会和她妈妈一起去香港。 5．众所周知，香港是一个购物天堂，Kate 打算在那里 买她需要的东西。 ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________
答案 1．wt
三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项 1．误用关系词 误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. 正：I live in Beijing, which is the capital of China. 误：I have a friend, who's name is Liu Mei. 正：I have a friend, whose name is Liu Mei.
3．有多余词 误：The film I saw it last night was really very good. 正：The film I saw last night was really very good. 误：Last week，I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood. 正：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood.
感谢使用，祝你金榜题名！
第三步：用句②充当定语从句，the foreigner 为先行词 指人，句②中的代词 he 指代 the foreigner 且在句子中作 主语，故用 who 或 that 作引导词。
The foreigner who/that visited our class yesterday is from Canada.
用适当的关系词填空 1．I've always longed for the days________ I will be able to be independent then. 2．I have a friend __________ father is an engineer. 3．They planted the trees__________ didn't need much water. 4．This is the best method ________ can be used against pollution.
2．句子残缺 误：There were many students took part in the English competition. 正：There were many students who took part in the English competition. 误：Those who in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands. 正：Those who are in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.
写作方法指导
方法四 定语从句的写作
一、写作中常用的几种定语从句 1．关系代词引导的定语从句 关系代词 who，whom，whose，that，which，as 引 导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是 which 和 as 引导 的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
The forigner who visited our school yesterday is from Canada.
示例：
第一步：写出两个简单句。
①The foreigner is from Canada.
②He visited our class yesterday.
第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：the
foreigner。
翰枫教育唯一官网： 唯一官方店铺： https:/// 电话：400-1691266
昨天来我们学校参观的那个外国人来自加拿大。
The result of the experiment was very good, which we hadn't expected.
我们没有想到实验的结果如此好。
2．关系副词引导的定语从句 关系副词引导的定语从句是指 when，where，why 引 导的定语从句。 We will be shown around the city: schools, museums, and some other places, where other visitors seldom go. 我们将要被带领参观这座城市：学校、博物馆和其他 一些游人很少去的地方。
答案 1．Those 后加 who 2．which→who(m) 3．去掉 it 4．where→which/that 5．it→which 或在 it 前加 and
综合演练提升 Ⅰ.完成句子 1．我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视 野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。 I would visit some museums ________________ to widen my horizons as well as enrich my knowledge.
单句改错 1．Those have work experience can find a job easily. ____________ 2．Some songs remind us of the people which we love. ____________ 3．This is the factory we visited it last year. ____________
答案 1．who 2.As 3.which 4.when 5.which/that
二、定语从句的写法
定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复
杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”：
第一步：写出两个简单句。 第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个 词在两个简单句中都有。 第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意 引导词的选择。
4．She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area.
____________ 5．As a child，Jack studied in a village school，it is named after his grandfather. ____________
4．Occasions are quite rare ________ I have the time to spend a day with my kids.
5．Remember that there is still one point ________ we must make clear at the conference tomorrow.
答案 I have a classmate called Kate, whose mother is my former English teacher. Kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and we all like her. Kate took the first place in the Speech Contest, which makes her mother happy. The New Year is coming, when Kate will go to Hong Kong together with her mother. As we all know, Hong Kong is a shopping paradise, where Kate intends to buy what she needs.
The air guality in the city, ________________， has improved over the past two months.
4．你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个 国际会议。
You know，my uncle Li Ming is going to the city ________________ to attend an international meeting.
3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句 His glasses got broken, without which he could see nothing clearly. 他的眼镜摔坏了，没有它他什么也看不清楚。
用适当的关系词填空 1．Those ________ do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society. 2．________ we all know，cleaning streets is one of the hardest work. 3．After graduating from college, I took some time off to go travelling, ________ turned out to be a wise decision.
2．我希望感谢史密斯教授，没有他的帮助，我永远不 会走这么远。
I wish to thank Professor Smith, ________________ I would never have got this far.
3．正如报告所显示的，在过去的两个月里，这个城市 的空气质量已有所改善。
4．定语从句与并列句的混淆 误：In fact，smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people's health. 正：In fact，smoking is a bad habit，which/and it does great harm to people's health. 误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，it didn't help. 正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，which/but it didn't help.
I often think about the times ________________ and sometimes even from acquaintances.
