人教版英语七年级上册_Unit 7 单元作文讲解与训练(教师版)

Unit 7 Happy Birthday
如何写庆祝生日的文章
写作维度分析
本单元的主题是“庆祝生日”,主要围绕“生日准备”和“生日庆祝”两方面展开。

与此相关的写作有：
①写一封邮件或一份留言邀请朋友参加生日聚会；
②介绍自己或他人是如何庆祝生日的；
③介绍如何为自己或他人的生日做准备。

写作典例指导
假如你是Alice,在某论坛上看到网友们关于过生日的讨论，你也想参与。

请你根据下面
审体裁：应用文(网络帖子)
要点提示：
审时态：一般现在时
审要点：时间、食物、活动、感受
要求：1.必须包含所给提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.70词左右。

By:Alice on 09/067:50 PM
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思路导图：
佳作展示
By:Alice on 09/067:50 PM
①Hi,I am Alice.I'd like to share something about my birthday.
①My birthday is on16th November.My family always have a birthday party for me.①The party usually starts at 5 p.m.and some of my friends come to my party.My parents make birthday noodles for us.①Long noodles are a symbol of long life.①Then we sing the“Happy Birthday”song.Next,we enjoy the birthday cake and take photos.We also play games together and everyone has a good time at the party.
Do you have any good ideas for celebrating birthdays?
教材原句
I'd like to watch it grow with me.(教材P72 1b)
My birthday is on13th May.(教材P72 1b)
Long noodles are a symbol of long life.(教材P72 1b)
名师点评
本文结构清晰，要点齐全，内容丰富。

①句用would like to do sth.结构引出话题。

②运用介词on和at介绍生日派对的时间。

某日前用on,时刻前用at。

③句使用a symbol of long life介绍了长寿面的含义。

④中的Then和Next衔接上下文，表示先后顺序，使文章条理清晰。

写作迁移训练
假设你是李华，最近收到了英国笔友Michael的求助邮件，请你仔细阅读邮件后给Michael回一封邮件。

Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for help.
As you know, my mom’s birthday is next Friday. This year, I want her to have a different birthday party. But when and where will be the best choice(选择)for the party? Who should I invite?How can I make it special? There are so many things I should think about! I don’t know what to do now. Could you give me some advice?
I’m looking forward to(盼望)your reply.
Michael
要求：
1.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；
2.80词左右（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Michael,
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Li Hua
【写作提示】
1.主题：安排生日聚会
2.人称：第二人称
3.时态：一般现在时
4.要点：聚会的时间、地点、方式、活动等
5.写作思路：第一段阐明自己赞同Michael的观点，赞同为妈妈准备一次特别的生日聚
会，第二段详细给出自己的建议，第三段祝聚会时玩得开心。

【范文赏读】
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to know that you want to prepare a special birthday party for your mother.It’s a great idea!
Your mother’s birthday is on Friday.Why don’t you have the party on Friday evening at your home?You don’t go to school and your parents don’t go to work on Saturday.You can enjoy yourselves at the party. I think you can invite your grandparents and your aunt and uncle to the party.You can take a family photo.You can also make birthday noodles with eggs for your mother because long noodles mean long life in China.
Wish you have a good time next Friday!
Yours,
Li Hua （加粗部分为亮点词汇或句式）。