答案 1．which should not be missed 2．without whose help 3．as is shown in the report 4．where you live 5．when I have felt hurt and insulted by rude remarks from strangers
Ⅱ.请按以下内容要点写一篇有关你的同学 Kate 的英 语短文，尽可能多地使用定语从句。
1．我有一个同学叫 Kate，她的妈妈是我以前的英语老 师。
2．Kate 是一个容易相处的人，我们都喜欢她。 3．Kate 在此次口语竞赛中获得第一名，这使得她妈妈 很高兴。
4．新年就要到了，到时 Kate 会和她妈妈一起去香港。 5．众所周知，香港是一个购物天堂，Kate 打算在那里 买她需要的东西。 ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________
答案 1．wt
三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项 1．误用关系词 误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. 正：I live in Beijing, which is the capital of China. 误：I have a friend, who's name is Liu Mei. 正：I have a friend, whose name is Liu Mei.
3．有多余词 误：The film I saw it last night was really very good. 正：The film I saw last night was really very good. 误：Last week，I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood. 正：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood.
感谢使用，祝你金榜题名！
第三步：用句②充当定语从句，the foreigner 为先行词 指人，句②中的代词 he 指代 the foreigner 且在句子中作 主语，故用 who 或 that 作引导词。
The foreigner who/that visited our class yesterday is from Canada.
用适当的关系词填空 1．I've always longed for the days________ I will be able to be independent then. 2．I have a friend __________ father is an engineer. 3．They planted the trees__________ didn't need much water. 4．This is the best method ________ can be used against pollution.
2．句子残缺 误：There were many students took part in the English competition. 正：There were many students who took part in the English competition. 误：Those who in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands. 正：Those who are in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.
写作方法指导
方法四 定语从句的写作
一、写作中常用的几种定语从句 1．关系代词引导的定语从句 关系代词 who，whom，whose，that，which，as 引 导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是 which 和 as 引导 的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
The forigner who visited our school yesterday is from Canada.
示例：
第一步：写出两个简单句。
①The foreigner is from Canada.
②He visited our class yesterday.
第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：the
foreigner。
翰枫教育唯一官网： 唯一官方店铺： https:/// 电话：400-1691266
昨天来我们学校参观的那个外国人来自加拿大。
The result of the experiment was very good, which we hadn't expected.
我们没有想到实验的结果如此好。
2．关系副词引导的定语从句 关系副词引导的定语从句是指 when，where，why 引 导的定语从句。 We will be shown around the city: schools, museums, and some other places, where other visitors seldom go. 我们将要被带领参观这座城市：学校、博物馆和其他 一些游人很少去的地方。
答案 1．Those 后加 who 2．which→who(m) 3．去掉 it 4．where→which/that 5．it→which 或在 it 前加 and
综合演练提升 Ⅰ.完成句子 1．我总是会参观一些博物馆，这些博物馆对于拓宽视 野、丰富知识来说是不应错过的。 I would visit some museums ________________ to widen my horizons as well as enrich my knowledge.
单句改错 1．Those have work experience can find a job easily. ____________ 2．Some songs remind us of the people which we love. ____________ 3．This is the factory we visited it last year. ____________
答案 1．who 2.As 3.which 4.when 5.which/that
二、定语从句的写法
定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复
杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”：
第一步：写出两个简单句。 第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个 词在两个简单句中都有。 第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意 引导词的选择。
4．She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area.
____________ 5．As a child，Jack studied in a village school，it is named after his grandfather. ____________
4．Occasions are quite rare ________ I have the time to spend a day with my kids.
5．Remember that there is still one point ________ we must make clear at the conference tomorrow.
答案 I have a classmate called Kate, whose mother is my former English teacher. Kate is a girl who is easy to get along with and we all like her. Kate took the first place in the Speech Contest, which makes her mother happy. The New Year is coming, when Kate will go to Hong Kong together with her mother. As we all know, Hong Kong is a shopping paradise, where Kate intends to buy what she needs.
The air guality in the city, ________________， has improved over the past two months.
4．你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个 国际会议。
You know，my uncle Li Ming is going to the city ________________ to attend an international meeting.
3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句 His glasses got broken, without which he could see nothing clearly. 他的眼镜摔坏了，没有它他什么也看不清楚。
用适当的关系词填空 1．Those ________ do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society. 2．________ we all know，cleaning streets is one of the hardest work. 3．After graduating from college, I took some time off to go travelling, ________ turned out to be a wise decision.
2．我希望感谢史密斯教授，没有他的帮助，我永远不 会走这么远。
I wish to thank Professor Smith, ________________ I would never have got this far.
3．正如报告所显示的，在过去的两个月里，这个城市 的空气质量已有所改善。
4．定语从句与并列句的混淆 误：In fact，smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people's health. 正：In fact，smoking is a bad habit，which/and it does great harm to people's health. 误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，it didn't help. 正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，which/but it didn't help.